Taarey os: tum tak (dared) [no pms]

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Hello guys ..me back with an os which was dared by shreya to me..and shreya the situation was too restricting yaar 🤣 anyways I love the song which is tum tak so here it is...

"No mom...how many times do I have to say no to you?!"

After refusing his mom over the same thing for an hour, hell-irritated was the understatement of the century.

"Arey beta...at least meet her..."

She was a shrewd one who sounded sweet and gentle on the outside but was scheming on the inside.

" no mom..why should I meet her!"
By now he was on the verge of an explosion of epic proportions .

" because without knowing how can you decide?"

Her sugar coated words were laced with persuasion and Rey was fully aware of that.

" mom..I know what you are trying to do but I won't fall for it this time and you know that I have my dance career to think about..marriage will just weigh me down."

He ended his sentence with a hope that his mom will finally forget about the topic of his marriage. But at the same time he knew his mom and when she wants something, you can believe that she will get it.

" precisely,...that's why I chose a dancer as my future daughter-in-law.."

She smirked as she saw his sudden expression of confusion. Almost there now she thought to herself.

" she is a dancer?"

He knew he was almost trapped but he had o stay strong at least for some time.

" yes and a great one I might add.."

She smirked as she knew she had got him.

"And you know what ..I have the perfect plan...she is the opening act tonight at some concert..."

She continued on as she saw his interest.

"Okay so..."

She smiled inwardly as she saw his eagerness.

" so , you can see her dance and if you like her then you can go talk to her."

Check and mate she thought to herself as she saw her sons face which was filled with a combination of curiosity and anxiousness

" can I take swayam with me?"

She smirked once more as she mentally prepared herself for the arrival of her new daughter-in-law , taani shekawat ...I mean taani singhania.


At the venue:

Rey was nervous. Nervous that he might like her but he convinced himself that he was going to see her performance and tell his mom that he didnt like her. At least that will get his mom of his back for a few months. But still inside him he had a tint of fear.

"Rey lets greet seated her performance is about to start."

Swayam had been trying to snap him out of his trance for sometime now .

" huh...oh ya lets go..."

They proceeded to their seats and sat down . Rey felt elephants dancing in his stomach as the announcer announced her name. He closed his eyes and opened it only when he heard a huge round of applause indicating that the curtain was open.

He opened his eyes to the back of a girl on stage. She was facing the other side so he couldn't see her face. From what he could see , he saw a girl wearing a white angelic salwaar kameez. Simple and plain, she wasn't heavily decorated like most kathak performers he had seen in his career. She had a strange magnetism to her and a rare ability to make his heart race. His heart raced even faster when the music started.



Ooo...
Meri Har Man Maani Bas Tum Tak
Baatein Bachkaani Bas Tum Tak
Meri Nazar Deewani Bas Tum Tak

He saw her face and he felt the entire world stop. She wasn't the most beautiful woman he had ever seen but still she attracted him towards her more than epany other woman had. The next thing that took him by storm was the lack of make up on her face, yet she was so magnificent and beautiful. He could feel himself shrinking in comparison to her beauty and simplicity.

Tum Tak, Tum Tak, Tum Tak Sone Yar

Tum Tak Tum Tak Arzi Meri
Phir Teri Jo Marzi

The next thing he noticed were her unparrelled dancing skills. He had seen many kathak dancers in his life but none matched up to her precision, her technique and her expressions. His trained eyes could not spot any mistake . Her poses and moves were bang on and brilliant. Her dancing only added to her enrich phong beauty.


Meri Har Dushwaari Bas Tum Tak

Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak
Meri Ishq Khumaari Bas Tum Tak...

Ek Tak Ek Tak Na Tak Gum Sum Naazuk
Naazuk Dil Se Hum Tum...
Tum Tum Tum Tum Tum Tum Tum

Now he felt himself losing himself in her grace and beauty. She was amazing , simple and angelic at the same time. He was losing words describing her. He never felt like this before. It was not lust .she was too divine, too perfect. He couldn't help himself anymore.

Tum Tak Chala Hoon Tum Tak

Chalunga Tum Tak
Mila Hoon Tum Tak
Milunga Tum Tak

Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak
Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak
Ooo...

He knew he was a goner. He was renewed. He was in love. He knew it, he felt it and he is living it. He loved this feeling. He never wanted it to go away, he never thought that in the course of this 5 minutes he will fall in love. But he was glad. Nothing mattered anymore. Only her.

Meri Akal Deewani Tum Tak

Meri Sakal Jawani Tum Tak
Meri Khatam Kahani Tum Tak
Meri Khatam Kahani Bas Tum Tak

Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak
Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak
Tum Tak Tum
Tum Tak Tum
Tum Tak Tum
Hmmm...

He spent the rest of the song in pure ecstacy and happiness. In Hindi it was like a nasha. Now he knew he couldn't stay away from her. He was lost in a trance and was only awakened by the loud ear splitting applause by the audience. He mimicked the crowd mostly because he was not in his senses anymore.




"Wow..Rey she was amazing..I think you should..."

Swayam turned around only to see an empty chair next to him which was once occupied by a reyansh singhania. He smirked to himself and proceeded to hail a cab.

Backstage:

He was nervous. For a completely different reason. He was in love with her , but it doesn't mean that she will be in love with him too. He need to make a good impression . He asked around for taani shekawat and finally found her surrounded by a group of people, probably congratulating her for her mind blowing performance. He found his feet walking towards her even before his command. I guess now he had to get used to it because he knew this feeling was not going aah any time soon. Finally after what seemed like a eternity he reached her. He cleared his throat and she turned around in slow motion of course.

" yes.."

She smiled..uff her smile..he felt himself growing weaker and weaker with every passing moment.

" I am reyansh singhania..."

He extended her hand which she recieved happily. Oh how he wished she knew how she made him feel,but she will, soon enough.

Hehe I know cliffy right? Okay sorry I had to put you his through this..and shreya I hope you are happy..pandas rock!!
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Wow Yaar ... Angel Kya Baat Hai ! This OS brought me into TaaRey Dreamland ... I'm Totally Lost ... Well The Way You Portrayed Rey's Mother I have to Say was Very Interesting ... Soft Yet Stern ... And Rey Being Stubborn Still Couldn't Say No ... Very Nice
Well Rey Falling In Love Was So Cute ... The Scene Of Taani Dancing And Rey Falling in Love With Her Was Reeling Through My Head And I Have To Say It Looked Cutely Funny ...
Toh Is This How It Ends ? ... Anyways It was Cute and I really Liked it
And Monkey's Are Better !😛
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Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Wow Yaar ... Angel Kya Baat Hai ! This OS brought me into TaaRey Dreamland ... I'm Totally Lost ... Well The Way You Portrayed Rey's Mother I have to Say was Very Interesting ... Soft Yet Stern ... And Rey Being Stubborn Still Couldn't Say No ... Very Nice
Well Rey Falling In Love Was So Cute ... The Scene Of Taani Dancing And Rey Falling in Love With Her Was Reeling Through My Head And I Have To Say It Looked Cutely Funny ...
Toh Is This How It Ends ? ... Anyways It was Cute and I really Liked it
And Monkey's Are Better !😛

Well thanks neha II am glad u liked it it pandas are the best 😛..just kidding 😆
Edited by Angel-luvs-s - 12 years ago
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awesome os...
luvd it...😳
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Originally posted by: sweet_angel09

awesome os...
luvd it...😳

Thank u
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YAY!!!PANDAS ROCK ONCE AGAIN!!!

~~~~~~CHAK DE PHATTE PANDAS!!!~~~~~~
Edited by PrOjeCtA - 12 years ago
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Its super awsm.He he he,Rey ws tryng to be smart bt freak hs mtr is smarter thn hm,lvd hr yaar.Smn ws nt agrng to mry bt wt nw ha! He's cmpltly lost in tat angelic beauty.Amazing!
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Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Its super awsm.He he he,Rey ws tryng to be smart bt freak hs mtr is smarter thn hm,lvd hr yaar.Smn ws nt agrng to mry bt wt nw ha! He's cmpltly lost in tat angelic beauty.Amazing!


Thanks a lot 😃
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accha tha..
luved the incomplete ending..
and babare...
u started writing comedy..




He ended his sentence with a hope that his mom will finally forget about the topic of his marriage. But at the same time he knew his mom and when she wants something, you can believe that she will get it.

" precisely,...that's why I chose a dancer as my future daughter-in-law.."

She smirked as she saw his sudden expression of confusion. Almost there now she thought to herself.

" she is a dancer?"

He knew he was almost trapped but he had o stay strong at least for some time.

" yes and a great one I might add.."

She smirked as she knew she had got him.

"And you know what ..I have the perfect plan...she is the opening act tonight at some concert..."

She continued on as she saw his interest.

"Okay so..."

She smiled inwardly as she saw his eagerness.

" so , you can see her dance and if you like her then you can go talk to her."

Check and mate she thought to herself as she saw her sons face which was filled with a combination of curiosity and anxiousness

" can I take swayam with me?"

She smirked once more as she mentally prepared herself for the arrival of her new daughter-in-law , taani shekawat ...I mean taani singhania


[/B]luved this part..
and then this sentnce and i really felt on the floor..🤣[/B]

"Wow..Rey she was amazing..I think you should..."

Swayam turned around only to see an empty chair next to him which was once occupied by a reyansh singhania. He smirked to himself and proceeded to hail a cab.

i could actuall imagine that scene..
NICE ONE BOSS..



nevertheless.. MONKEY'S ROCK!!

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Originally posted by: mehek_luvD3nTBP

accha tha..
luved the incomplete ending..
and babare...
u started writing comedy..




He ended his sentence with a hope that his mom will finally forget about the topic of his marriage. But at the same time he knew his mom and when she wants something, you can believe that she will get it.

" precisely,...that's why I chose a dancer as my future daughter-in-law.."

She smirked as she saw his sudden expression of confusion. Almost there now she thought to herself.

" she is a dancer?"

He knew he was almost trapped but he had o stay strong at least for some time.

" yes and a great one I might add.."

She smirked as she knew she had got him.

"And you know what ..I have the perfect plan...she is the opening act tonight at some concert..."

She continued on as she saw his interest.

"Okay so..."

She smiled inwardly as she saw his eagerness.

" so , you can see her dance and if you like her then you can go talk to her."

Check and mate she thought to herself as she saw her sons face which was filled with a combination of curiosity and anxiousness

" can I take swayam with me?"

She smirked once more as she mentally prepared herself for the arrival of her new daughter-in-law , taani shekawat ...I mean taani singhania


[/B]luved this part..
and then this sentnce and i really felt on the floor..🤣[/B]

"Wow..Rey she was amazing..I think you should..."

Swayam turned around only to see an empty chair next to him which was once occupied by a reyansh singhania. He smirked to himself and proceeded to hail a cab.

i could actuall imagine that scene..
NICE ONE BOSS..



nevertheless.. MONKEY'S ROCK!!


Hehe thanks maggi and monkeys are nice too😊
But still pandas rock

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