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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Omg you are a fantabulous writer I am right now crying while commenting
What an awesome piece of work
Such a tragic os
Lovely
Thanks for the pm

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

😭

uff!!!!! rula diya...after reading this i can just say u r one of d best writers on IF..the emotional bonding n d intensity of love between swaron jo tumne portray kiya hai its just out of d world...jab maine swayam ke death ke baare mein padha toh i thought saare writers swayam ko hi marne mein kyun lage rehte hai...but jab maine last part padha ki sharon swayam ke liye kya karti hai...it was just pure blisss

amazingly written with perfect display of emotions👏 👏

Edited by ChaitraJoshi - 12 years ago

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

res

remind me abt it after saturday

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kshitija

@--Kshitz--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Res..
unres
hey choti wat to say...tune rula diya...still crying...its awesome...the start sharey friendship ,swaron confessions their break up,sharon's shattered life her love for swayam small cute swaron moments just outstanding...and the end their death...bahut jyada shocking.emotional tha and even unexpected what Sharon did...hats off yaar the way u showed their un conditional and selfless love is so like swaron i could imagine swayam and Sharon in each situation bas end me imagine nahi ho paya... It was so touchy...
I loved it... A Lottt and u even made me cry...

Edited by KS_SWARON - 12 years ago

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

amazing os

u made me cry 😭

bt i loved it 🤗

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Damn...

that made me cry...

i don't really know what to say right now...

that was really powerful and...

heart wrenching..very deep...

i don't know what to say...

so im just gonna say a great piece of writng...

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Vishwa

@-Inferno-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

OMG!
That was heartbreaking!
Throughout the OS I thought that Sharon had been upset about the break up and there might have been some other reason for it. BUT...the end... that was just SO SO SO SAD!
But all the flashbacks and the memories and the way you described the pain Sharon felt...it was beautiful!

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

OMG it was so awesome!!
I am simply speechless ..
it was totally heartbreaking 😭
the way you wrote it.. is simply amazing.. hats off girl!! 👏
u made me cry 😭
the last letters by Swayam and Sharon was simply amazing... ❤️
the memories
specially the ice-cream part 😳
in short awesome OS 👍🏼

thanks for the PM dear 🤗

Edited by prakriti4u - 12 years ago