Swaron & Krisha FF: I Cannot Survive Without You (Note page 2)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's been five months since Kriya and Sharon's parents died in an unfortunate accident. Once sisters and best friends, both Kriya and Sharon have now become estranged. Despite Sharon's continuous efforts this remains the same. The only thing keeping Sharon sane is her best friend, Swayam.

Will Kriya and Sharon reunite or will Kriya's ignorance force Sharon to lead to path with drastic consequences?


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index
Character Sketch: Page 2
Chapter 1: Page 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cont ... plzzz.. its aswom concept...


p.s :- plzz update ur works..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsome start
cont soon
and pm me whn u updt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great and good concept... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kriya Rai Prakash:
She is older sister of Sharon and friend of Swayam. During her childhood she and Sharon were really close but now she has secluded herself from Sharon. Since the death of her parents she has barely interacted with anyone. Once a carefree and childish girl, she has now become a silent and reserved.
Sharon Rai Prakash:
She is younger sister of Kriya and best friend of Swayam. She used to be very close to Kriya but cannot understand the sudden change that has caused the distance between the two. She is in her final year of college, studying alongside Swayam. Like Swayam, she is also an excellent dancer and wants to make a career in dance. Currently she is dating Shivam.
Swayam Shekhawat:
He is best friend of Sharon and studies alongside her in college, however is more bothered about launching his career in dance. He lives in Mumbai whereas all his family live in Jodhpur. He is aware of why Kriya has isolated herself and is always trying to break the wall she has created with Sharon. He secretly likes Sharon however has never revealed this as she is already dating Shivam and he does not want to ruin their friendship.
Edited by Sadiah.Swaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note

You might be thinking why would you start a new FF when your already writing two other FF's?

To that I say blame Aisha. She's addicted to Frozen and in case you didn't notice Kriya is inspired by Elsa as the girl who shuts everyone out to keep Anna safe, Sharon is inspired by Anna who wants Elsa back and Swayam is inspired by Kristoff who likes Anna.

Obviously Kriya does not have powers. In the FF, Kriya just wants to protect Sharon from something/someone.

Edited by Sadiah.Swaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cs is cool...
sharon dating shivam, why?...
wanna know...
so update soon...
n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I Cannot Survive Without You Chapter 1:

Sharon's POV:

I sat on the bench with Sam although being physically there I was mentally elsewhere.

Flashback:

I sat in my room frustrated. I wished the time would go faster. Normally Sam would give me company however today he had not met me. Though I was sure I had heard him talking to somebody however I ignored this thought as I knew that Sam would always meet me before talking to anyone else.

Someone knocked on the door and I was shocked as I thought it was Sam who would never knock. "Come in Sam, the door is opened." I said. I waited however no one came in. I opened the door expecting Sam but was surprised to see di. A variety of feelings and emotions passed through me such as shock, happiness and finally confusion. I'm sure anyone would feel these emotions if suddenly after 5 months your sibling is in front of you. However as she spoke my hopes crashed down again. "We are moving house. Pack your bags." She told me.

Before I could question her sudden decision she had already gone away leaving me once again. I closed the door and again sat this time trying to figure out reasons why we had to leave immediately but my mind drew a blank.

Present:

I was interrupted from my thoughts when Sam clicked his fingers. "Sharon am I talking to myself. I'm noticing main kab se baat kar rahaan hoon aur tumhara to koi dyaan hi nahin hain meri baaton par. Anyway forget it. There is a lot of work left and I'm not going to do it alone." Swayam said.

Swayam's POV:

"Right anyway di will lock herself in her new bedroom so we have to do all the work." Sharon replied. "Sharon you know Kriya has become reserved and it's not her fault." I told her. "Yeah so much reserved that she doesn't have time for me. Anyway hurry up bahot kaam hain." Saying so she walked towards the new mansion.

I sighed as she walked away. I had hoped that the distance between Kriya and Sharon would reduce now they had moved and were out of danger for a while but Kriya was adamant to stay away from Sharon to keep her safe even now.

Sharon's POV:

I grabbed my now empty suitcase looking for a space that I could dump it for now. I finally decided to put it on top of the wardrobe therefore I stood on the old table with my bag and placed it on top. As I turned to step off I tripped. I closed my eyes in fright as I prepared myself to fall, however strangely ground never came.

"That's why you never trust old furniture." I heard somebody say. I opened my eyes to see Swayam. I realised he had caught me before I had fell. I rolled my eyes at his remark. "Whatever." I said as he put me down.

Kriya's POV:

From a distance I watched them and smiled. I never understood what Sharon saw in Shivam. I never accepted their relationship. However I knew one thing and that was that Sharon could only be happy with one person and that person wasn't Shivam.

I returned to my room still lost in my thoughts. Sharon's absence in my life was killing me but I had promised my parents that I would keep Sharon safe no matter what and if keeping my distance made Sharon safe I would continue to do so.

Edited by Sadiah.Swaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE:
We know the update is short and its being ages since we've updated any of our stories. It's nearly May which means our GCSE's will take place soon and we're trying to balance out revising and updating. The updates may be short for at least 3 months.
Edited by Sadiah.Swaron - 11 years ago

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