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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

it was fabulous and good os... loved it

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

okay the OS really turned out good

it was simply amazing.

the way the emotions were portrayed and penned down.

kudos 👏

the way the OS flowed from one scene to another. 👏

simply beautiful.

well done

thanks for the PM

please do come up with more write ups.

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

I HATE U...

I really do dii...

Why... Why u do have to write it so damn soul piercing always...?

Why... Why do u have to make me cry breathless always...?

Why... Why do u have to make me fall for ur write-ups always...?

*sigh*
This was damn too touchy... The way it is bound to be !!
Loved it to core...

His dilemma... His love for her... His want... His practical need...
Everything was truly, very very beautifully portrayed dii...

If I could, I would have came all the way running to u... N kiss ur hands for penning down something this deep... ❤️ ❤️ :*

Edited by Ash_KriYaansh - 11 years ago

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow this is so amazing 👏

I totally love the concept...it's so heart-touching and beautifully portrayed

Letting go is truly one of the most difficult experiences in life and the way u have described it so emotionally and realistically is just mind-blowing!!

Thanks a lot for the pm 😃

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-Spriha-

@-Spriha-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wow...really beautiful!

Amazing job i must say...u depicted the emotions so perfectly. It really is so hard for a person to let go of someone he deeply loved and accept someone else...too gud!!👍🏼

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Ardhanarishwara

@Ardhanarishwara

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

a very beautiful story.
touched my heart..
u made my cry ...i hate to reed sad kr stories..
but it was just amazing..loved it

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preciuspearl

@preciuspearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

awesomeee...

actually its more than awesome...

its truely beautifull, truely emotional, truely touching...

loved it👏

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Very beautiful os ... 😃

its so sad to know that rey is still dwelling upon kriya's memories... 😒

although he pretend to move on but .. deep down he yearn for her... 😔

he craves for her... her presence her love... 😊

the way he got annoyed on not being able to remember her favourite dress... 👍🏼

that how could he just forgot her little things... that was so touchy... its a pure lovers connection.. that he treasures those memories... 🤗

and all her pleadings n care goes waste... coz rey although feels something for anya... but still not ready to let go of kriya... 😳

its surely his undying love for her... that his swollen heart wants nothing else but kriya... god .. that was so touchy... 😭

still.. I feel.. i can't put up my feelings in good words... sorry for that... but this story is such a beauty... heartwrenching beauty... cry of a lover... 👏