trembling desires...kriyaansh os

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Thatz a beautiful OS..

Rey's feelings are portrayed wonderfully...

specially i luvd d line- "Yes I searched for Love after her departure..but I wanted to tell

her that it was only her I was searching for in every person..!!"

good job dear..

plz keep writing more on KR.. 😊

Edited by --Shukti-- - 11 years ago

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: --Shukti--
Thatz a beautiful OS..

Rey's feelings are portrayed wonderfully...

specially i luvd d line- "Yes I searched for Love after her departure..but I wanted to tell


her thatit was only her I was searching for in every person..!!"

good job dear..

plz keep writing more on KR..😊

just need shakti's return for more inspiration...i avoided d3 bcs of shakti and i will watch it again bcs of shakti...and i will write more only for shakti...

Edited by samwllms - 11 years ago

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: samwllms

just need shakti's return for more inspiration...i avoided d3 bcs of shakti and i will watch it again bcs of shakti...and i will write more only for shakti...

Ahhhaa another die-hard fan of Shaks just lyk us.. 😊 Welcome back to D3 forum 🤗

as our Angel is coming back, hoping to see u more active now!!

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

that was just superb and awesome trembling desires os... loved it

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

loved d os..

awesome.. brilliant n beautiful..

u showed rey POV brilliantly.. loved d u showed each n every detail which affects him majorly..

d want d desire d love d pain everything was penned brilliantly...

awesome work... great work...

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

this is awesome !!

I loved the way how you portrayed Rey's emotions!!

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

its amazing...although u just explained rey's emotions, but they were beautifully described...loved it how u xplaines kria from rey's pov...excellent...do write more👏

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow gorgeous description 👍🏼

Loved the way u have portrayed Rey's emotions towards Kria

Great job 👏

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Arshalicious
Wow gorgeous description👍🏼
Loved the way u have portrayed Rey's emotions towards Kria
Great job👏

thnks a lot

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@--Janvie--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

OMG Sonu That was Just Wonderfully Beautiful Yaar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ And The USP was It felt so Natural to me,Like I got so lost while reading and genuinely felt that This OS came directly from Rey's Heart. 😳 😛 ❤️Seems like You got totally inside his charachter's dept while writing. 😲 👏 ⭐️
Again Main Ye Baat bol bol ke thak gayi hu That No one can write in such a heavenly way using words as magic that directly touches the hearts of readers like me. 😳 The way you portray emotions is Just Brilliant Big Sis 👏 👏 ⭐️ Take a Bow from My Side. 😃 ⭐️ 😳 👏 👏 ⭐️

And Even I never felt any intensity in Rey's love towards Taani...He have always tried to find Kriya in Taani which you defined that One line. 😳 Even That Dil se dance with Tani,For him It was like Is his Kriya back?!😛His True love was always Kriya,The one with Whom He will find solace,His Soulmate.❤️ 😳 ❤️

Is Shakti really coming back?!😕Tell Me The Date Pls?! 😳