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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was superb start and loved it... continue soon and pm me...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

that was superb start and loved it... continue soon and pm me...

thnx bt it ends there
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Posted: 12 years ago
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but why
i really liked it.. 😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-


but why
i really liked it..😭😭

i thnk thts gud endings
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bhai its super cooll...i loved it...
Bt apne toh end kar diya...ek epilogue hi de do...plsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: KS_SWARON

Bhai its super cooll...i loved it...
Bt apne toh end kar diya...ek epilogue hi de do...plsss

kshitija pehle apna comment bada kar nd this story s frm third person pov soit gud to b end herr
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

kshitija pehle apna comment bada kar nd this story s frm third person pov soit gud to b end herr


aare ye res abhi comment kiya hi kaha hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya mast os h amit bai...
i luvd it...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os amit bhai..

its unique in a way..a third person pov was superb

people generally get so much caught up in their lives and changing relations that they forget what love is..

the concept was awesome..loved the whole writeup

it was unexpected that they werent a couple and more unexpected that sharon choose swayam ultimately

u have a diff style of writing..like it a lot..

have a suggestion.. i could just scrap it if u like

-veronica

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Posted: 12 years ago
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perfect
a beautiful os again by u
loved it to the core
it was just phenomenal

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