Swaron Os on current track - Page 2

Dear kashmi di ,

Its was AMAZING !!!

There is no doubt that it is a very well written piece !

It is rightly said that "Jab jo cheese nhi hoti tab uske

impostance pata chalte hai "

I am glad that u used this fact i think their could not be a

Better way for swayam to realise sharon's love!

Finally swayam spoke ! love it

Their could not be any better way for Swaron patch up!

The best part of OS was definitely this:

The Swayam I love did not want any change in me, he loved me for the person I am and not a changed person and tum mujh main change chahte ho. You said you don't want me Swayam and I give you that I kept my promise & I will keep that intact. I don't want to fail in this since I failed in loving you."

Sharon's goodbye kiss was cho... lovely ! hayee!

It was immensely beautiful !

n emotional too...!

announcement room scene!

Her words hit him like a whiplash and it was then he realized how much it must have Sharon to hear all that coming from him. He went down on his knees catching her hand in his and resting his forehead on their intertwined hands .

Atleast the REALISATION!

From the start to the end all things were prefect in place!

Di u know the best part in your current track OS are that one can connect to it very easily ! u surely have very well knowledge of characters

Sharon went up on her toes and kissed Swayam's cheek and Swayam kissed her cheek at the same time and picked Sharon up in his arms so that she would'nt have to stretch herself and hugged her holding her in his arms for an eternity..

Swaron ! such a graceful end

Thank u di for such a beautiful os !

Pls pls pls keep writing more n more !

Love,

Namu 😃