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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

haaaye mela baccha musky such a uber cuteee os love u re sorry late commenting ke liye 🤗 le huggie aur pappi bhi :* 😎

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow it's just amazing mindblowing and the song attachment made it more beautiful. just loved it.

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

great job muski..
loved it..
i like this song..
loved the way you showed sharon's frustation over the 'changed' swayam..and maybe ours too..😆
please dont kill me for the late comment..i have been damn busy with my books..

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

it was a simple n cute os

n i luved the song it added a very soothing feel

to the whole sequence

i also luved how you gave a perfect ending wit tat kiss

do write more

n send me pm's i wud appreciate tat 🤗

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

that was a wonderful and amazing and awesome os... loved it

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

muski u wrote os?? pm kyu nahi kiya.. 😔

coming back to OS it was amazing loved it.. 😃

it short..cute..and romantic.. 😳

loved d ending too.. 😳

song selection was perfect.. 👍🏼

keep writing more.. 😊

and sorry for late comment.. 😔

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

i am so sorry

mere WIFI main problem thi that's why i am late

pehle toh happy Christmas to you. I hope you have enjoyed it..

did you really write this uskan ??

tune toh phad diya..

this was damn amazing.. simply perfect

each and every aspect was perfectly done..

👏

tusi cha gaye.. and song selection ☺️

thanks for the PM

sorry for the late reply...

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Hmmm itna small os muski. .
But Aacha laga mujhe. .
Very well written. .
Starting from dance well described. .
Liked d Diva sharon which made swayam realise Wat exactly he was doin. .
Loved his concern n final confession. .
Gud job. .

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

short and sweet Talli
I loved it
I loved the way you penned the entire One shot
The kiss at the end was perfect
sorry for late comment
malaria and exams suck anyways i adored the OS
keep writing more on swaron loved it