ShaReYam OS: The ShaReYam Day

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User123

@UserM123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Hey dear, I loved it :D
the bond between shareyam was beatifully penned... :D
all In all A Great Os...
Awesum Work:D
Love,
MiNi :D

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Kanchan Agrawal

@KaNcHaN_06

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

it was awsome...

so well written...

👏👏

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awesome one shot...And i just loved to read u'r OS in sharon POV...The bond of ShaReyam is beautifully penned as well as described...That was perfect..

All the certain emotions and feelings of sharon for swayam is beautifully expressed...After long she admits her love for swayam...And then i really liked that part of sharon where she going to meet swayam's dad and making him know about swayam qualities and talent. ..

And last shareyam part was great..their hug..their understanding and all of them was perfect and amazing..I really enjoyed..

Great work

Prateek

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kshitija

@--Kshitz--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey...awesome os...loved the shareyam bond...its the best friendship example and loved the way u showed it...sharons concern n love for swayam , she made Mr shekawat realise wat swayam is...swayam is happy bt missing rey...then hyper Sharon telling the truth...ended with the trio hug...sharon writing in her dairy... The shareyam day...
Loved the light hearted and sweet os...superb...!!!!!

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-.Nisha.-

@-.Nisha.-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Amy 🤗🤗
I so missed ur write-ups 😳
Awesome os..
loved the way you showed shareyams' bond..
thanks for the pm !

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

beautiful n awesome os.. loved d way u showed swaron n d way sharon made swayam's dad understand d gem of son he had n brought them together,... loved d way sharon promised that she ll not make swayam unhappy n ll always make him feel spl n make him happy.. loved d way sharon was not able to ontrol herself n said everything to swayam n d way swayam hugged rey n then al 3 hugged was best... they started to cal d day shareyam day.. awesome... i always love reyam sharey kriyam nicky bros friendship in d show... loved ur os...

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Sanjana

@sweet_sanju

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

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Nice OS👏
Sharon POV Expressed beautifully😊
Sharon help in making his dad understand Swayam
loved the ways u portrayed ShaReYam emotion...hug nd ShaReYam Day
Amazing work
Awesome...⭐️⭐️

Edited by sweet_sanju - 12 years ago