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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys,,
i have written one more OS on SwaRon

Swaron OS: Dil Dostii Dance

This OS is based in the current situation. D3 team defeat Adi but Swayam is still hurt after that fight. He also quit the dance team and doesn't talk to anyone much even Sharon.

So let's start

The whole team was sitting in the RH thinking about Swayam. Swayam who has always been the pillar of the team has broken now. Two months have completed now but he is still not ok.

Vicky: uss fight ko 2 mahine ho chuke hain lekin swayam abhi bhi ok nhi h.

Nilesh: haa yaar swayam abhi tak wo fight nhi bhul paya

Rinni: swayam ke bina hamari d3 team incomplete h

Simi: ab hum kya kare guys swayam toh kisi se dhang se baat bhi nhi karta

Sharon and Rey were listening all this quietly.

Rey: ye sab meri wajah se hua h agar maine adi ko trust nhi kiya hota to aisa kuch nhi hota. Swayam se fight nhi hoti wo abhi hamare saath hota. Adi chala gya lekin abhi tak hamari team complete nhi h. adi ne hamari poori team destroy kar di.meri galti h ye main hi ise sudharuga

Sharon (shouting): Shut up Rey just Shut up apni galti ka naam kisi aur par mat dalo kitni easily kitni easily tumne Swayam ko apne best frnd ko judge kar diya aur ab kehte ho ye sab Aditya Khurana ke aane ki wajah se hua h

Rey: no Sharon I didn't mean that

Sharon(CRYING): plz rey plz kuch mat kaho tumhe pata bhi h uss fight se swayam kitna affect hua h wo kuch bolta nhi h rey,, dance team tak quit kar di usne,,college aata h class attend karta h aur wapas ghar chala jata h . meri koi baat nhi sunta wo rey. Wo 2 mahine pehle apne shell me gya tha lekin abhi tak wapas nhi aaya.Kahi kho gaya h mera swayam aur tumhe lagta h tumhare inn dialogues se sab theek ho jayega. Kuch theek nhi hoga rey so plz tum dusro ki sympathy gain karna chod do ye sab kehne se kuch nhi hoga main tumhe kabhi maaf nhi karungi suna tumne just kabhi nhi . I will never forgive you Rey.Swayam meri life ka best dream h jisse main kabhi khona nhi chahti. Main use is halat me nhi dekh sakti. I can't live without him.

And left from the rehearsal hall

At night Sharon was sitting in her room remembering all the beautiful moments she spent with swayam. She remembered how swayam make her feel special. She remembered his million dollar smile which has lost somewhere now.

Sharon; bahut ho gya ab bas swayam ko mujhse baat karni hi hogi. Ab swayam ko main aur hurt nhi dekh sakti. Main use baat karke hi rahungi chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ab bas main apne MAJNU Swayam Shekhawat ko wapas lakar hi rahungi

Sharon went to swayam's house. He was sitting in the dark remembering that fight. He remembered that Sharon has broken his promise so easily. Sharon was seeing at him and feels more guilty.

Sharon ; swayam mujhe tumse abhi baat karni h

Swayam ; lekin mujhe tumse koi baat nhi karni

Sharon ; swayam plz bas ek baar meri baat sun lo

Swayam; Sharon plz jao yaha se

Sharon ; aaj me nhi jaungi main jab bhi yahan aati hut um mujhe jaane ko kehte ho but aaj nhi

Swayam; Sharon plz (cut by Sharon)

Sharon; swayam maine tumhara koi promise break nhi kiya tha ,,swayam wo maine rey ko pehle bataya tha ,,maine bas use ye kaha tha ki tum uss poster leak se uncomfortable ho aur hamari pehli fight bhi ho gyi h wo bhi maine use tab bataya tha jab use ye sab pata chal gya tha maine rey se ye bhi kaha tha ki ye hamara personal matter h aur wo isme interfere na kare trust me swayam maine ye kaha tha

Swayam; trust tod kar kehti ho ki main tum par trust karu.

Sharon (crying very badly) ; plz swayam plz aisa mat kaho mujhe plz ek chance aur de do swayam bas ek chance. I promise main kabhi tumhara trust nhi tutne dungi.

Swayam : Sharon chup ho jao I m also sorry maine tumse baat karni hi chod di thi tumhe hurt kiya maine Sharon

Sharon; no swayam maine tumhe hurt kiya

Swayam ; no Sharon maine kiya

Sharon; maine kaha na swayam maine tumhe hurt kiya

Swayam; nhi Sharon maine

And the two starts laughing and hug each other very tightly. They hug each other 5 times and were looking into each other's eyes, the whole night. After 2 hours, they both fell asleep. Sharon's head was on swayam's shoulder and he was holding Sharon very tightly as this is the end of the world. In the morning, Sharon saw that she slept last night in swayam's house. She saw swayam who was sleeping in side of her

Sharon; tum sote hue kitne cute lagte ho swayam

Swayam suddenly woke up and said; acha siren Sharon main sote hue cute lagta hu

Sharon; tum...tum kab uthe

Swayam; jab tum mujhe dekhkar blush kar rhi thi

Sharon; what rubbish main kyu tumhe dekhkar blush karne lagi

Swayam(teasingly): to tum blush nhi kar rhi thi

Sharon ; nhi main blush nhi kar rhi thi

Swayam was looking to her very quietly

Sharon; swayam meri baat suno

Swayam; bolo Sharon kabse tumhari baat sunne k liye baitha hu

Sharon; tum...tum dance team join kar rahe ho na

Swayam; no sharon wo actually...

Sharon; swayam plz

Swayam; no Sharon

Sharon; agar tumne dance team join nhi ki to main samjhugi tumne mujhe abhi tak maaf nhi kiya h (Sharon very cutely)plz swayam plz plz maan jao na plz mere liye

Swayam ; ok... ok Sharon fine main aaj hi dance team dobara join kar lunga

Sharon ; yes...dekha tumne Sharon rai prakash ko koi mana nhi kar sakta

Swayam; ya Sharon meri siren Sharon

In the college, swaron came in the RH. All were shocked seeing swayam there.

Vicky; swayam tu...

Swayam ; ya Vicky main...

Team; tumne dobara team join kar li???

Swayam; yes guys...

Team; yes finally...finally Swayam is back ab hamari d3 team complete ho gyi h

(all were dancing in fun)

Rey was looking at swayam but swayam was not looking at him

Rey came in front (crying); swayam I m sorry I m really really sorry maine tujhe chodkar adi par trust kiya mujhe maaf kar de swayam plz I m sorry

Swayam(crying); it's ok rey

Rey; no it's ok maine tujhe thappad mara tha ab tub hi mujhe mar

Swayam; rey ye tu kya bol rha h main kyu tujhe thappad marunga

Rey; kyunki I was wrong,, main galat tha swayam maine tujhe judge kiya I m sorry (and slap himself very tightly)

Swayam (holding his hands); pagal ho gya h kya??? Kya kar rha h ye.It's ok rey...tujhe realize to hua ki tu galat tha..i m also sorry

Rey; I m sorry

(and they both hugged each other)

Sharon ; guys main bhi to hu

Team ; aur hum bhi

And then a group hug

Swayam ; so guys it's team

Team; D3

all(shouting); DIL DOSTII DANCE

The End

Hope u guys liked it. Appreciation and criticism both are invited.

- Muskan

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was so lovely...full f emotions drama...love to see Sharon in this avatar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow
That was really really good
All positive and happy wala ending
Loved it alot,i think i shud read such stuff often
So that i keep away from current track depression
Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super cute update!
swayam not saying no to sharon- awww
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome os!
thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waoo veryy nic os loved it...

simple but vry gud...

write more nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww its so beautiful
i always wanted sharon to lay her head on swayam's shoulder eeppsss
its giving a feeling dat this would cum true soon 😃 😃 bt not aftr 2 mnths 😲
loved it alot evn i had a OS whre sharon define swayam mre cute while sleeping
keep on writing 👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice and cute os!!👏
great work...keep it up!!👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os!! i imagined sharon to be sneha as i dont watch the show anymore... i hope you dont mind!
nice to see sharon in this roop!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS.👏
Loved it.❤️
Great work.👍🏼

Thank you for the PM.😃

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