SwaRon One Shot: Strip to Trip!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Author's Note:

First of all there's a long list of people to be thanked. Seriously! So I will go with that.

Let me start with the start. Vaish. She had hinted me this, the FIFA Fever, so yes she deserves the credits.

Rosy. She was the first to get the write up and assure me. She had literally asked me to post it then and there. But then certain unavoidable situations occurred and I had to sit back.

Well, it is said 'Everything happens for good.' And till the time I was back I got in touch with a few more people.

Bookworm, aka Rishita, late lateef, you reviewed too lazily. But still you did hint me a few point. So thanks. Though I didn't change much :P

Jasmita, I got in touch with her but then she couldn't reply back due to some reason. Though I am thankful at least she came forward to help.

Sanskriti, for the talk. Thanks!

Marium, buddy thanks a ton, If you wouldn't have given me that bit I would have posted it as it is. So thanks a lot, girl. I won't say I owe you, or else you would end up demanding something. 😆

Last but not the least, Ayushi. Dude, you have got no idea, what you have helped me with. You have been a great support through out. And also provided me with the much required push. I really doubt, If you wouldn't have happened to me, I would have still been thinking over my decision. And yes, as suggested by you I did change that bit.

PS: I will catch hold of you in future as well, in case I need help or the boost 😉

All you guys equally are responsible for making this happen. Without you guys it wouldn't have been possible. And mind you I will get back to you in future as well, I am in need of help many a times :P

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Ayushi or Aisha

@AyushiSinghania

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Res res res!!

Phew. Finally you posted this amazingness here 😛

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Shenz,you come and post such hotness here and then you expect us to comment?I am Speechless. . .After the journey you took us on. . .This was Hawwwt!!!!!I gulped,I blushed,I got nervous...uff!This was crazy!
Sharon trying to grab Swayam's attention and then her Strip to trip...One thing which i would like to mention is Thank you for adding that one line that Swayam fell for the DIVA Sharon and does miss that shade sonetimes. . .
After that what followed I think I have to do something to stop my imaginations 😉

Awesome Work :)

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anubhutijain

@anubhutijain

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome!!such passion...u made my room temp really high even afta d rains..😛😉

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

I wasn't really required in that list, I did a favor to the people by coaxing you to post this. Aur kuch kiya kaha mene :P

Anyways, You said you didn't change it, but yet, when I read it now, it was all so changed.

what charged you up ?:P

It came out just how I expected, after giving the required final touches, it came out really commendable, I must say.

I liked it. It was written by a third person view which makes it more intriguing to read. You gave some description, thanks to me. and it came out just so well. I love you <3

Though this is one different one shot, i'm still imagining the characters to be Kriya and Rey of COT, you've got me hooked with that work man

I don't remember the last time when i fangirled so badly. [that reminds me, I've got to read COT again today :p]

I liked the part where she's like "accepting defeat?" haha :P

also the part where he persuades her not to leave.

Overall, it was a must read. I really liked the way you developed the characters, I've always liked that.

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Shenzy this was super hot...FIFA fever definitely rises temperatures😛

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Reserved, and that make 2 spots for me to edit on your ones shots.

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apy_swaron

@apy_swaron

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

i'm in no condition to comment after reading this os of urs...

it was hawwwt...

swaron playing this sensual game pooled with desires...i'm out of my senses

well written...

thanks for the pm😊

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

i hav to say tis was an awesum story

from the moment i read it i knew i was reading sumthing

which is completely different

in short it was a visual treat for me

my mind n heart was completely stuck in tis story i hardly

knew wen it came to an end

i hav to repeat tis thing

u are definitely a magician of language

the way u narrate them giving a graphic details about ur scenes

it makes the story more clear n crisp

n connecting

coming to the os

wat can i say buddy i was completely awstruck

after reading tis hot n sensual track on swaron

i cud actually picturise sharon playing tis completely

naughty wife who wants to get her husbands attention

but she fails miserably becoz he has his on charm on her

completely lost in each other's trance n swayam looked zoned out

becoz of his lovely wife

all in all a very well formed pleasing read

do write soon

n keep them coming shenz 😉

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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