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Originally posted by: hirudawda

Fab os 👏

Great os reallly loved it :)

Originally posted by: vijichandran

awesome os...

compltly mesmerizing...

superb

Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA

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YAY!!!PANDAS ROCK ONCE AGAIN!!!

~~~~~~CHAK DE PHATTE PANDAS!!!~~~~~~

Angel! 🤗 This was just amazing. Like seriously. I so so so loved it. I'll start from the top:

Loved the beginning. Rey's mom is real nice. I love her. 😆 She knows him in and out. I loved the way she made him go and meet or see Taani. 😳

And then at the venue of the performance. Loved the way you wrote Rey's emotions and his feelings. Amazing. And after that the dance and the description.. Beautiful. Out of the world! Loved each and every bit of the song sequence.

And after that when Swayam was saying something to Rey and he found that he had already left was just way too cute. So sweet. :* <3

And then TR first convo.. :* Loved this part personally:

He was nervous. For a completely different reason. He was in love with her , but it doesn't mean that she will be in love with him too. He need to make a good impression . He asked around for taani shekawat and finally found her surrounded by a group of people, probably congratulating her for her mind blowing performance. He found his feet walking towards her even before his command. I guess now he had to get used to it because he knew this feeling was not going aah any time soon. Finally after what seemed like a eternity he reached her. He cleared his throat and she turned around in slow motion of course.

Seriously, Angel. This was so damn amazing. I am so glad I gave you this challenge. Will give you more if ideas pop in my head. 😆 But this one was amazingly written. 👏

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Angel! 🤗 This was just amazing. Like seriously. I so so so loved it. I'll start from the top:

Loved the beginning. Rey's mom is real nice. I love her. 😆 She knows him in and out. I loved the way she made him go and meet or see Taani. 😳

And then at the venue of the performance. Loved the way you wrote Rey's emotions and his feelings. Amazing. And after that the dance and the description.. Beautiful. Out of the world! Loved each and every bit of the song sequence.

And after that when Swayam was saying something to Rey and he found that he had already left was just way too cute. So sweet. :* <3

And then TR first convo.. :* Loved this part personally:

He was nervous. For a completely different reason. He was in love with her , but it doesn't mean that she will be in love with him too. He need to make a good impression . He asked around for taani shekawat and finally found her surrounded by a group of people, probably congratulating her for her mind blowing performance. He found his feet walking towards her even before his command. I guess now he had to get used to it because he knew this feeling was not going aah any time soon. Finally after what seemed like a eternity he reached her. He cleared his throat and she turned around in slow motion of course.

Seriously, Angel. This was so damn amazing. I am so glad I gave you this challenge. Will give you more if ideas pop in my head. 😆 But this one was amazingly written. 👏

Originally posted by: Angel-luvs-s

Hehe thanks shreya 🤗

Anyways better be careful when u give me the next challenge cos pandas are winning...anyways thanks for the challenge I really enjoyed writing it and I am super excited to read yours 😳

😳 Gonna start working on it real soon.

Originally posted by: raveena1

nyc...😊

Simply awesome os angel ...uff padas r going to win i guess 😆

OMG!
The concept given was hatke and restricted but you really executed it well. I was giggling when Rey's mom was convincing him and blushing when he saw Taani.
Really well written!