|| Till My Last Breath|| A SwaRon Os ~ - Page 3

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

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<p align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">hey my kiddo🤗 </font></p>
<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I am finally unreserving my comment here...i loved this Oneshot...ur best work till date..loved the way u showed the flashbacks...the perfect blend of emotions...u kept the characters as real as possible...i loved the way story moved...</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">The story started with her pain..her agony..beautifully written</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">There she was stting on the window, thinking about him. Why he did that. What went wrong? They were made for each other, but yet not meant to be? They were inseparable. They loved each other, she knew that she meant the world to him, and then what suddenly went wrong? Why did he break up with her, and broke her into pieces? </font></div>
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<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Loved the supportive rey..Sharey..they r adorable...</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">The proposal was beautiful..cute..adorable...loved the majnu boy...how he poured all his love in those lines...</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">sharon, you are the one I wanna, hold. You are the one I want in my life. You are the one that makes me smile. I do work, just to get your appreciation. You are the diamond in the, bucket full of stones. You are the one I wanna hug from behind. You are the one I wanna share my happiness sorrows with. You are the one whose lips I wanna feel upon mine. You are my life sharon, I cannot live without you. And I don't wanna live without you. One day you don't come to college, I feel restless. Sharon Raiprakash, I Swayam Shekhawat from the bottom of my heart, I say, I love You, I really really Love YOU….. </font></div>
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<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">The Neha-vicky hug and ice cream part..both were cute...loved the way u used metaphor of love through Viha...beautifully written</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">The painful part was so maturely handeled ..loved the letters they wrote to each other...how she left the world for her love and her promise...amazing OS baby...</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Loved it..</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><em>Luv</font></div>
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Originally posted by: tareyfan

a little emotional n sad bt amazing dear ...luvd it

Originally posted by: anandita

mini mah dear jaan ur d best isse better os ff ya ss ho nai sakta..!! its will sound really dumb stupid awkward and dum but on reading each and evry word of this os i was crying like hell..!!! plz yaar continue writing tese ffs and os ur the bes..!!👍🏼

all i could say is that U juzz rock..!!!
and i loved ur ff..!!!

and i wish swaron ki jo stories aap log likhte ho ye relaay kabhi real lyf mein hme dekhne ko mile...!!!
aaj tak kisi story ne hmeitta emotional nai banaya jitta isne bana diya..!!!

Luved it !!!

Originally posted by: sanstina

Amazing Os 😊

Emotions were well described

The pain of separation was beautifully portrayed

Sorry for the late comment