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d3isLife

@d3isLife

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Emotional, romantic and cute os

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

it was amazing dear... 😃

it was emotional yet romantic..

emotionless were perfectly defined..

loved d way u have described swaron convo..

loved d ending too..

keep writing more.. 😊

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swaron2121

@swaron2121

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

cool and awesome one😛

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Kashmi,
As i said earlier,i am not aware about current track.D3 is like now out of my syllabus..i couldn't able to follow anymore..so it took little time to understand ur concept n scene..i found it was amazing in terms of emotion,guilt,intense n pain..Dude u just rocked to describe vulnerable n painful side of swaron..i could easily imagined swaron in that picture which u had potrayed..There was perfect description of swayam including his pain,hurt n agony..n same case applicable with sharon..but i really think ki patch up part kuch jyada hi fast ho gaya..i mean to say ki jo bandha khud itna hurt tha after rejection publicly,woh all over sudden apni feeling change kese kar sakta hai..woh sab kuch bhulke sorry kese bol sakta even he is not guillty at all..it takes more time to evaluate such type of events in relationship.. Honestly from beginning,sometimes i just failed to understand swayam as a character..i dont want to discuss here but according to ur os,i would say it is different picture to imagine such a cute patch up..i really enjoyed a major flow of emotions n ur writing talent duet..each n every part was perfectly narrated as well as penned..i like ur way to shown confession publicly in front of gang..now dialogue delivery is amazing..sharon ke dialogue muje bohat acche lage..in short it was cute emotional n lovey dovey wala os..i enjoyed

Ok so after complete compilation i would like say,it was good work..nicely done..keep it up..

Thanx for ur pm n really sorry for late..

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Yepee cash just 6 more likes to go for half century 🥳

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon
Yepee cash just 6 more likes to go for half century 🥳

Yesss shilpu just 6 more likes to go fir main aadhi century maarungi...😆.

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

im really sorry for the late comment..was offline the whole week..
coming to the OS

well since you have written it, it was bound to be awesome and it surely was no doubt
the way swayam snapped at sharon in the changing room..it was venomous
and sharon's retort to that..i must say wow..it was superb
swayams realization, him missing his sharon was nice
and i loved it that you made them patch up in the announcement room..making it a circle..ending it where it had all started
you are just outstanding kash..
thanks for the PM..

love
nishi