swaron : secret revelation in front of the gang

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys this is my first OS/ff/SS - i don't know

so let's start

SWARON- SECRET REVELATION IN FRONT OF THE TEAM

adii told swayam to prepare a routine last night but he forgot about it as the whole team was busy in neha's farewell party

In the morning, adii and the whole team was in the RH . Swayam came there and adii told him to show the routine.
swayam : sir, i didn't prepare the routine
adii : what????? u didn't prepare the routine

and started scolding him.the whole team was listening but sharon came in front and said
sharon : sir, the whole team was busy in neha's farewell party
adii : great!!!! rey ne mujhse kaha tha aap log dance karne k liye hamesha ready rehte ho but yahan to kisi ki farewell party k liye hi dance ko for granted lene lag gaye

vicky : kisi ki nhi neha ki farewell party

adii : whatever it is

swayam : sir, i will show u the routine after 1 hour

adii ; no i m a little busy i will see it tomorrow

swayam : ok sir

scene shifts to swaron

sharon was waiting for swayam in the fire exit and after 10 minutes swayam came there

swayam ; sorry sharon sorry

sharon : no swayam ab to mujhe iski aadat ho jaani chahiye tumhara wait karne ki kal 5 minutes and aaj 10 minutes great improvement swayam

swayam : sorry bola na and aadat aadat to mujhe ho gyi h tumhari dant khane ki and i love it

sharon : meri nhi tumhe to sabki dant khane ki aadat ho gyi h friends ki, apne dad ki, and ab uss manager ki

swayam : sharon it's not like that galti meri thi mujhe routine show karna tha and i didn't prepare it

sharon ; but swayam

swayam : please sharon mujhe tumhare saath ye stretchful baate karna pasand nhi kuch kuch aur baatein karte h

sharon : ok to tumhari wishlist ki baat karte h

swayam starts smiling

sharon : wishlist ka naam sunte hi tumhare cheeks red ho jaate h ayeee hayeee

swayam ; stop it sharon and ye koi race nhi h let's take it slow

sharon : o...k... sl...ow

swayam : itna bhi slow nhi

sharon : ok fine!!!! swayam hum aaj saath me movie dekhne chale

swayam : ofcourse meri jaan

sharon : what?????

swayam : i mean ofcourse sharon

sharon(blushingly) : meri jaan bolo na accha lagta h

swayam : acha lagta h

sharon : ha

swayam : sach

sharon : much

swayam ; to abse me tumhe meri jaan bolunga meri jaan

sharon : (blush)

swayam ; blushing and all ha

sharon ; stop it swayam ab chalte h (sharon starts walking)

swayam : arre suno to


again in the RH

Swaron came there.

vicky : tum dono aa hi gye hum sab ne raat ko movie dekhne ka plan banaya h sab saath me chalenge enjoy karenge

swayam : no way !!! i mean wo mujhe routine prepare karna h na isliye main nhi aa paunga

sharon : aur main bhi actually i am not feeling well so...

simmi : ok then hum log chalte h

team : yeah movie dekhne chalenge saath me

in the night swaron and team was in the same cinema hall but their seats were far so didn't see each other . suddenly it started raining heavily. sharon remembered about swayam's 2nd wish RAIN DANCE WITH SHARON.

Sharon ; chalo na swayam bahar chalte h

swayam ; what????but bahar to baarish ho rahi h

sharon : so what????? i said come with me right now

swayam : but sharon???

sharon ; agar tum nhi chale to abhi isi waqt tumse break-up kar lungi

swayam ; what????? chalo bahar chalo

sharon : that's gud

now swaron came out and the movie is also about to end

swaron dance in the rain on tum hi ho

hum tere bin ab reh nhi sakte
tere bina kya vajood mera
tujhse juda agar ho jayenge
to khud se hi ho jayenge juda
kyunki tum hi ho
ab tum hi ho
zindagi ab tum hi ho
chain bhi mera dard bhi
meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


sharon was in swayam's arms and all of a sudden team came there and was literally shocked.
swaron saw them and they r also shocked

sharon : tum tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho

simmi ; yahi same ques . hame tumse puchna chahiye

rinni : sochne wali baat ye h ki swayam and sharon ek saath wo bhi rain dance kar rahe h but swayam tumhe to routine prepare karna tha and sharon u werte not feeling well na

swayam : exactly routine hum dono routine prepare kar rahe the

simmi : oh really!!!!!

(as we all know that team has become mature smart intelligent now a days)

vicky : routine rain me prepare kar rahe the and wo bhi cinema hall ke bahar park me

swayam : ha wo actually humne socha kisi romantic jagah routine prepare karenge to routine bhi acha banega

nilesh : romantic jagah me aag aur pani ek saath

swayam : nhi wo

rinni : tum dono saath ko kya????? (confusingly)

swayam : no no way hum (cut by sharon)

sharon : hum dono tum logo ko pehle batana chahte thebut pehle taani quit college now neha also quit the team isliye

bharat : abe kya batana chahte the tum log

sharon : that me and swayam are dating each other

team : what???????r u serious


boys shift to swayam to tease him

vicky : to sharon ko paake dil garden garden ho rha h

nilesh : bta bta kaisa lag rha h

bharat ; kaisa lag rha hoga ise iski sharon mil gyi

swayam : stop it guys!!!!

the team shouted FINALLY MAJNU KO USKI LAILA MIL GAYI

and push swayam and sharon one side

sharon(blushingly) : laila ko bhi uska majnu mil gya

girls : oh ho not bad sharon

swayam starts smiling after hearing this and sends msg to her mobile "I LOVE U MERI JAAN"

now sharon replies " i love u too baby"



THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hope u guys like it i know it was full of bakwass. but this is my first try 😳


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_Deepika_ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Adorable OS...LOVED IT ...
so beautifully u kept the swaron essence intact and merged it to present situation...
loved it😊...
do write more👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres
this was superb 👍🏼
really well done
thanks for the PM

and it is an OS dear...
and next time PM sahi karna 😆😆
do write more
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woohhh...It was beautiful OS dear...Simple yet romantic...& that line of swayam : hum routine prepare kar rahe the was hilarious...I loved it very much!!!!U know what you're an amazing writer & u should continue writing such OS/SS or even ff...
Thanx for the pm dear!!!!
Edited by devlishswaron77 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was nyc...short, sweet n cute...

Edited by Rupita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was fantastic and superb os... loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww very adorable OS.
Loved it.👏👏
Hahahah finally SwaRon ka secret reveal hogaya in front of the team and I really liked the way you revealed it.😉
Good Job and keep writing.👍🏼
Thank you for the PM.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hahhaha lol loved it re :)
& the cinema hall wala sequence reminded me of DMG days ..
1st time seriously?? well written :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os frnd.
Keep writing more os.
u write it so beautifully.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one..
totally loved it..
finally swaron relation reveal hogaya 😃
n loved how it reveal😉
write more na ..
love to read more:)

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