Yours, forever. (A Drabble/Swaron Oneshot) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swaron4vr



Thank you so much. I'm glad it was IT for you. For some reason this is where my brain placed Swayam and Sharon everytime I closed my eyes. Thought I should share my perspective with the forum and boom, this happened.



This perspective suggests that you don't seem them together. Personally, we delve deeper into the character than their screen spaces would ask of us. But then, I don't either, in the sense that the conflict doesn't end. But as a matter of interest, why do refer to them as 'kindred spirits' in the prose?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't. It's a belief, a prospect Swayam has clung on to through the years in the prose.
In all honesty, I did see them as kindred spirits but at the infancy of their relationship. A boy hopelessly in love with a girl who hopes to find love albeit doesn't know it yet; that is one of my all time favourite troupes. But then it transpired into something more complex and beautiful, we began to understand how valuable trust was to this girl, how she placed it above all else, how this boy was broken inside too, accustomed to rejection from childhood by people who sought for things he already had. I'll probably make a mush of it if I start now, but to me they were always their own individuals yet complements. Their entire relationship was an oxymoron. Sigh. Didn't last long though, did it?

To me the dynamic onscreen has become so convoluted that it had ruined them for me. I am curious, what would be your stance on present day Swayam and Sharon?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swaron4vr

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I don't. It's a belief, a prospect Swayam has clung on to through the years in the prose.
In all honesty, I did see them as kindred spirits but at the infancy of their relationship. A boy hopelessly in love with a girl who hopes to find love albeit doesn't know it yet; that is one of my all time favourite troupes. But then it transpired into something more complex and beautiful, we began to understand how valuable trust was to this girl, how she placed it above all else, how this boy was broken inside too, accustomed to rejection from childhood by people who sought for things he already had. I'll probably may a mush of it if I start now, but to me they were always their own individuals yet complements. Their entire relationship was an oxymoron. Sigh. Didn't last long though, did it?

To me the dynamic onscreen has become so convoluted that it had ruined them for me. I am curious, what would be your stance on present day Swayam and Sharon?



That's beautiful writing about something absolutely irrelevant to either your growth or mine. But we're in the now, not really concerned about growing and I do agree. Their relationship was an oxymoron. They were rough and broken down, however you may look at their respective predicaments. Swayum's childhood issues were revealed much after the first assassinations of both characters. Until then, he was a contended and grounded boy whose world entered a very long state of unrest when he fell in love with Sharon. Sharon was the queen of cover-ups and her motto was to steer as far and clear of hurt as possible. 'Unrest' was no different from her real name she tried so hard to conceal. They were both different and able to appreciate what the other had and they didn't. But they both became conflicted. And that didn't let them stay together.

Present day Swayum and Sharon are not Swayum and Sharon that I would spend time over musing. Characters we admire are supposed to inspire us into endless musing and writing and hypothesizing and marveling. We're writers, for Rowling's sake! Most people who like Vrushika Mehta's Sharon say she's covered up emotions other than conflict which Sneha Kapoor was unable to produce due to her reservations. While I agree with them, the writers have made Sharon into someone completely different. People change, though. Fictional characters change faster, my arguments are futile. But at the end of the day, barring few genuinely beautiful scenes, the present day SwaRon have not made much of an impact on me. Swayum, though, hasn't really changed in my opinion. I have always liked his growth, ever since the abandoned corridor scene. Everything he's done has been in sync with that. The same cannot be said about Sharon, is all.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey, just chanced upon your piece.
It beautiful, you know. Very straight-forward, no mushiness, and plain simple writing. As Kankshita said, you fit in the scenes from the show very well. And am impressed.

It just puts me off when I read to much mushiness, but this one was great. And started at a point and ended at it. Lovely. Swayam came out here very well, something I always thought him to be [though it never turned out such].

Cheers!
Niv.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Hey, just chanced upon your piece.

It beautiful, you know. Very straight-forward, no mushiness, and plain simple writing. As Kankshita said, you fit in the scenes from the show very well. And am impressed.

It just puts me off when I read to much mushiness, but this one was great. And started at a point and ended at it. Lovely. Swayam came out here very well, something I always thought him to be [though it never turned out such].

Cheers!
Niv.


Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Well penned
emotions beautifully described
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
I don't know if it's the after effects of reading this drabble or just my weakness. But my head's spinning now.

Plus, I can't believe I saw this drabble in the forum after one freaking year.
Great writing. The way you incorporated the scenes was nice. Swayam was quite strong in here.

I honestly can't type more. Heaven knows why. Great job.

Cheers
NV
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great job . Superbly written and the emotions were perfectly portrayed
Loved it

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