SwaRon OS- LOVE...True...and Pure - Page 4

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

sakshi am glad u wrote on current track. .
I actually wanted to read somethin on d current track n dis came at d rite time. .
Nicely penned. .

thankyou so much Shilpu di...🤗

D background song was perfect one of my favourites..

Mine too..😳
D confession n convo between them was emotional well written. .
I liked sharon.s determination to find out Wat was wrong with swayam. .
N she went to meet him. . Nice. .
Swayam ka care was nicely done. .
All in all had a pleasant read. .
Awesome work. .

Thanks a lot di...fr the appreciation...means a lot!😊!

Originally posted by: vaishu88

aweome os..

it was awesome n superb..

Thanks Vaishu di...🤗

hope something like this happens in d show..

liked d way n loved d way u showed sharon's n swayam's emotions brilliantly n beautifully...

it was penned brilliantly.. swayam's word hurt sharon n she stayed in his garden .. swayam finding sharon in such situation was heart broken.. loved d care swayam had for her..

finally wa r together.

d pain love guilt care n concern was shown brilliantly.. awesome work..

Thanks for the long wala cmmnt..always I luv ur commnt...

Luv u😳

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome dear..

Originally posted by: navk

awesome os

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

that was a wonderful and fantastic os... loved it

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

Gussa h??

Haan??

😡
Agar Haan..to theek h..Hona chahiye..maine kaam hi aisa kiya h..!!

Agar gussa nhi h..to achi baat h..😛

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But m sorry killer!! Even if u r mad at me or not..m sorry..u askd for my help nd I cudnt..m sorry..yaar ek to I m not well..Upar YOU wanted MY help!! 😲

😒😡😭
Pagal h kya!!
M a bad bad bad writer!! :/

😳😭
I just read ur pm..gosh..use padhke to Mann kiya tujhe ek thappad lagane ka..cause tu itne awesome os ko barbad karwana chahti thi mujhse likhwake..!!

🤢🤢🤢
And and And..how can I forget..tere FF pe bhi cmnt nhi ki hu..:/
Gayi mai to..:/

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Ah to Mujhe Milkha Singh banna padega so that I don't get beaten up by the gundas u must b thinking to send behind me..:P

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Haha..jokes apart..
M really really sorry..kaan pakadke sorry..!!

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Neither cud I help nor cud I cmnt on the ff..but I.made sure that I cmnt on this os..so yeah here it is...🤗
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My lovely lovely killeeerrr!!!!!!!!! 🤗

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Superb..awesome..lovely..ahmazinh..outstanding..spell bounding..nd ummm...yaar sorry..words khatam ho gye mere paas..but tere is os k liye ye bhi kam h..!!
I loved it!!

😳😛
Bohot emotional tha..I literally felt wat Sharon must be feeling!!
Poor Sharon...aisa d3 me kab hoga..:/

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The whole convo was very very emotional..!!
Beautifully penned!!

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The end cudnt be better!! :')
So happy to read the end...beautiful!!

Mesmerising os killer..!!
I loved it!! ❤️ 🤗
😊
Love u..!! 🤗
Charger! ❤️

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Phew! Hope u got the "Special" comment...EMOTION cmmnt...katti hu tujhse.!

Arghhh!!!! Mil tu mujhe WA pe...

Ho sake to galti dhundhna apne cmmnt mein,
Mujhe sry bol ke kiya h dur mujhko tumne,

Lagta hai cmmnt krti h to sry bolegi tu sadaa
Bas kar please...mat kr cmmnt..khush rhungi usme zyada.

Originally posted by: freya123

nice update

Originally posted by: aishu3003

Amazing os 👏
Loved it 😊

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

That was beautiful :)

That's one of my favourite songs and I loved how you used the song to pour out SwaRons feelings

Originally posted by: cscs

loved it..nthng else to say...