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Posted: 11 years ago
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So , this is the OS , which I had mentioned. It's a neutral os so feel free to imagine whomsoever you want to. J

His eyes

I sat in my room , it was exceptionally cold today , I don't know why. Covered in the shawl , I looked outside my window. Looking at nothing in particular. I felt fresh tears rolling down my cheeks , as the harsh memories came in my mind. No! This isn't me , I can't be so vulnerable , I can't be so weak . I have passed through everything without breaking down , and this was also just one of the hurdles , which I have to cross.

The door opened , and I turned back. It was him. He looked at me , I looked away not being able to meet his eyes. Each and every cell of my body was loathing the man in front of me. He came to me , and took my hand in his. My brain ordered me to remove my hand , but my heart , my idiot heart did not let me. Yes , I partially lied , each and every cell does hate him except my heart! It was such a big fool , and still people say that you should listen to your heart.

So fine , what if my heart love him. My vocal cords and voice box don't.

"Leave My Hand!"

He did not . I am not surprised. After doing this , he has the audacity to come here to my room , getting a hold on my feelings , I did what I thought would be the best to do , removed the hand with each and every joule of energy which I had and slapped him hard on his face.

"Don't ever show me your face , you bloody Casanova. Get lost from my room , I hate you. I hate your core existence."

I saw him smirk , how dare he , he came close to me.

"No , you don't."

Saying this he pulled me into a tight kiss , I tried to push him away , cursing my heart with all the curses I knew. I responded to his kiss , I don't even know why. The door opened , and we pulled back. I realized everything . I looked down not able to meet the lady's eyes , who was none other than my best friend , and His wife. She came to me .

"Let me ex..."

My word couldn't be completed , I felt a hard hand on my face. She had slapped me. I touched my cheek.

"I am sorry."

"You ought to be! You freaking bitch. Get lost from this house. I never knew you will be such a back stabber ."

I was going to leave , when he held my hand. I stared at him. What is wrong with me , why am I melting seeing his eyes , those eyes which depicted hope, I could clearly see the love he had . But , I did not see a bit of guilt. After what he did.

My best friend looked at our hand. Wait a second , something struck me hard. YES! I had skipped her marriage , but I knew she was getting married to someone else , and not him. I had seen her husband's photo.

Hell no! I looked at his eyes again , I had always thought I had seen those eyes somewhere , but I did not know where , and I remembered. He was the same guy who I had liked first , he was the same guy who had taught me the meaning of love and friendship , he was the same guy who had showed me how it feels when your love goes away from me, he was the same guy , who had made me this strong. I hit him hard on his chest , as both of them burst out laughing.

"I had told you sweetheart , when I come back , you won't be able to recognize me , but will still fall for me , cause of my eyes."

I gave a deathly glare to my best friend who muttered a sorry and pointed at her cousin , who was after all him. As he took me into another kiss. Thanks to his eyes , if they weren't there , I would have never ever realized the truth , and get into a deep shell of guilt cause of this stupid bet which we had made , when he was leaving.

END

Clearing out some confusion. The two were childhood friends , and the girl's best friend is his cousin who pretended to be her wife , as the guy and the girl had kept a bet in which he had said he will make her fall in love with him again even after he is changed.

I know bakwaas hain .

Hope you all liked it.

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Madhu_ArSha thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeh actuaaly mein tha kya?
Phle toh itna chindi sa.. Ufff..
N upper se sacchhi mein kya random shot tha yaar... Hehe..
Bt yaa i liked it..
Beshari kiss bhi milla bt slap bhi.. :p
hahaha...gud 1.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It wasnt bkwas at all..kuch bhi..okay so srsly muje to bhot jyada pasand aya..start padh ke i thot kuch sad shot mara h ishana ne..bt no tumne to megic create kr dia..mast..loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it..👍🏼
rey always hve such a effect on her...!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS😊
Beautifully penned
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
awesome os ishaa
sach mein bohut acha tha
i thought it will be sad ending
par pane ke baad bohut acha aga
really kya one shot hai
usse slap bhi mila and kiss bhi
i loved ur update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing os 👏
Loved ittt 😊
Beautifully written 😳

P.S inactive as of nw
I'll comment once m back busy wit exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hahaha... I reallly thought something else...
and u gave it a completely diff take...
Gud one btw...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a wonderful and amazing and simple different concept...
it was that there eyes spoke it all out...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Ishu...😡
Tune mere hopes pei pani pher diya...😭
Mujhe laga tu Mera wala OS likhegi...

I was so excited...

Dis is cheating...😔
Chal koi nahi...

Woh bhi jaldi post kar tym mile tab...

Cumin to d OS...
Awesum OS..

Beautifully wtitten...
Although a neutral shot...
Bt Aacha tha...😊

N sorry like button doesnt work properly on my cell...😡
Par consider my like too...😳

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