trembling desires...kriyaansh os

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love.. so poisonus..yet so addicting...

My words are not enough to describe the demon inside me...


The paraphrase of love only made me an addict of the demon more ruthlessly...


I was doomed...love was the name of her one sight...I fell for her...fell for her one sight...her sparkling smile...dialated eyes and uneven breath...her running heart beat...all this made me more drugged for her...



the crimson cheeks and her reactions of our firsr kiss made me more addicted towards her innocence...


she was like a fresh breath of heaven..every time I captured those plump lips; i felt like kissing them till i die..Her softness was drug..


She was a volcano of desires...everytime she faught with me..every time she made me silent with her ideas and values..i was speechless...her anger made her dangerously beautiful..how can i not admire her violent beauty..


our first dance...i was aware of her presence but did not let her know...the music of "dil se re" was the song of my soul..i was blindfolded but her one fragrance was enough to speak her presence..
she came silently and followed my steps...i wanted to cage her nervous structure in my embrace..i wanted to scream to her about my mad heartbeats..i wanted to tell her how she was torturing me by being so close to me..


yes...every time i saw her in front of me, it was very painfull to not able to love her..hold her...kiss her...she always made me vulnarable..i was never like this...but from her first sight, I was changed into an addicted soul for her...she was a drug..


she was my heartbeat ...my kriya...my desire of love...


today i saw her again...after ages...my dying soul felt alive yet again..
i saw her running away from me...i wanted to tell her that she was and she is the only one owner of my desire...my love and my soul...

yes i searched for love after her departure...but i wanted to tell her that it was only her i was searching for in every person...Taani came and reminded me of her in many way...but i was never so addicted and so devoted to her because the place of Kriya cannot be replaced...i knew it...but i fooled myself...i thought that i could prove my heart wrong...



But once again her one sight made me numb...i saw her running away...but i caught her...i felt my life is running away from me...i caught her trembling structure...her hazels were wet...she was crying...she was silent but her lips were trembling...i could'nt stop...once again i surrendered to my desires and my dying heart felt alive again with the touch of her lips..



she tried...she tried to explain something...but i needed nothing but only her...i crushed myself in her embrace and captured her petals within me...her surrender was enough to prove her heart...she still feels for me...and its her...only her who can make me alive...her addiction is my reason to live...my love belongs to only her...she proved me wrong...nothing can replace the emotions she fuelled in me..my love and desire has only one name "kriya"...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was really amazing..
loved how you showed the feelings invoked inside rey...

i really loved the flow you gave out to his feelings..

beautiful..

amazing.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ur welcome...
do write more... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow loved the os
and the way to described his feelings was amazing...
do write more
~Anu~
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Posted: 11 years ago
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my god this was beautifulll...

like seriusly..beautifully wriitenn...

i loved the way u described everything from Rey' s pov...

how small small things used.to affect him sooo much...

the burning rage.. the want... the love.. everything was beautifully described...

loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was really amazing
loved the way how u described rey pov
kaash d3 mein bhi aisa hota
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya.reddy

that was really amazing

loved the way how u described rey pov
kaash d3 mein bhi aisa hota

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kaash hota show pe aisa..to hame os parke dil behlana na parta...:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dat was awsome
Loved the os
Very well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woww dat was amazinggg👏
d way u describes rey's feelings wer mindblowinggg👏

brilliant write-up👍🏼

loveedd ittt😊

keep writing more and pls do pm me😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

woww dat was amazinggg👏

d way u describes rey's feelings wer mindblowinggg👏

brilliant write-up👍🏼

loveedd ittt😊

keep writing more and pls do pm me😳



thnks for supporting...

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