{|KR OS| You belong with me} *editing*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rey's house stood infront of yet another house in the outskirts of New York. His room's window faced to that of Kriya's.

You're on the phone with your girlfriend, she's upset
She's going off about something that you said
'Cause she doesn't get your humor like I do

Rey paced back and forth in his room talking to his quite irritating girlfriend on the phone, shouting occasionally.

"Are you okay?" kriya wrote on a pad, large enough and showed it to rey. Rey smiled a bit and wrote, "Just Tired".


I'm in my room, it's a typical Tuesday night
I'm listening to the kind of music she doesn't like
And she'll never know your story like I do


He shook his shoulders and looked down. Kriya wrote 'I love you' on her pad but by the time she had put it out for his view, he had already put off his curtains. She sighed and put it down.

But she wears short skirts, I wear T-shirts
She's Cheer Captain and I'm on the bleachers
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you're looking for has been here the whole time



Kriya stood infront of her mirror, a big glass sat upon her nose, her hairs tied in two ponies, as she thought of how much she was different from his girlfriend.

If you could see that I'm the one who understands you
Been here all along, so why can't you see?
You belong with me, you belong with m


As rey slid down his curtain, he watched her dancing like a maniac and chuckled.

"Oh, she's so funny!" he thought, shook his head and went back to the bed.

Walking the streets with you and your worn-out jeans
I can't help thinking this is how it ought to be
Laughing on a park bench, thinking to myself
Hey, isn't this easy?


Kriya sat on the bench outside her house in a full loose shirt, her hairs loosely opened and a book in her hands she was trying to read with uttermost concentration. She tried but failed miserably as her thoughts went back to Rey and his tactics.

There he came, in his worn out jeans and told her a 'hi'. They sat there talking about anything.

And you've got a smile that could light up this whole town
I haven't seen it in a while since she brought you down
You say you're fine, I know you better than that
Hey, what ya doing with a girl like that?


Kriya laughed at a joke he just cracked. A car stopped infront of the duo and a girl sitting inside the car took of her goggles as rey's face broke into a smile. Telling a fast goodbye to kriya he left with the girl.

She wears high heels, I wear sneakers
She's Cheer Captain and I'm on the bleachers
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you're looking for has been here the whole time

If you could see that I'm the one who understands you
Been here all along, so why can't you see?
You belong with me


Kriya cheered for rey for his football match, sitting in the first row of the stadium. She whistled as he just did a goal.

She thought of all the time she spent with him, how he makes her feel at ease. She saw him shouting at his so called girlfriend and her mouth was left opened wide as she thought of how much he loved her.

Standing by and waiting at your back door
All this time how could you not know?
Baby, you belong with me, you belong with me

Oh, I remember you driving to my house in the middle of the night
I'm the one who makes you laugh when you know you're 'bout to cry
And I know your favorite songs and you tell me 'bout your dreams
Think I know where you belong, think I know it's with me


"You coming for dance?" he wrote in the same pad and showed it to kriya.

"Nope, studying" she replied and put it down.

"Wished you were!" he wrote and showed her.

She gave him a 'can't so anything' look and he left.

Can't you see that I'm the one who understands you?
Been here all along, so why can't you see?
You belong with me

Standing by and waiting at your back door
All this time, how could you not know?
Baby, you belong with me, you belong with me

Kriya entered the hall, dressed up in a long white and silver gown adoring her body, her hairs left opened and cut in step style.

Rey saw her entering the hall as his heart skipped a beat or two looking at the beauty infront of him. He felt his stomach do a flip as he started to walk towards her.

You belong with me
Have you ever thought just maybe
You belong with me?
You belong with me

He took out the paper kept inside his coat, the message he wanted to tell her since a long time.

And that what they both did, they took out their papers at the same time showing what they meant to the other - the paper that had their emotion written on them - the paper that had 'I Love You' written on them.





Good? Bad? Boring? Exciting?

I don't know!

Well, inspired from the 'You belong with me' video by taylor swift.
Edited by -ChocoPie- - 11 years ago

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Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
new os?? ^_^
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loved it..

i have always liked the concept pf the whole song as such...

its sweet and simple...

lovely.. :)
Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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can v res😲new one😳??
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
nice story..well written.liked it a lot
ArShiDelena thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Awesome OS
Loved It
I Love Taylor Swift Songs
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
RES
unres...
awesomw OS...
i love this song...
it was tooo gud...
loved it totally...
Edited by Princess_Devil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
awsummm os dear :D
luving it <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
this was an amazing OS
so well written 👏
wow !!!

please please
PM it to me...
😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was cute nd was a mystry in whole...got 2 know about rey last...nyc 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
it whole update or pending...that was a fabulous and amazing os... liked it
from the start till the end
Edited by sweetydiyafrien - 11 years ago

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