Swaron OS: Bachelor's Party

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

it was such an enjoyable OS 😃
beautifully written 👏
the bachelor party thing was fun 😆
and then the apologizing part was adorable 😳
thanks for the PM dear 🤗

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@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow

it was really nice os

loved it

amazing

the bachelor party was fun

and the sorry wala part

hai!!!! 😳

thank you for the pm so much

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shantanu.swayam
I loved this OS!
It was so light-hearted.
An absolute pleasure to read! :D
I loved how you showed both versions of Sharon, Siren Sharon and Swayam's Sharon.
And humaare Swayam ke baare mein main kya bolun?
Haaaye!
He's just the best thing in the world!

P.S- If it's not too much to ask, could you continue this and write about their wedding and Swayam's sweet revenge?
Pretty please!
Don't kill me for the request.

Please feel free to put forth your request... waise i don't mind writing the next part (wedding and d naughty revenge)... just gimme some time 😊

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Sneha

@Mohit_monaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

this was such a sweet OS...

loved it alot <3

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hey really a nice one...very cute like always swaron are...awsm piece of writing i think u should write more and more like this one...yet another beautiful piece of writing by you...

Rohan 😊

P.S.: THNX FOR THE PM . KEEP SENDING THEM. UPDATE LIFE IS NOT ALWAYS EASY SOON!!

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Cute & adorable OS...

Loved the funny part...the romantic bits as well😊

A refreshing piece of work😳

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Thank you all!...🤗 i wasn't actually expecting such a nice feedback... thank u so much fr appreciating my work... its actually awesome fun writing about Swaron ... I wish mere schooling ke waqt mujhe essays and story writing main bhi itna maza aata 😛 😉 but hard luck... anyways thank u again and these comment actually encourage to write more 😃

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: rohanmalhotra15
hey really a nice one...very cute like always swaron are...awsm piece of writing i think u should write more and more like this one...yet another beautiful piece of writing by you...

Rohan 😊

P.S.: THNX FOR THE PM . KEEP SENDING THEM. UPDATE LIFE IS NOT ALWAYS EASY SOON!!

Firstly thank u and secondly i shall update the SS by 2mrw 😃

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shantanu.swayam

@shantanu.swayam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: smartypantstanu

Please feel free to put forth your request... waise i don't mind writing the next part (wedding and d naughty revenge)... just gimme some time 😊

Yaaayy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you!!!!!!!!! 😃

I didn't know that you were a writer, so didn't think you'd be very enthusiastic about my request.

Glad to know that you don't mind writing another part to this one.😊

Take your time. 😊

Vaise, I write too.

Though I don't think I'm good enough to be called a writer.

Anyway, I sent you a buddy requst.

Please PM me when you update. 😊

Edited by shantanu.swayam - 12 years ago