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* A Path To Heaven.*


Walking Down on a plain river in the row's,
I feel the water nuzzling the spaces between my Toes.
It somehow heals all my sinful lesions,
Fatigue of walking all these years...
Faith with which I yearned for my reveries...
Contentions which I faced,
Throughout the race which I laced.
After giving-up from this wrangle,
Submitting all the feelings of strangle,
I walk down this path to heaven...



The holy water was flowing beneath with eminent sparkles,
Making everything around shine like edged boulders...
I wonder ,Was this the truth of the path to heaven?
I was feeling lighter, minute by minute.
Lifting from the water, toward the azure,
I let it go,
I let it go the flow.
I was walking on a path to heaven.



Going to a place beyond the celestial sphere,
A place where one have to submit,
The count of the things one commit.
I was walking on the path to heaven.


Walking for the last time...
Walking as long as I was with my mortal.
Walking past those shadows so raven...
I was walking on the path to heaven.


- By Upasna(Incandescence. )



[A/N: Hello friends :)
I had written this poem for literature magazine of my college.
I just wanted to share it here ^_^
Do tell how was it :D
Love :*]

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Deetha. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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>_< I thought you wrote something...its a POEM???😵 I was so excited to read something from you par saare sapnon pe paani daaldi tune toh😭
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^Dee :* Awww.. Exams ke baad pakka ;)
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upi u r awesomeee
it s beautiful
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Its beautiful dear <3

Do post futher poems in Writer Corner...

If its on Arsha/Kriyaansh sure shot in D3 Forum...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -FrozenRain-

Its beautiful dear <3

Do post futher poems in Writer Corner...

If its on Arsha/Kriyaansh sure shot in D3 Forum...

Haan.. I will... Right now I posted it via phone..using codes and everything na.. so PM's na karne pade isiliye I posted here :D


And Thankew ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

upi u r awesomeee

it s beautiful

Thanks Aishu Di :) :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awesome
loved it😊
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I had told you then, and I'll tell you now.. Its beautiful!
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uppuuu this was sooo beautifulll... woahhh...

i was mesmerised...

seriusly.. such a beautifull poem...

loveddd it darling... 🤗

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