Kriyaansh and Swaron ff 'LOVE CHANGES LIFE' - Page 3

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Title-LOVE CHANGES LIFE

PART 1

The sun rises and its 6 on the clock. Wind is blowing through the window. Slowly the curtains are slide and a beautiful face with charming eyes and lovely smile. She then turns and starts singing and dancing:

Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love

she dances round and round.

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love

She bumps to a guy. Looking him widens her eyes.

Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love

He raises his eyes brows smiling and she nodes her head saying yes smiling back..

Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love

they dance together

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein mal ke dekhi hai maine subah

He hold her waist and she rounds her neck with both her hands.

Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love

they touches each other head by head and smiles.

Jhanke badalon ki jaali ke peechhe se
Kare chandani ye mujhko ittala

Dancing, they reaches the kitchen and gets lost in each other's eyes.

Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe hai chhupa chhupa hua
Ishq wala love...

Suddenly she hears someone calling her. "KRIA"..

She looks aside"Neha!" her friend was looking at her confusing.

Neha: kya kar rahi ho kya??

Kria: wo main...

When she looks at the guy, she finds no one.

Neha: tum firse jagte hue saone dekhne lagi, come on kria, Grow up!

She leaves.

Kria: hmm.. phir wahi, "REYAANSH!"

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St. Louse College

A car stops and a boy comes out. He looks cool for his black goggles and hot for his six packs fitting.

Another boy comes.

Boy: Rey!

He turns and finds a smiling face looking at him. He was looking handsome with his red T-shirt and blue jeans, dashing for his stylist blue jacket. He was having a bag on his back and his smile was cute.

Rey: hi, SWAYAM!

Swayam: I have a good news yaar.

Rey: principal guzar gaye?

Sway: nahi! Par itni b badduaa mat de ki waqt se pehle hi... forget it. Good news ye hai k naye chemistry teacher ne join kiya hai.

Rey: god! Mujhe iss chemical mystery k bare mein koi baat nahi bol. I hate this subject.

Sw: I know. Par unka naam sunega na, then u r going to love it.

Rey: what?

Sw: yes. Her name is Miss Kareena...!

Rey: kapoor??

Sw: stupid! She is Mrs now.. our new teacher, Miss kareena Desai! Uss hot red saree mein kya lati hai yaar!!!

Rey:(waving his hand) oye! Miss kareena k Saif! Zyada ho raha hai.. chal.

Sw: chal.

They leave.

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Kria enters and searches for her bff SHARON. She doesn't know why, but her heart tells she needs her. Suddenly she hears a noise. "Sharon, Shanron" . She runs and finds Sharon standing near her car and in front of her there was a guy standing in the same position.

Kria: Sharon! Tum race...(cut by her)

Shar: hey kria..! han race kar rhi hun. Main ise dikha dungi k ladkiyan kya kuch kar sakti hain ladko k mukable.

Kria: par Sharon..

Sharon: come on kria, u too believe in self respect na? after all u r my bestiee!

Kria: thik hai par sambhal kar.

Race starts. Both cars start moving in full speed. After a while Sharon starts losing her control.

Kria: Sharon! Omg! Yeh toh unbalance ho rahi hai. kya karun... Reyaansh! Reyaansh ko bulati hun.

She runs to find him and bumps to someone. She was going to fall when he holds her. She sees her face and he was Rey! (bgm- Dil kyun yeh mera... shor kare) they have a long eye lock. But kria gets her senses back and stands straight.

Rey: ah.. are u ok?

Kria: ya!

Rey: kya hua? Kuch pareshaan lag rhi ho, kisi ko dhund rahi ho?

Kria: aap... aapko hi...

Rey: mujhe?? Achanak? Is everything alright?

Kria: wo... Sharon...

Rey: Sharon? Kya hua use?

Kria: wo race laga rahi hai...

Rey: what?

Kria: yes!

Rey: chalo!

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They reach the point. The game had already over and Sharon was sitting on a bench.

Rey: Sharon!

Sharon: Rey!

Rey: tum aisa kyun karti ho? Do u have any idea agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh... (cut by Sharon)

Sharon: I m sorry!

Rey: sorry? Why don't u understand? Tum meri jaan ho Sharon. I know tumhara ego baht strong hai, par.. try to control. Main hun tumhare saath, hamesha. Tumhe koi bhi problem hai, mujhe batao. Main har or se solve karne ki koshish karunga par... aisi risky chizen mat kiya karo.. mere liye??

Sharon: I m sorry Rey. Tum mere bhai hi nahi, mere best friend bhi ho. Main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahti thi. Aaj tumhara itna bada din hai, aur aaj jab tumne mujhe ye sab chodne ko kaha hai, toh main promise karti hun, main ye sab chod dungi. Aur aaj, tumhare gift k taur pe main yeh toufa deti hun, aaj k baad aisi risky chizen, main kabhi nahi karungi... Happy Birthday Rey!

Rey was looking at her in expressionless. After hearing all her word, he smiled and hugged her. "Thank u Barbie doll" he says.

He was leaving with a smile when:

Kria: ah.. Reyaansh!

He stops. He was surprised. In fact, he was shocked. The girl, who used to hide somewhere when he comes, called him. he turns.

Rey: ya!

Kria: Happy Birthday...

Rey(smiling): thanx! Aur kuch??

Kria: nahi.

He turns to go but again turns back.

Rey: kria!

She was surprised too. Its very little time when he comes in front of her, calls her name.

Kria: hmm.

Rey: sham ki party me toh aa rahi ho na?

Kria: party??

Rey: tumhe nahi pata?

She shakes her head with a "no".

Rey: aaj sham ko meri birthday party hai, Sharon, tumne bataya nahi?

Sharon: bas bolne hi waali thi..

Kria: wo.. aaj mujhe kuch..

Rey: naya bahana dhund rahi ho? Any way. Tum time nikal paao toh aajana, mujhe acha lagega.

He leaves.

Kria(in mind): kyun reyaansh? Kyun karte ho aap aisa? Jitna main dur jne ki koshish karti hun, aap utne kareeb aa jate ho. Kyun?

Rey (while walking thinks in mind): kab tak kria? Kab tak? Kab tak dabaye rakhogi apni feeling ko? Kyun nahi bol deti apni dil ki baat? Kyun?

Kria keeps looking on his way. Shorn sees this.

Sharon: kria!

No reaction.

Sharon: kria!!!!!!

Kria: hm... tumne kuch kaha??

Sharon: agar tum unhe pasand karti ho, toh batati kyun nahi?

Kria: kya bakwaas kar rahi ho? Aisa kuch nahi hai.

Sharon: kisse jhoot bol rahi ho kria? Mujhse, ya apne aap se?

Kria: come on Sharon, tum bhi kis baat ko le kar baith gayi. Leave it.

Sharon: han! Main hi toh hamesha bakwaas karti hun. ( she starts moving) jab dekho mujhe sunati rehti hai. Sharon yeh karo, Sharon yehmat karo. Sharon aise bolo, Sharon aise mat bolo. Sharon... ( she bumps to someone and falls downs.

Sharon: ouch!!!

She then hears someone laughing and looks up. There was swayam laughing loudly. She gets up.

Shoron: shut up!

But he continues.

Sharon: I said stop it!

He stops. She glares at him. but again he starts laughing.

Sharon: tum hamesha mujhe girate ho, aur hamesha haste kyun ho?

Swayam: main nahi girata, tum khud hi gir jati ho.

Sharon: just shut up! sadha hua bayngan( rotten brinjal)!

Swayam: tumne phir mujhe sadha hua bayngan kaha, tikhi mirchi!

Sharon: don't call me that!

Swayam: that u r! tikhi mirchi!

Sharon: you... (in mind) relax sharon! Calm down. Take a deep breath. Ise ladna, toh khudke pair me kulhadi maarna. Yeh already mujhse itna upset hai, k iss baar College Queen contest mein iske wajah se haarne k chances baht hain... so. No more fight!

Swayam: kya hua?? Bolne ko words nahi bache kya?

Sharon shows her teeth to him.

Swayam: apni iss stupid si shakal ko, aur stupid banana ki koshish kar rahi ho?

Sharon( with a o expression): meri shakal stupid hai???

Swayam: tumhe aj maaloom pada?

Sharon: tum khudko samajhte kya ho? Main tumse ache se baat karne ki koshish kar rahi hun taki tum mujhe College Queen contest mein vote do, aur tum... (cut by him)

Swayam: ek sec.. kya kaha tumne, main aur tumhe vote dunga?? Haha.. nice joke!

Sharon: its not a joke! I m perfect for it.

Swayam: in ur dreams. Agar tum aisa sochti ho na, then I challenge you, iss baar tum college queen nahi banogi.

Sharon: fine! Challenge, accepted! Main bhi dekhti hun, mujhe takkar kaun deta hai.

Both of them look at each other in a challenging expression. Then Sharon leaves and kria comes from Swayam's behind.

Kria: kya hua swayam?

Swayam: kuch nahi yaar... yeh jo teri bff hai na...Rer ki behen...

Kria: kaun? Sharon?

Swayam: han... pata nahi khudko samajhti kya hai, baht charbi chad gayi hai ise. Sayad utaarni padegi..

Kria: tum karoge kya?

Swayam looks at her and smiles.😉

This much for today. tried my best. do like and comments! sorry for typos.😊

I am ready for all tomatoes and chappals if you don't like it!😆

Love,

Radhika😊

V nyc!!!!
Kriyansh ka bond different hai!!! Actually bahot different hai!!!
N swaron to enemies hi lagte hain!!! Bt nt dat much serious enemies!!!
Prankster enemies u c!!!
So dono ek dusre se baat karne k liye awkward hai!!!
Bt dono ko ek dusre ki feelings k baare mein bhi pata hai!!!
N r in denial!!! Ya fir darr rahi hai kriya...rejection ya fir commitment se!!
So sharon ko maloom hai ki she loves rey!!!
N sharon ki race was kind of dangerous!!!
Oye rey ka b'day hai!!!
To to fir party bhi hai!! N party hai to dhamaal bhi hoga!!!
Looking forward to it!!!
Thnx for d pm!! N update soon!!!

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awww Radhika
hayeee it was to to Qute hayeee
i loved it
kriyansh is all timr fab
love them
nd today i love Swaron yr they r
to qute love their convo
hahahahahahahaha
I wasjust keep rolfinggg
loved it
thanku thanku for the pm

the chapter was superb... i really likied the bond of reyam...
and they talk are up with each other... amazing...
then i liked also krisha part where both had a talk of it...
and the most scare was race parts where they had a bit of fought and
so rey finally made sharon agree not to race as his birthday gift and she agreed...
and rey and kriya both are in love that why do not i hope they confess soon...
and swaron part was superb... do continue soon and pm me

nic update loved it...

but swaron ki bhi entry acchi dikhate .. yar ..

unhe bhi equal nd important dikhao ...

nd loved krisha. .

update soon nd pm me

Tht was awesome.. Kria loves rey but doesn't confess.. Wht abt rey... Did he loves her... Nd swaron fight was so cute.. Lukng frwrd for nxt prts.. Continue soon.. Thnks for the pm...

Good start.
Continue soon
Thanks fr the pm

Awesome..
Reyansh ka bday..
Waitng fr the nxt chapi...
Post soon.. :))