Kriya SS:Life Goes On(Part 1 On PG 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept... But plz bring KR together at the end na!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept
But plz bring KR together at the end na n update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Please update part one soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Loved the character sktech..
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Great CS
waiting for he story to begin.
hanks a lot for the PM
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1
St. Louis
Gang + Taani were standing in VP cabin. He called them for something important. He came inside after a while.
"Good morning"
"Good morning sir"
"I've called you here to introduce you to two new students of our college. They have come from NY. I want you guys to make them comfortable" said VP
"Don't worry sir...We won't disappoint you" said Swayam.
"May we come in sir"
Gang turned & saw Kriya standing at the door with a girl. They believed she was here. It's been 2 years since they have seen her. She have changed a lot. Kriya & the other girl came inside. Rey couldn't take his eyes off her. He felt alive after a long time. He felt the same emotions he felt when he first saw her. Swayam was happy to his bestfriend after a long time. He missed her so much. He use to cry at night. SwaRon & Vishakha were only one who was happy to see Kriya. They were worried about her when she'll know about T***Rey.(SwaRon & Vishakha know about the promises. They went to Kriya's house & found her diary)
"Hello sir"
"Hello" said VP "Guys meet Kriya & Anvesha Rathore"
Gang looked at each other in shock & confusion. VP went away. Swayam was about to speak to Kriya when Ashi said "See I told you we won't be late"
"We aren't because we were lucky...You always say that I take so much time in getting ready & today you took 3 hrs" said Kriya.
"You know what I don't have time to waste on you timbo" said Ashi
"Same here wacko" said Kriya. "I so glad we are half sisters"
"Me too"
Kriya went away. Ashi turned & saw gang staring her.There expression was worth watching. She thinking about there reaction on finding about Kriya's marriage especially Rey. She noticed how he was staring at her sis. She could see love for her sis in his eyes. She signed it was getting complicated. He was suppose to moved on. Kriya told her he loved T****. She was sure he still love Kriya but it was too late. Kriya was married now & she knew Kriya loved Ranveer.
"You & Kriya are half sisters" said Swayam
"My mom & her father got married when we were in 12th standard" said Ashi
"But Kriya's mom" said Vishakha
"She died when Kriya was 8" said Ashi
"But we met Kriya's mom few years ago" said Sharon
"You've met Kriya's bua...Actually Kriya was born & brought up in London...She wanted to visit India...So, for safety dad changed her name to Kriya Ghai & she asked her to live with her bua Smriti Ghai...Anyways lets go Kriya must be waiting for us" said Ashi.
Gang & Ashi came to canteen & saw Kriya sitting there. They got settled. Kriya ignored Ashi.
"Hello behna(sis)...What are you doing?" asked Ashi
"How many times I told you not to call me behna" said Kriya.
"Do you think I called you behna to please you" said Ashi
"Whatever"
Ashi took sandwiches from Kriya's plate & started eating but suddenly she start screaming for water & her mouth was burning & Kriya was laughing like manic seeing her. Actually Kriya put a lot of red chilly in the sandwiches & when Ashi ate it burns really badly & she started screaming.
When Ashi saw Kriya laughing like manics she knew she is the one who played such a prank on her, she moved towards the counter grab a water bottle & relaxed a bit & then she move towards Kriya who was still sitting n laughing badly.
"What the hell...I'm not so gonna leave u for this" said Ashi
"Sweet revenge sis" said Kriya
Ashi start running after her.
Kriya seeing her face came to know she is dead now & to save herself, she ran from there first they were running around tables in the canteen only but when Ashi was not stopping ignoring her apologies & sorry, so Kriya ran out of canteen. The gang was left dumb founded seeing Kriya like this. They were getting shocks one by one.
Rey felt so many emotions passing through him. Anger, hurt, pain. He didn't know how to deal with them. He thought he won't feel anything if he saw her again after all he had moved on. He was in love with T**** but the moment he saw her he forget everything. All those feeling that he had buried inside came out. He realise after all this time he was lieing to himself. He loved her then & he loved her now but at the same time he hate her for breaking his heart. He won't let her spoil his present & future. He won't break T**** heart because of Kriya. He remembered what happened after he proposed T****.
Flashback
Rey proposed T**** infront of the whole gang. SwaRon went away without saying anything. They couldn't believed Rey forgot Kriya so easily. They knew if they stay there any longer then they would end up doing something which they might regret. It was better to walk away before it's too late. Rey noticed SwaRon missing & went to look for them. Rey saw them in RH.
"Guys...What are you doing here? Won't you congratulate me & T****" said Rey.
"No"
"What's wrong with you Sharon?"
"What's wrong with you Rey...Don't you love Kriya" said Swayam."How can you forget her so easily? How can you give her place to someone else?"
"I loved her but she ditched me" said Rey.
"Did you try to find the reason?"
They turned the saw Vishakha standing a few yards away from them. She came & stood infront of Rey.
"You didn't even bother to know whether she is alive or dead" said Vishakha.
"I don't care whether she live or die" said Rey
"You know what Rey I'm glad she left...You aren't worth her...One day you'll regret this but it'll be too late" said Swayam.
Flashback ends


**Name calling of any character is strictly prohibited! Action will be taken against those indulging in it, and the part name-calling a specific character of D3 has been edited out by the DT**
Edited by BalamPichkaari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
amazing update...!
loved the canteen scene ...! simply amazing
beautifully written ...!
can't wait to see how rey reacts when he finds out that kria is married and she has moved on ...!
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
finally kriya is back in the college and her sis is great and yup she analyzed the gang
reaction of her friends but she did not tell his friends that she is married now...
and flashback... amazing... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
awsum update

loved it..

umm love this sisterly bond..🤣

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
nice one.. Thanks for pm..

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