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Posted: 12 years ago
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So, i am previously warning all the readers that this is bad, really bad. I do not have the least idea as to what i have written. This one-shot has been written solely for Kashish. I do not know how many will pick up on what the purpose of this one-shot is. But i will love to hear your theories. Read at your own risk!

Mystic. That is what they had labeled him. He snorted at the term. It sounded striking no doubt but tame. Very domesticated. So completely unlike him. They thought he dabbled in the black arts and made deals with the devil. That he had sold his soul to Satan. They were unaware of the fact that he did not need the help of scented candles and pentagons to seek the devil. He lived within his soul under tightly bound chains constantly fighting looking for an escape, an outlet. Today was the day he will come out. He looked down at the crowd from his vantage point. The shadows engulfed his form welcoming him as one of their own.

They had surrounded his place with torches, pitchforks, crosses and holy water. His nose picked up a particularly pungent smell. Garlic. Strings of it, in fact. They had brought food to kill him with. The idea was ridiculously hilarious. If killing his beast was so easy, he would have ended this cursed existence eons ago. He could sense the fear rolling off the crowd in waves. They were petrified, their instincts warning them to flee. But as insipid humans were prone to do, they ignored it.

Self-belief. It was the predominant passion driving these people. This certainty in one's ability existed in all species. Every being on the planet believed themselves to be superior. Ants looking for food were certain they would not get trampled. Rats scurrying out of their burrows were certain they would not get preyed on. That they can avoid the eyes of the slayer in the skies. Deer at water holes were certain they can outrun the swift footed predator. Self-belief was how every species existed and carried on with their lives. Only none of them were foolish enough to ignore their instincts. In humans, self-belief transformed into that destructive over confidence that resulted in their doom.

His eyes scanned the crowd and estimated a casualty of around 200 people. It would take him approximately twenty minutes to run through all of them. His mind calculated with detached precision on the best way to attack that involved the least bloodshed. He would stage it as an earthquake later. He had lived among this people for sixteen years and he tried to summon some empathy, pity. Nothing happened. His heart remained the same dark void of the past 150 years.

He was a mere Xerox of his former self. There used to be happy times. He did not remember it vividly. More like a dream from a dream. But once upon a time probably an eternity ago he used to feel. His life had color, not all of them happy, but they were there. But now his life was a Xerox colored in black and white. The town would be painted in red today and he would not be able to see it. His body tensed getting ready for the kill hoping probably this time he would feel something.


P.S- YOU ARE FREE TO IMAGINE THIS ON WHOEVER YOU WANT. Go ahead and throw the rotten tomatoes. No eggs though, i am on a diet.😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vampires garlic bloodshed.

I want to imagine in on KAS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what did I just read..???

okay, so starting from the last, okay, am imagining it on Shantanu Maheshwari...😳
the pain, the blood, the vampire serenity, the awe and the helplessness of the narrator, OHH-MY-GOSH, Kishi, are u for real..???
this is a freaking gorgeous OS... I love it love it...😳😊 I was feeling like I reached on the Old Era, the time of the Count Drakula, it is like reading a Bram Stoker story...😳
well done Kishi👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki_22

...

what did I just read..???

okay, so starting from the last, okay, am imagining it on Shantanu Maheshwari...😳
the pain, the blood, the vampire serenity, the awe and the helplessness of the narrator, OHH-MY-GOSH, Kishi, are u for real..???
this is a freaking gorgeous OS... I love it love it...😳😊 I was feeling like I reached on the Old Era, the time of the Count Drakula, it is like reading a Bram Stoker story...😳
well done Kishi👏


You are way too kind and generous with your comments, mi cara. This one shot is making me want to hide my face. Bram Stoker, really?????? Now you are just messing with me!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvarsha20


You are way too kind and generous with your comments, mi cara. This one shot is making me want to hide my face. Bram Stoker, really?????? Now you are just messing with me!!!!!



arehh, sachhi me, it had that kind of feeling.. it had that Count Drakula feeling.. really..!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES. I'm here!

Unres.

Kish. What do you want me to say? All I can say is suggesting you do this was perhaps one of the best ideas I've had in the last few days. Now I'm going to go back and read this over and over again and imagine a combination of the Beast, Swayam, and Ian.

Oh and this line:

The town would be painted in red today and he would not be able to see it.

This is why you're truly astounding. I'm speechless ok? So just.

Here's what I'm going to do, I'm gonna now make you my personal wish-granter. Whenever I wanna read something, you're going to have to write it ok? Theek hai? Theek. Awesome. Yes!

Oh and this is all for me? YES! I love you ok? You write me dark, angsty things! It's just EEEKS!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ur a 1 hell of a awesome writer...

al d works u wrote r outstandingly brilliant..

d words u use to portray d emotions n every detailing s awesome..

d moment i started to read shantanu maheswari came to my mind don't know y may b coz of his lean yet perfect innocent body r d way u said him not able to feel anything now... he just came to my vision..

well write lots of works like this.. n u need not hide coz u wrote s amazingly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

RES. I'm here!


Unres.

Kish. What do you want me to say? All I can say is suggesting you do this was perhaps one of the best ideas I've had in the last few days. Now I'm going to go back and read this over and over again and imagine a combination of the Beast, Swayam, and Ian.

Oh and this line:

The town would be painted in red today and he would not be able to see it.

This is why you're truly astounding. I'm speechless ok? So just.

Here's what I'm going to do, I'm gonna now make you my personal wish-granter. Whenever I wanna read something, you're going to have to write it ok? Theek hai? Theek. Awesome. Yes!

Oh and this is all for me? YES! I love you ok? You write me dark, angsty things! It's just EEEKS!


Genie at your service, mi querida!!!*takes a bow* and yeah, this one was written for you. Though, I can't do shape shifting and stuff. And I am a bit less fabulous than disney's genie. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaishu88

ur a 1 hell of a awesome writer...

al d works u wrote r outstandingly brilliant..

d words u use to portray d emotions n every detailing s awesome..

d moment i started to read shantanu maheswari came to my mind don't know y may b coz of his lean yet perfect innocent body r d way u said him not able to feel anything now... he just came to my vision..

well write lots of works like this.. n u need not hide coz u wrote s amazingly...


I have never really personally thanked you for this before. But I absolutely adore reading your comments on everything I write.Thanks, my love. It is for comments like these that i push myself to do better. You are always so very encouraging,V. (hope i can call you V). I already call one of my IF friends vaish) 😃😃

Much love,
Kishi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS 😊
Well penned
Loved it
The way of ur writing was mind blowing

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