SWARON BACK TO SCHOOL DAYZ:CHP 5-The FINAL Galz Cricket Match Pg:6

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

oh my god... flavor of CHAK DE... 😃

loved it... waiting fr ur next part... update soon...

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan
oh my god... flavor of CHAK DE... 😃

loved it... waiting fr ur next part... update soon...

thank u di 😳

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Rashi Shah

@VruShanRashi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

dobiii awesome this is babuuu 😃 👏
loved it as always 😳 😎

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: VruShanRashi
dobiii awesome this is babuuu 😃 👏
loved it as always 😳 😎

thank u yedi 😆

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli
res
unres
tis was one of the most hilarious update
i hav read so far
sharon was perfect thruout
but best part was budha singh n rinni
gosh shahrukh khan 😆
whn budha singh says my sharon i thought
tat swayam wud stab him or sumthing
all in al a very well formed pleasing read 😉

thank u sooo much

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

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unres

amazing update yaar..seriously loved it
the gang scenes, the swaron scenes..man they were amazing..
you have an AMAZING sense of humour and the ability to blend humour and romance..
your works are a treat to read..

thanks for the PM
do write more
cheers
nishi

Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha
res victory dancer

UNRESERVED

Thank you for the comment 😛...

but iss bar lagta hain maine kuch zyada hi time laga diya. SORRY

but i am here now with my comment.

sabse pehle toh finally tune update kiya. 😆 kitne time se wait kar rahe the.

and dusre baat... it was SOOO LONG!

matlab i was like khatam kyun nahi ho raha hain 😆

but on the other hand it was tremendous.

I mean seriously kruti you are too good at humorous works.

Simply can't stop laughing.

I was simply enjoying reading it. Each and every part of the OS was amazing.

The scenes, the jokes and the fun. Loved it ❤️

Come back soon with another humorous work of yours.. would love to read it

Well done. 👍🏼 👏

PS. Me First 😃

Victory Dance

Let's Party 🥳

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha
res for : hershey di , sadaf di , rachs , tillu :P muskaan , ammie momma
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Doll🤗
Sorry for late comment But like I told you my laptop really despises me right now.roz kuch naa kuch nayaa bakhera anyways better late than never.I to absolutely loved it re bahut mazaa aaya padh ke.This update had a little bit of everything.I already told you that Buddhu sing was just fab and the way you incorporated it in cricket was fab.I have no words to explain how much I admire your comic timing pehle to aisa kuch sochna and then continue it with such flair👏👏👏.I loved the swaron convo.The way swayam gave sharon the confidence was wow and then the whole batting and bowling especially the rinni catch and then last ball me SRK ki entry, yaha bhi SRK ko nahi choda😆😆 was so clever.I liked the whole chapter immensely and the ending was cherry on top.Can't wait to see you next superrr se uparrr ka idea for this series.I am bacoming you pankha day by day...
Love🤗
Hershey Dii

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Amirita4

@Amirita4

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

i told u manier times the way u write it reminds me of palki mam :') it feels like i m watching a whole episode of d3...
One speciality of palki mam ws evn during gang scenes, gang's stupid fights she managed to give us a swaron scene which ws simple yet aww worthy n ur writing a bit resembles to that..
And while writing the little details u nvr miss dats commendable... Like small small details of cricket abt spinning of balls, pace ball hits.. Use of fingers while bowling..
Ur os is simply complete like old d3 used to b... It has comedy.. Few scenes r vry simple yet heart touching... It made me laugh made me teary.. N besides swaron u justified each and every character sooo well... Hope to see more oses frm u :')

Edited by ami1994 - 11 years ago

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: ami1994
i told u manier times the way u write it reminds me of palki mam :') it feels like i m watching a whole episode of d3...
One speciality of palki mam ws evn during gang scenes, gang's stupid fights she managed to give us a swaron scene which ws simple yet aww worthy n ur writing a bit resembles to that..
And while writing the little details u nvr miss dats commendable... Like small small details of cricket abt spinning of balls, pace ball hits.. Use of fingers while bowling..
Ur os is simply complete like old d3 used to b... It has comedy.. Few scenes r vry simple yet heart touching... It made me laugh made me teary.. N besides swaron u justified each and every character sooo well... Hope to see more oses frm u :')

Aaah thank u sooo much :')