KR TS is dard-e- dil ki sifarish(last part updated pg 6 nd 7)

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: dazzlingmanavi
sry for commenting this late
anku bahut hi superb part tha
the dil se re seq. was so damn fab...nice idea
kaash actually bhi aesa kuch ho...
aur jo uss seq. ke baad hua wo to aur bhi superb tha,...
kriya thought it was her imagination...he he he
kitna giraya tune is update me rey ko...
college me dono band...achi baat hai...saath me time milega thoda
the way u made them vent out their feelings was really nice
they needed it
to express their pain to each other...
rey ka kriya ko manana to not go back was super cute
and then their romance
strangers agar wese behave karte hai to kalyan ho jayega duniya ka
their kiss was as usual megical
beautifully penned
really fab

i was waiting for ur comment...nd u did..thanx for that...rey ko girana jaruri tha...

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

awww,,, that was a cute ending !!!

loved it <3 <3 <3

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medha

@SavageMissMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

okay toh jahan meine res kiya tha wahan pe mein kal se post karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon par ho nahin raha isliye finally new reply bana rahi hoon.

as for the stroy, loved the dil se re in role reversal part. it would be so awesome if that happened. imagine rey with all that hurt bursting inside him, completely entranced by kriya!! yeah that sends me to dreamland for sure!

and then rey offering kriya choclate!! how cute is that? supercute!! par kriya ko choclate nahin achci lagti?? haww!! mujhe toh rey kuch bhi de mein kha loongi!!

the confession was also cute. agar kriyaansh ko ek kamre mein lock karo toh phatake toh phatenge!

this os even reminded me of the rey ka monologue from fridays precap "mein apne aap ko control nahin kar paa raha".

this story had it all. romance both cute and passionate, dance, hate , confessions, drama, manofying, and unaccepted feelings.

beautifully written, elegantly set! great job!

super awesome os

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Akanksha vyas

@Akankshaaaaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

amazinggg...i wish show mein bhi aise ho...great job dii...luved ittt

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

nyc update...
rey nd kriya pov written beautifully.

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hiral dawda

@Aliya_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Finally i found ur ts anku di kal maiine link mangi thi u didnt give me
But i got it n i have to say it was really a mindblowing ts
Loved it to core...
Rey n kria were so cute in dis ...
Loved it yaar...
N next time u write do pm me..!!! Plz..

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

perfect and fantastic ending...loved it

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

loved this os a lot..

just read al 3 parts together..

beautifully u cleared al MU n loved d out burst of kria n questions she asked him..

i so want such scene in show...

finally KR r together loved d ending d part how rey was kissing her n still telling v ll start from being strangers was cute n romantic..

awesome n beautiful TS..

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Pooh

@..Sugary_Pie..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

amazinggg!!!! di ur an awesome writer...i luvd the update very much!

nd correct time par door jam ho gaya! hehe...nd rey adoring kria's dance...awwweee! nd u wrote it beautifully...
rey finally got to know a little bit of truth atleast...nd haan dance hi unhe milvaya hai...nd kriyaansh r meant to b together 4evr!❤️
nd dat confession part of being together again was so sweet!😳 luvd it...nice TS!
-Reshma

Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Aww such a cute story akanksha...
Read it completely now...
Superb ending...
Rey's pov in the starting update was real awsome..
And dialogs in last part were too good...
Dil se dance was explained fabulously..
Wonderful...