vrushan OS : JAB WE MET (BOLLYWOOD SERIES PART 2 )

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vrushan os :Jab we met '..

Heyloo again peeps , so here is the second vrushan os from the bollywood series started , n I was relly taken a back wid the response for vrushan ke sholey( https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3676487/vrushan-os-vrushan-ke-sholay ) , thank you soo much for the comments indeed means a lot n gives me reason to write more for u . n jinhone bhi jab we met ki demand ki thi dis ones for .aur AT vasiyo 50th vrushan AT pe meri taraf se gift , so lets start isske pehle ki train chut jaaye , kyunki aaj tak life mein ek train nahi chute meri '..

Sha : vrushika bhaago , aapna haath do , platform khatam hone wala hai

Vru : apna haath aur aage karo '.

Sha : vrushika gunde aabhi tumhare peeche hai , aur tezz bhaago .

Vru : tum mere liye ruk nahi sakte the pehle hi chad gaye train mein '

Sha : aare tum mujhpar chillana band karo aur jaldi karo .

Vru : aare koi train roko ''..

Sha : come on vrushika '''.

N the train speeds up ''..

Sha : vrushikaaa!!!!!!

Vru : shantanuuu!!!!!!

TRINGGG !!!!!!!!!

N she wakes up from the dream wid a thud

Vru : gosh sapna tha ''. Par agar kal raat sacchi train chut jati toh ' ( vrushan ke sholay )

Suddenly her phone starts ringing , she sees its shantanu .

Vru : heyloo ''. tumne itni subha kyu call kiya hai .

Sha : itni subha !!!, aur aadhe ghante mein duphar hojayegi .

Vru : jo bhi hai call kyu kia ??

Sha : 12.30 ka Maratha mandir mein show hai , jaldise ready hoke aaja .

Vru : itne jaldi , aur koi aa raha hai kya .

Sha : tum kisi aur ko bulana chati ho toh bula sakti ho ' but I think they r busy today .

Vru : amm ok fine I will be der , tum mujhe MM ke bahar milna

Vrushika kept the phone n started analyzing why did she accept going wid him alone for a movie n she wasted her 20 mins in doing so .

Vru : uuse kaise pata ki mujhe Maratha mandir mein ddlj dekha aacha lagega .

Par ussne mujhe hi kyu call kiya !!

Kya reason ho sakta hai '..

Shayad mujhe usse samajhne mein tym lagega '''.

n she recives a msg from him

sha : tumhe aur kitna tym lagega '''''.. m already on MM marg .

reading dat she runs to get ready , she very well manages to get ready till 12.30 n reaches the theater at 1.00 . she finds him standing outside the theater looking at his G.shock wid frustrated expressions on his face . she walks upto him .

vru : hey hi , show shuru hogaya kya ?

sha : nahi tumhare liye rok ke rakha hai .

vru : I noe mai late hun par see galti tumhari hai , tumne mujhe sirf ek hi ghanta diya , how could I manage .

sha : ohh meri galti hai ''. mai tumhara wait kar raha tha ''..tumhe mujhe thank you bolna chahiye '''.aur tum mujhe attitude dikha rahi ho !!!

vru : Ok fine I m sorry , I m at fault , galti meri hai , bass . par aab kya karenge .

sha : chalo mere saath .

vru : kaha leke jaa rahe ho

sha : Mumbai ki sabse khubsurat jagha par .

vru : where ???

sha : tum chalo toh sahi .

they start walking off together . suddenly shantanu recives a msg .

sha : yeh dekho in dono ka firse chalu hogaya .

vru : kaun dono , kiska msg hai .

sha : archie ka msg , alisha aur voh bahar ek saath hai , n fir se Alisha usse rok tok rahi hai .

vru : aur archie tumse yeh sab discuss karta hai !!!!'

sha : han , bichara kiske saath share karega , but girlfrndz ka baat baat par tokna yeh toh galat baat hai naa .

vru : see voh ek ladki hai uske bare mein yeh sab baatein samajhna mushkil hai , par jab koi pyar mein hota hai toh koi sahi galat nahi hota . Alisha very well noes wat is good for him n wats not issliye voh usski girl frnd hai, yeh usska tareeka hai apna pyar jatane ka , by protecting him , n archie bhi yeh baat achi tarha se janta hai ,issliye voh dono itne opposite hote hue bhi ek saath hai .u see opposite poles attract each other .

sha : hmmm

vru : funda zyada hogaya naa .

sha : thoda , rokne tokne tak baat thik thi , par alisha ka shaadi n all ke bare mein sochna .

vru : han toh !!! bachpan se naa ' mujhe bhi shaadi karne ka bohot craz hai by god .

sha : tum hamesha ayesi bakwas karti ho yaa aaj kuch special occasion hai .

vru : bakwas kyu maine saachi sab plan karliya hai , outfit , decoration , jewelry , aare mera toh buffet menu bhi ready hai .

sha : tumhe uthakar museum mein rakhna chahiye '''. Ticket lagni chahiye tumhe dekhne ki .

vru : he he he thanks , tumhare shaadi ke plans hai ???

sha : koi ladki mile toh naa .

vru : sach batau mein tumhe '. dikhne mein bure nahi ho tum , handsome ho yaar aur aabhi popular bhi ho, ayse toh kai sari ladkiya miljayengi tumhe .

sha : thanks ..( wid his introvertness clearly showing up )

vru : bata rahi hun mai na '.. mai ladki hun ki nahi , tumhare uupar koi bhi ladki flat ho sakti hai .

sha : orignal piece hai tu .

vru : aur kitni dur hai tumhari khoobsurat jagha .

sha : aabhi toh kafi chalna hai .

vru : ok I m tired , see ders a garden , chalo jake swings pe baithte hai .

sha : r u serious !!!! swings !!!

vru : kyu tum kabhi swings pe nahi baithe .

sha : baitha hun par'. par aabhi yeh sab kaise kar sakte hai .

vru : life khatam ho chuki hai tumhari , baat toh aise kar rahe jaise mar chuke ho .

tum kyu duniyadari dekh rahe ho , chalo mere saath .

sha : come on vrushika u cant be serious yaa yeh kya baccho jaisi baatein kar rahi ho .

vru : meri baat mano , baccho jaisi baatein karo aur chalo park mein , aare jala do iss saali duniyadari ko yaar . chalo chalo no tension .

n she catches his hand n drags him to the park , they both sit on swings ,he has no option left but to sit on the swing like a kiddo n drool in air .(tannu ki julfein udding epp !)

vru : better lag raha hai'''.. han ?

sha : u noe wat ' yeh bevakufi ka kaam karke mujhe actually aacha lag raha hai , I m actually feeling better .u were rite .

vru : dekha ,maine kaha tha na , I m always rite .

sha : tum apne aapko bohot pasand karti ho naa .

vru : bohot mai apni favourite hun !

sha : aab chale ki aur koi bacpana baki hai .

vru : well subha jaldi jaldi mai naa maine kuch khaya hi nahi , lets have some bhel ,voh dekho vaha pe koi bhaiya hai .

sha : sure .

they walk up to the bhelwala .

vru : bhaiya do bhel dena .

the person makes one n gives it to shantanu , n proceeds for giving her .

vru : voh mere wale mein naa teekhi aur mithi chutney extra dalo , aur kanda bhi zyada dalna , n sev bhi .

the vendor annoyingly gives her all the extra stuff n they move after paying him .

sha : tumne toh almost adhi bhel unse zyada banvali .

vru : vohi toh , ek ke saath aadhi muft *muft *muft * !!! aadhi sham hone ko aayi aur kitna tym hai .

sha : thodi der aur .

they both walk n walk n walk n walk .

vru : ok stop , queens necklace aagay yaar aur kitni dur hai .

sha : yahi toh hai Mumbai ki sabse khoobsurat jagha .

vru : yeh !!! I noe ki yeh bohot famous jagha hai , but khubsurat ???

sha : tumne kabhi yaha baithkar , apni aankhe band karke yaha ki hava khayi hai ?

vru : amm not really

shantanu climbs on the top n forwards his hand to her .she catches his hand n climbs up too . he couldn't resist looking at her ,when suddenly she speaks .

vru : uupar aagayi hun mai aab toh mera haat chod do itni bhi sundar nahi hun mai .

sha : baatein kam karo , sit here n close ur eyes .

vru : hmm aage kya karu .

sha : sshhh vrushika , ankhe aur baatein dono band karo n just enjoy the feel .

quiet confused she tends to listen to him , wid her eyes closed she , starts feeling the freshness . a sudden flash back hits her . she starts reviving all those memories spent wid him . starting from the first day of shoot , the way he supported her in every scene in every routine in every move . never seemed to be a hanky panky personality , dats wat made her more comfortable wid him , a strictly professional yet passionate guy she had ever met in her life . something made her attract towards his charm , be it his dance moves or acting skillz or may be his too adorable zulfein . all those memories started screening in front of her eyes . box office of her heart actually boomed as she went on wid those scenes . finally she ended up on those 3 weeks spent widout him . 3 weeks seemed as if 3 centuries togethere . never had she missed any of her frndz so hard , dat too a boy who had just entered her life . why , n actually wat was happening to her . after soo long she had received such warmth feeling from someone , he had not intended it , but shantanu hai hi aisa toh kya kar sakte hai . his being around made her feel better , n those days spent widout him , were like kinda weird for her , aadat ho gayi thi Sharon banke special feel karne ki , n she actually felt special during those shots , why did happened wid her , she never knew and not realizing the necessity of realizing wat was happening wid her ,she went on wid dat feeling . always swayed away by his presence , she liked no loved being Sharon rai prakash n inhailing the fact she was not in her shoes for next couple of weeks irritated her ,but finally she was back in sharon's shoes ,back wid him n back wid that special feeling .

she impromptu kept her hand on his n started blaberring wid closed eyes .

vru : u noe wat , shantanu . thanks''.. thank you soo much for being dere in my life as a stonrg support , I never got a chance to express dat to u but u being dere for me , made me relaxed n calm for every shot , every dance , n at every instance after u entered my life . thank u thank u soo much ki tum har baar mujhe tolerate karte ho , thank u ki tumne voh patience dikhaya jo har kisi mein nahi hota , thank u ki tumne mere har shot ko ek success mein badla . thank u soo much .

saying dat she hugged him tight burying her head deep in his chest .

yeh sab kya ho raha tha , shantanu had no clue , but he was kinda surprised as well as happy coz , this was not first tym he was standing for or supporting someone yaa kisiko special feel karaya ho , but this was his first encounter wid feeling special , relly n actually wat feels like feeling special was wat shantanu was feeling (confuse mat hona mai bohot figure of speech use karti hun),a feeling of wow spread in his life for the moment ,love tha pata nahi , yaa like tha voh bhi pata nahi ,kya tha pata nahi jo bhi tha dono ke liye bhi bohot special tha n this tym he couldn't keep his hands numb they too grabed her close as if kal hai hi nahi , jo bhi hai bass issi pal mein hai .his head over hers expressed a strong feeling of satisfaction of being wid her for the moment . eventually she turned her head to the other side ,rubbing her face over his chest once again to settle in his deep comforts . her arms gripped his back wid utter feeling of oneness between them .she had let go her self on his surroundance .both in some world enjoyed each others presence . nope nahi kuch bhi nahi tha dono ke beech , naa uski inosence naa uska introvertness , aur naa ek inch ki hava .kisi ki jagha nahi thi uss special moment mein , but kabhi na kabhi toh hosh aana hi tha .a big wave hit them both back to reality (aisa kabhi nahi hota marine drive pe trust me , its just imaginary)

her fingers lossen up his hands start backing off . dono ke beech hamesha wali awkwardness spread ho jati hai . kuch ajeeeb dono bhi feel kar rahe the , they turn their faces on opposite sides in shyness . n both looking outwards give a simple smile to themselves on wat happened . turning back she speaks up .

vru : mai hi baat shuru karti hun '

sha : offcourse

vru : tum extra kapde apne saath carry karte ho ?

sha : hun !! yeh kaisa sawal hai ?

vru : nahi voh hum gile ho gaye hai naa .

sha : toh aab ?

vru : shopping !

sha : aabhi shopping !

vru : hmmm chalo jaldi .

n they leave the place n move onto shops , to buy something for time being .

vru : yeh kaisa hai ?

sha : tum itne jazzy n sparky types clothes kyu pic kar rahi ho , hame aabhi ghar hi jana hai .

vru : toh kya hua , u also get some party wear , see dis one , trust me take .

he was as usual , voh usske liye koi option khula chodti hi nahi hai , n voh usse mana karta hi nahi hai , yaa karna chata ho usske pehle voh decision leke baat kahtam kar deti hai .

sha : k . excuse me , plzz pack these ones .

vru : nahi nahi , we got to wear them .

sha : kyuuu !!!!!!!!!

vru : maine kaha iss liye .

sha : vrushi tum dekho '

vru : han mujhe bhi dekhna hai tum kaise lagte ho , pehno aur chalo .

sha : arre par sun'..

she pushes him in one of those trial rooms n herself gets into one . after wearing those they walk out from the shop .

sha : its quite late , mai tumhe ghar drop kar deta hun .

vru : itne jaldi !!!!!!!!!!!!

sha : itne jaldi matlab raat ke 11 baj rahe , tumhe pata bhi tumne dress select karne mein kitna tym laga diya .

vru : par mujhe ghar nahi jana !!!!!!

sha : kyu kya hua ?

vru : ghar pe koi nahi hai , sab gujrat gaye huye hai , aur mai ghar mein akele bilkul pak jati hun , I need someone to talk .u noe !

sha : ya I noe baat kiye bina tum ji nahi sakti toh aab tum kya chati ho !

vru : chalo mere saath

sha : kaha ???

vru : vaha !! pointing her fingers in front .

sha : tum hosh mein toh ho ?

vru : aare tumne bachpana try kiya hai naa , bada maza aaya tha aab pagal pan try karo.. . . !!!

i noe this one was kinda lame but hope u would like more parts , critisism totally allowed , kuch bhi zyada kam hai , do inform me .😳 n agli movie ka suggetion dena mat bhulna .

sanskruti 😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserve.
I am here before the PM.

Unres.

Sanskruti I seriously don't have words for this OS.⭐️
It was super duper cute and I could feel that VruShan would be like this only.
First of all a huge round of applause for you👏👏👏, the way you have used the dialogues is just perfect. It seems like these dialogues were written only for VruShan and the moments were perfect.
I Loveddd this OS.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
You know how much I love your VruShan OS( For me you are definitely the best writer for VruShan OSs).⭐️
Now I really cant wait for another VruShan OS.(Mera greed kabhi khatam nahi hoga😆)
Big huggg.🤗

Edited by VruShan_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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senorita 🤗
cute os

Those emotions & flashback of vrushi were so nicely penned down 👍🏼

Loved it

aur d hug

Tu ne saare jab we met ke dialouge use kar diye isme?😆

Will wait for next VruShan OS😳

ty 4 pm


p.s u know jab we met z one of my fav movie aur in vrushan version


Edited by kitty_swaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gosh @sans this was beautiful yaar I swear!!!!!Those feelings & flashback of vrush were so nicely penned!!!!I loved it yaar!!!!
Verdict: Super duper hit!!!!
Ab agle film ki taiyari karo !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nic loved it


jab ve meet ke dialog shi use kare ha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part
I liked that u used mostly all the main dialog of jab we met
I liked the plot
actually I like this chulbuli vrushika and sidha sadha shantanu
it was gud
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing OS
really love these vrushaan OS's by you
great work 👏
please do write mre
it's fun reading them...
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kruti doll🤗
loved it re
It was awesome syarting from the dream to the date the swings the bhel and finally the hug
it as too cute love vrushi's paagalpanti and shaan's shyness
awesome the re jaldi se next part de mazaa aa gayaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vrushika n shantanu r very different from sharon n swayam...the storyline of jab v met suits dem especially to shantanu coz in interviews vrushika hardly talks i dont knw about her ...it reminded me of nupur n mayank of Mile jab hum tum(may b u didn't watch dat show).so dont consider that statement...but it was gud n fun to read😊
Edited by Rupita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ekdum mast...😃 Write more

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