SwaRon FF : 'Painted Love'

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

that was a really good start

i am eager to read this FF

welcome to IF and do not hesitate to ask questions if you want to..

please do PM me...

do continue

would love to read it

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chashkishmish

@chashkishmish

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Chapter 2

Aftr two days...
10:45 pm
The same guy was passing thru the same road .. He had been thinking about that painting n abt that girl in the painting.. Some sort of power was connecting him with her bt he wasnt sure wat it was... He was confused coz of d fact that he was cntinsly thinking abt hr since then. He was still lost in hr thoughts n passed thru the same bus stop.. bt he was too busy in thinking abt hr that he didnt evn notice the painting on the hoarding.. Aftr five minutes he realized that the bus stop was left behind.He had a sudden urge to go there n he ordered his driver...
Guy : mujhe kuch kaam h tum auto le lo aur chale jao.. ill drive myself home
Driver : ji sahab (n driver follows his order .. n left..)
The guy drove himself to the same place n walked towards the painting ..
He was sure ..smhw sure that he wud defntly gt smthing dre.. n it was true.. He saw HER ADDITION to the painting n he felt heartbroken. Though he hasnt seen hr.. he didnt kknow hr bt still he felt as if his heart was under her control. as if the pain described in d painting was hurting him equally.. It was affecting him as much as to her. He cudnt cntrl n searched fr d marker bt he didnt find it anywhere. He tried to avoid the addition in painting bt that dirt on her face was killng her literally. He wsnt under his cntrl. It was late night bt he managed to find a stationery store n bought a new marker. n reached the same stop. n then he startd ...

He drew a guy sitting next to him on the same bench in a way as it was mediating btween the girl n the dirt falling on her .. then he drew sm dirt on the guy's body so that it looks like as if d guy had saved hr frm dirt ... n lastly he drew a smile :-) n wrote "Evrything will b fine.. Hv trust on God on most importantly on URSELF" n then he felt very much relaxed n lft fr his home.. That night he slept properly aftr days..

Girl hired a lawyer to file a case agnst the director n the company hoping to get rid of that video.. bt still she has to go to the music cmpny with hr lawyer so that evrything gets sorted asap .. So after a couple of days she was bk there with the lawyer...
Director's Cabin :-
Lawyer to Dir : Sir it wud b btr if u cncl d contract.. unless we hv other way.
Dir : Oh rlly .. n wt is it??
Law: Sr We wl file a cmplnt agnt wat happened a few days bk.. n yes we hv #Witnesses.
Dir : huhh
Law : one more thing ... we hv the video tape of ur convo where u didnt allow hr to read the contract papers prply .. n wen she insisted to read them , u said that "it jst hv normal things like u ll be doing it fr the music company n u ll b paid this much... ... .. n ... etc etc..."
So wat do u hv to say sir...?????

Meanwhile Sharon was feeling hppy that she still has sm hopes left ...
Dir : this is disgusting... U guys may leave now.. m nt gonna cncl the contract..weder u like it or nt ..
Law : ohk sr We shall b waiting fr u in.the court
n they left ...

When the girl n his lawyer reached the parking area where d lawyers car was parked;
Girl : I think ab kuch nhi ho sakta.. ( her eyes wr full of tears)
Law : Actually not (confidently) I m 100% sure that evrything we ll b fine.. U relax..
Girl : hmm. i hope so ...
Law : lemme drop u !!
Girl : (she didnt react )
Law : hello
Girl : hmm !!! haaa ... wat??
Law : m ghr chod deta hu ...
Girl : no thnks i ll go.. actually i want sm time alone..
Law : ok fyn .. i ll inform u if anything hppns
Girl : ( gives a fake smile) yeah...
Girl strts walking... n she was very upset..
Girl : wat wud i say to papa?? He ll surely nt allow me to continue with this dancing career... My time limit given by him will be over in a month.. wat do i do now... (she didnt realize that she was already at d bus stop. She tried pulling her hair with her ryt hand in frstrtn. Suddenly she noticed her own creation.was shocked.. surprised.. n a bit happy as well ... she brought her hand out of her hair )
Girl : (smiling) Kaash sach me koi mere liye itni parwaah krta.. kaash!!!
ye jo b h mujhe kitne ache se samjhta h.. jaise isey pta tha ki i hv lost my self confidence.. bt who so ever he is .. he s vry nice.. Neither my frnds nor my family is concerned abt me.. they never checked on me ki m.kaisi hu.. all dat matters to them.was their reputation.. show off.. Bt this person has made me smile without any reason.. Thnku so much Mr. X .. bas sab jldi se thik ho jae..

(then She wrote "thanku so much fr mkng me smile :)" n left .)
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Hws it ??
waiting fr cmnts n likes :-)
thnku so much fr supporting.. :)

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

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okay this was a really beautiful chapter..

quite different i must say..

i loved the way swayam gave sharon hope indirectly

i so wanna see them meet soon. but the best part is when they both will know about the painting.

simply loving the bond between swaron.

they are connected and not connected at the same time.

the title truly suits the FF.

looking forward for the next chapter.

update soon and do PM me.

thanks for the PM

PS. Me first 😃

Victory dance

Let's party. 🥳

PPS. try making more friends so that they read your FF.

this one truly deserves more readers.

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow it's really a very beautiful part continue soon

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Aww...awesum Chap this was..
Luved how Sw sketched n wrote a HOPE giving line on the painting by her...

Hope Sh n Sw meet soon...
Luvely chapter...update soon!!

PS- I wud say..amzing concept n also the title is *thumbsup*

Luv,
Sakshi..

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Thanks for the pm. It is a new and beautiful concept. Your writing complements the concept well. Like the distanced connection and strange bond between Swayam and Sharon. Would love to read more of this.

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

it was a nice update 😊

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

wow yar wat an update its aswom

swaron understand each other...

please unhe jaldi se milwa do...

diff concept...

plzz update soon...

ty 4 pm

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

swayan just came to know her by paint and really care for it
and i hope she get out of this as soon as possible and the paint
really made her smile and came to know that somone think about it also...
do continue soon and pm me