Only Mine - A KriYaansh OS - Challenged. - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
heya fida..
initially when I came across this challenge on that thread.. I thought of it to be a mush one.. but I didnt think of it to be like this.. like a total filmy drama.. and twist turns.. you did the unpredictable way

Rey ko kiss yaad hai.. aur admiring Kria.. Kria is also staring him.. intensely.. hayeee

Rey had gone to Kria for setting her up with Shivam, the Chee-vam.. I mean really isse aur kisi ko nahi mila help karne ke liye..

what else expected from Cheevam the monster.. ab isse pitne kya faida pehle you help him and then punch him uff iss Rey ka kuch nahi ho sakta..
she already knew about him helping that Cheevam..

party bhi full of surprises this.. or I should say explosives.. 🤣 I was literally laughing at the entire scenario..

OMG.. he has grown possessive.. protective.. haye..
dont wear such dresses when you cant carry it..😲
oh hello.. its not her fault if you cling to her all the time how would she manage her dress, Idio..

now a new start for the love birds..

great but wasnt it too filmy.. 😆
Anyways kabhi kabhi aise write ups bhi padhne chahiye. after all one even needs to laugh. and should get some light content to read 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
haaawww!!!!!!!!!!! chooo chhhwwweeet!!!!!!!!!! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
res ok Done
Awosm written 😆😆
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

wow... u know how to carry a challenge very well 😃

the way u make a story is superb 👏

bloody shivam ki kriya pe buri nazar 😲

& rey helping him to win her 🤢

achha hua rey saved her & even confessed 🤗

psycho shivam.. itna bada neech 🤬

hahaha.. cuckoo clock.. kya guess lagaya rey ne 👍🏼

hot water... inni bedardi.. aah 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
hoaaaw...😲
was this written on what i challenged u..
i also thought it would come out mushy mushy...
as i just wrote what i saw around me..
but look at this!!
this is mind-blowing and fantastic..!!
and itna filmy,..
neha ka bhoot lag gaya aapko diii...
i mean wow!!
first towel.. then co-incidences..
i dnt know how 2 appreciate it..
OMG shivam.. cheeapo..
and the gown and cleavage part.. me ROFL'ing..
at all luved this OS!!
mera challenge karna successful..
luvya dii..
luved this OS too...


maza agaya read karke..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
mind blowing and sweet and cute os ending ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
wow
amazing loved the challenge
well written os
it was simply amazing
specially the ending
i loved it
thank you for the pm
LOVING readers vs writers
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
fidziii mjhe pata tha ki ye alag sa hoga coz tune mjhe bataya tha, but itna alag😲
itne ideas aate kahan se hai tere paas...
so shuruwat mein hi Rey, Kria ke bedroom mein...not bad😉
n use yaad bhi hai that they kissed last night😳...bt dar raha hai ki kahin kuch aur na hua ho, chahe dil ke kisi kone mein ladoo phoot rahe ho😆...
ahh!!! Kria in white dress n with we hair must be looking like an angel
bas phir kya Rey toh pauhoch gaye apne Krialand mein...sir dard bhi gayab😆
bt yahann to Kria bhi khoyi hui hain Rey mein😳...
uff dis cuckoo clock😡 acha khasa kiss karne wale the...huh...
ok, so their destination is same...mjjhe yahin pe hua tha shak...
arghhh!!!!!dis shivam is such a...🤬 n Rey ke do thappad padne chahiye kiski help karne chala hai😡...bt iss baar uski galti ni hai
dikha hi diye shivam ne apne standards🤢...thank god Rey reached there on time warna meri Kria sorry Rey ki Kria😆 ka kya hota😭
bht acha kia garam paani daal diya, balki puri bucket hi daal deta uss cheapster ke upar😡
hayee Rey ne kya mast confess kiya...with all possessiveness
toh Kria already knew abt d whole thing n decided to play along n finish it off, smarty😳
toh business party, bt Kria needs a dress...yeh ladkiyan bhi na😆
Kria in royal blue gown n Rey in blach tuxedo kya mast lag rahe honge dono😉
everyone is oogling at Kria😆 bechara Rey😉
uff yeh shivam apni chindi harkato se baaz ni aaega na kbhi...idiot😡
gadhe ki wajah se puri party ka satyanaash ho gya🤢
wahan sab dar se mare ja rahe hain n Rey apni Kria pe mare ja rahe hain😆ab kya kare Kria hai hi itni achi😆
aakhir Rey ne dhoond hi liya bomb...smarty Rey😉
shivam ke sath bht acha hua he deserves this😡
Rey, we know that u r over possessive for Kria bt aise bolne ka kya😛
atlast they kissed☺️...Kriyaansh hayyyeee

loved it fiduuu❤️
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
luved it!
perfectly written!
Aswm os nd thnx!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
DAT WAS INTERESTING

AMAZING work

Hadn't expected it to be turn out dis way after reading the challenge hint

LOVED IT :)

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