Only Mine - A KriYaansh OS - Challenged.

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Heyy guys... I'm here with one more OS and the concept of this was challenged by mehek aka mehek_luvD3nTBP.😉

challenged concept - KR, clock, tv, hot water, ice-cream😊
So here you go...hope you like it maggie, this has turned a little weird and filmy I suppose...a little deviated from the concept you had in mind maybe 😆
And all My Readers..hope you love and enjoy this work as well...😛😃

Only Mine - A KriYaansh OS

It was a bright morning... Rey slightly stirred in his sleep and slowly opened his eyes to adjust to the morning sunlight.


He felt his head throbbing and he knew then that he had been drinking a lot last night..


As he sat up on the bed, gradually last night events began playing again in his head.. Though the images were blurred he could easily guess he had been with Kriya.


As realization dawned upon him, he quickly looked around to find himself in Kriya's house! On her bed!
He remembered a little..about the kiss they shared... But then what had happened? Did he...?
The more force he put into thinking, the more unbearable his headache became.


Suddenly, he heard the washroom door open.. And the view in front of him again made him forget everything.. Even his headache for a while.


There stood Kriya, drying her wet hair with a towel and in a white dress.
There was not trace of makeup on her face..and yet she looked divine.


She turned to look at whether he was awake.. And her eyes met with his again.
She turned crimson on finding him looking at her as if she was the last girl on earth!


She slowly walked towards the side table and handed him the lime water and tablet that she'd kept before going for a bath.


It was only then that Rey came out of his trance and quickly lowered his gaze from her.
He dint know how to face her after last night.. He remembered the kiss..and just that thought made him feel like kissing her then and there!


He slowly got out of the blanket and took the lime juice and tablet from.

This time it was Kriya's chance at stealing glances of Rey...that too a shirtless Rey. Even though she wanted to, she was finding hard it to divert her gaze from him.
And as he drank the entire glass of juice in a gulp, a few drops had managed to flow down his throat and onto his chest... This sight made him look more appealing to Kriya and she could do nothing but gulp hard.


As Rey finally looked up again, he was again met with those almond shaped eyes of Kriya..which potrayed so many emotions at once that he found it difficult to read them.


His eyes slowly made its way towards her parted lips.. And all he wanted was to feel those under his.
Unknowingly both of them slowly started moving towards each other..
Silence and their eyes speaking out all their feelings as they came closer..


Just when their lips were about to meet... Their perfect moment was interrupted by the Cuckoo Clock!


Both jerked back as they realized what they had been upto..silently cursing the continuous chirping of the clock, whereas an awkward silence prevailed between them.


'I'm sorry... And last night..' Rey finally broke the silence.


'Nothing happened.. Last night nothing happened between us.. And whatever little that did happen, you were drunk! So it's not an issue' Kria said.


Rey looked at her with wide eyes! At how easily she said all those.. As if it did'nt matter to her at all.. Did'nt it?


'Then can we get going? I have a meeting at the Manuelson's Hotel with one of my clients..' Kriya said.


'Yea sure.. I too.. Wait! Did you say Manuelson's? I am conducting a meeting there too with one of my... Partner's'. said Rey.


'Well.. Then get ready and let's get going...' said Kriya and she went off to get ready.


***


They finally pulled to the Hotel's entrance and got out of Rey's car.


'So where is your meeting to be held..?' asked Rey.


'Not informed yet.. I guess I will have to wait for my call.' replied Kriya.


'Right.. I and my friend are to hold the meeting in the adjoint meeting hall.. And I also have a room booked in my room until the meeting is set to begin, so if you need anything I am just a call away..' Rey spoke and made his way inside, whereas Kriya waited in the lobby itself.


***


Rey was about to enter his room when he thought to check on his friend first.


Rey knocked and got in...
Only to be welcomed by a beaming Shivam..


'Rey tune finally apna kaam kar diya! I am so happy.. Today after such a long wait I can get her all to myself!' said a happy Shivam.


Rey understood who Shivam was refering to... But how had he helped him? Though he had told he would.. He had still not come around to doing it...


'But Shivam maine kya kiya..? I mean.. Yea help karunga bola tha but.. Abhi se hi why you so happy?' asked a confused Rey.


'What you talking about dude? She is here is'nt she.. Ofcourse she came with you.. Ab jaldi jaa, I am going to call her in anytime..' said an impatient Shivam, almost pushing Rey out of his room.


Rey was still confused.. He had'nt bought Kriya here.. She herself had told that she had a meeting with a client! What the hell is going on??


Rey was very much concerned about her well being but decided to wait so as to find what was happening.
He knew he was also at fault for all this mess... He wish he'd not decided to listen to Shivam this time.


Flashback *** - 2 weeks back


'I want her... I want her at any cost! That Girl has not allowed me to sleep peacefully since I first laid my eyes on her! And now I want you to help me get her... You will help me wont you??'


'Ofcourse bro... But how come you need my help this time? You've always got the girl you wanted without even having to try! Phir iss baar kya hua Shivam??'


Shivam just shrugged and replied.. 'Iss baar ladki alag hai.. Rey! She's different dude. And that makes her even more appealing... Infact I so want her that I think maybe even 2 weeks would be Very less with her...!'


'2 weeks?! You must be kidding me.. Since college itself the maximum you've been with a girl is 5 days right?? Iss baar seedhe 2 weeks! Aisa kya hai iss ladki mein? Kahi pyaar vyaar ka chakkar toh nahi hai..?' asked Rey teasing his cousin come bestie.


'Pyaar vyaar ka toh pata nahi... But ab ke liye I am just bothered to get her in my arms and...' but Shivam was cut in between by Rey.


'Ohk ohk... Please keep your bedroom secrets to yourself.. And fine, Im ready to help you jaisa bhi help tu chahta hai.. But upon one condition, Just remember that...' This time Rey was cut by shivam.


'Haan haan I know.. No playing with feelings and No cheating, and the girl must know if I am not serious before koi commitment. Yes boss I got it ! This is the 100th time You are telling me this...' Shivam said little irritated.


*** Flashback ends


And that was it.. Shivam had given the whereabouts of Kriya and Rey was on his mission to help him get her..


She was an owner of an ice-cream shop and he became a regular customer. Slowly they became well acquinted with each other...But things turned upside down when Rey found himself very much attracted towards Kriya in the very first sight..


And though he had other aims in mind.. The more he got to know her, the more he felt pulled towards her!


He himself dint know when and how... But he was very certain that he was head over heels in love with this Girl..


***


Kriya slowly made her way into the room where she was called into.


Just as she entered she was welcomed by a lusty Shivam smiling at her..
The way he looked at her..she felt as if he was undressing her with his eyes.


She was very uncomfortable under his dirty gaze but could do nothing but wait for him to speak..
'So finally you are here Ms. Ghai... Took you a long time though' shivam said.


'You've been pursuing me for long enough.. And today Im here just to get rid of you and your continuous pestering for once and for all!' Kriya replied angrily.


'You know what.. You look even more tempting when you're angry! Like red hot types... And you really dont know what I want from you...?' Shivam asked,taking small steps towards her.


Kriya knew his intentions right then.. She thought he would back out when he understood she's not interested, but things were seeming to take an ugly turn...
She quickly turned and almost bolted the door open when she was pulled back harshly..


***


Rey heard the commotion from Shivam's room and knew something must be wrong.. He quickly went towards the room which was luckily unlocked, but the sight infront of him made him freeze.


There Shivam was trying to push Kriya onto the couch nearby... and she was struggling to get his grip off her..tears continuously making their way out of her eyes.


Rey had never in his dreams thought that Shivam could stoop so low to force himself upon a girl. He'd always thought him to be honest with all the girls he dated, he thought Shivam would always follow his advice and never cross limits with a girl without her consent...


Rey dint know how to react. He wanted to save Kriya, and also hurt his bro come bestie very badly.. Yet he could'nt bring himself to physically harm him... And at the same time Shivam needed to learn his lesson.


He searched for anything, anything that he could attack with and save Kriya..


His eyes landed on the water cooler + heater at one end of the room.
Without further thinking, he took a mug of hot boiling water and the next moment splashed it over Shivam's back that was facing him..


Shivam yelped loudly and almost jumping and shrieking in pain, turned towards Rey shocked..


Kriya quickly got up and Rey went and stood before her, as if shielding her from Shivam and his lusty looks!


'Yeh tumne theek nahi kiya Shivam! I never expected this behaviour from you towards any girl... And especially towards Kriya dammit! This is the first and last chance I am giving you... Now it was just boiled water on your back.. Next time seedhe mooh pe hoga! And you would be in no condition to walk for years then...'warned a furious Rey.


Shivam just looked down ashamed at himself for breaking his bestie's trust.


Rey held Kriya by the shoulder and was almost making his way out..when he turned again.
'And yes.. Aaj se Kriya ki taraf apni buri nazar uthakar dekhna bhi mat.. Bhabhi hai teri. I love her! So next time I Will not tolerate such behaviour... Chahe jo bhi ho, even if I need to kill you I wont hesitate!' Rey spoke shooting daggers at Shivam.


He then turned towards Kriya who just stood with her mouth open.


Here she had been dying to listen to those words from him... And when he confessed.. He freaking confessed his love for her to that moron!


But yet.. She could'nt help but feel immensely happy at his confession.


***


Rey took Kriya towards his room in the Hotel and made her sit on the bed.
He kneeled infront of her and made her face him..


'I am really sorry Kriya.. All this is my fault..' Rey said feeling guilty and his eyes filled with tears.


'Sshh.. Mujhe sab pata tha..' said Kriya.


Rey looked up at her with wide eyes.. He had'nt expected this. Infact he had been so scared that he might lose her forever after this.


'Kal raat.. Jab tum nashe mein the and you had come to my home drunk.. Tumne sab kuch bata diya tha Rey..
And that is the reason I decided to play along and accompanied you here. To end this once and for all. Mujhe pata hai tumhare intentions galat nahi the... And I love you too much to let go off you for this!' finally Kriya confessed her feelings along with everything else to Rey.


Rey was left stunned..to know that she loved him, and was glad that she'd forgiven him..


They both looked deeply into each others eyes, his hand still holding her's..
Love was all about what both of them felt now..
They felt content, complete.. And wished that they could pause the time this very moment. Everything looked beyond perfect in the other's presence.

They slowly inched forwards..this time both conscious and aware of the other's feelings. Their lips were just about to meet when their moment was disturbed by the continuous knocking at the door.


Rey sighed and got up. He made his way towards the door, whereas Kriya sat there blushing..


A while later he walked in, informing her about the business party they were supposed to attend in an hour..


'But Rey I am not dressed up for an evening party..' kriya said


'Well you look fine right now.. Infact you look good in anything..but if it bothers you I'll send you some dresses, just select what you like..' Rey assured her.


In about 15 minutes Rey was all ready for the business party.. He wore a black tuxedo and a crisp white shirt. He looked extremely handsome in his attire.. And Kriya could just gawk at his perfect body and face..


He smirked to himself and went close to Kriya.. Kriya felt suddenly conscious of their proximity..
He went towards her ears and whispered..'Im all your's'..leaving behind a blushing Kriya,who had turned crimson by now.


He left the room giving her a wink and asking her to get ready fast and join him.


***


Kriya got ready as soon as Rey got out..
She selected a royal blue evening gown that tailed behind her.. The gown was strapless and gave a glimpse of her deep cleavage.


With her hair pinned up and some makeup, Kriya looked ready to kill.


She left the room and made her way gracefully towards the business hall in search of Rey.


***


Rey was busy in meeting different clients and making some comfortable..as this party was being conducted by His very own company.


After settling all and making them comfortable, he was eagerly waiting for Kriya..when one of the waiter's handed him a drink.
Rey took it gladly and just when he had taken a gulp, he saw something written on the tissue below the glass he held.. It read..
'Kriya.. If she's not mine, she does'nt deserve to be alive'.

The very next moment Rey frantically searched the hall to get even the slightest glimpse of her.. Hoping she's safe and fine.. finally his eyes landed on her, standing in one corner. And the next moment he made a sprint towards her.


***


Kriya had reached the party hall a few minutes back, but was'nt able to locate Rey yet..


She was feeling a little uncomfortable among so many people whom she dint even know.
And also under the many different looks people were giving her. Some men looked at her with lust, whereas women with pure envy.


She had just reached one corner of the hall when she was tapped at the shoulder. She turned around to find a waiter holding out an ice cream bowl in front of her..
It was her favourite flavour..dark chocolate. So without thinking twice, she grabbed the bowl with a small thankyou to the waiter.


Without wasting another second, she was about to devour it... when a running Rey harshly pushed the bowl out of her hold.. Sending it flying down and scatter on the floor!


Kriya angrily turned towards Rey..and was about to ask an explaination for his behaviour when the lights of the hall dimmed out suddenly..
And the large LCD television was switched on.


All the guests stood there confused.. as none of them were informed about any presentation to be held..


But even before anyone could question.. a booming voice and a wickedly smiling Shivam appeared onscreen.


'You cant be there for her always bro.. *he laughs*.. I wanted her so bad! I still do... Aur agar yeh itni ziddi nahi hoti toh yeh jo hone wala hai kabhi nahi hota! *he laughs again*
I have been obsessed and craving for you since i first saw you Kriya! Aur ab after all these efforts.. Tum aur Rey saath mein?! Never! Kabhi nahi.. Agar tum meri nahi ho saki... Toh kisi ki nahi ho sakti Kriya! This place blows down in 5 minutes... And even if you try none of you can get out here in time since we're on the topmost and 20th floor now! Tch tch.. Kriya just because of your decision dekha ktine logo ko saza mil rahi hai... Goodbye!' And the screen went blank.


All of them had shocks and looks of horror on their faces. Kriya was too shocked to react to what just happened!
She had not expected this in her dreams..to be stalked by some obsessed and psychic guy! And to top ending in such a situation where her life is in danger..along with many other's just because of her psychic stalker!


Rey was the first one to recover from what his bestie and so called 'cousin' had gotten them into.
He knew this is not the time to panic..which was exactly a vast majority were doing.


'Guys please.. Dont panic! And stay in your places.. There's no use trying to rush out other than maybe cause a stampede and make the situation worse! I think right now we must be more concerned to track where exactly the bomb has been set... So please co operate' Rey said..and was successful enough for all to calm down at once.


He then turned his attention to look at Kriya.. She still seemed under shock. He slightly shook her..'Kriya..'


She looked up to face him.
'This is soo weird.. And unexpected! But I go with you.. We need to find the source of what could explode soon. Just 4 more minutes left!' Kriya said hurriedly.


Rey for a moment studied her.. She looked absolutely stunning, gorgeous, beautiful and what not in that blue evening gown. His eye automatically went towards it's neckline..and he gulped at what he saw, the strapless dress had went down a bit lower..exposing a little more of her valley.


All he wanted was to grab her and do what not.. But with the situation at hand! Rey knew it was not the time to drool over his girlfriend...


He forced himself to look away from her.


He looked around to find anything of doubt.. Anything at all,but nothing caught his attention. He could see some other's too trying to help him locate the source.


2 minutes had already passed and there was only 2 more minutes left.
Rey had slowly began to lose all hope..
He thought it was better to be near Kriya then, so that if it's all ending it shall still be with both of them together.


He was just about to make his way towards Kriya..when he heard the faint chirping of a cuckoo clock nearby.
That clock had always been his enemy..
And also he hated them and how it might sometimes be a nuisance and spoil any perfect moment...like it had done this morning with Kriya!

He was just thinking when his eyes shot open! He slowly traced the clock at one end of the hall..
He finally found it hung on a corner wall..


He slowly took it in his hands and silently praying turned the clock around..
And to his luck..or suprise.. The bomb was there! Right there!


Without wasting another second.. Rey held the clock a little away from him and quickly made his way to the open balcony of the hall...


All other's had their breaths stuck in their throat as they saw what Rey held in his hand.. It was just a matter of second which would decide if they would survive or not!


Kriya followed Rey right behind him, even on getting angry shouts from Rey to stay away from him.. But she just would'nt leave him alone with that thing in his hand.


Just seconds were left for the bomb to go off and explode..
And that very moment, Rey threw the the clock with all his might outside the balcony..and up in the air.


It went off just a couple of seconds later...
And the hall exploded with applauds for Rey...


They were all fine and without the slightest of injury.. All thanks to Rey and his presence of mind.
None of them could thank him enough..


In about another 5 minutes the police had arrived and had an arrested Shivam in their hold.
Someone had called and informed them regarding the entire thing and so they had tried reaching as soon as they could.
Though they would'nt have been able to make it in time for saving them..


So much had happened in just a course of 10 minutes that It was hard to digest.


Rey went towards Shivam who was under the police hold... And without prior warning just splashed hot boiling water on his face!


He shrieked in pain... Whereas the police officials just looked at Rey stunned.


'Maine kaha tha.. Next time you wont be pardoned Shivam! Yeh ab ke liye... Aur baaki I am sure tumhe kadi se kadi sazaa milegi for having tried to kill so many innocents!' Rey spoke in a dangerously high pitched voice. He just pushed Shivam and told the officials to keep him updated about Shivam.. So as to make sure he never gets out of prison and also face maximum penalty.. If death the better! Rey thought bitterly.


Atlast after all the chaos Rey looked around for Kriya.. Only not to find her anywhere near his sight. A fear gripped him and he started searching for her in every nick and corner..


***


Kriya stood in the open balcony.. Where just a few minutes back all the commotions had taken place.
She was glad.. Glad that all were safe.. Glad that Shivam was behind the bars (she had seen the police get him and also at what Rey did)... And also glad that She and Rey were finally together after the roller coaster ride!


So much had happened today..
In one way it was a nightmare..all thanks to Shivam..
And on the other hand..it was the best and most beautiful day of her life, as She and Rey had confessed today!


She was lost in these thoughts..when she felt a sudden pull on her arm, and the next moment she was facing a concerned Rey..


'You were here! Bol toh diya hota.. I was so scared when I dint find you!' Rey told his concerns.


'I am fine Rey.. Just needed some air to digest everything that happened today' Kriya said taking a deep breath.


Rey just nodded and took her in a warm and soothing hug.
Though the hug was supposed to be a comforting one,the mere contact of Kriya's bare shoulders and exposed valley with Rey's bare chest created sparks and desires within them.


The hug turned more and more passionate every passing second..
Rey suddenly pulled back, with desire and need quite visible in his eyes..


But what he did was take his coat off and put it over Kriya..
''Dont wear such dresses when you cant carry them off' Rey told Kriya protectively. Refering to her dress which had lowered and was showing more than required.


Even before Kriya could utter a word, his mouth came over her's taking her in rough and passionate kiss.
She tasted so delicious and he felt like having more and more of her.
This time luckily there was'nt anything or anyone to disturb their private moment..


They finally parted for breath.. But Rey continued planting wet kisses along her exposed skin through his coat..

He had almost lost his control when he felt Kriya trying to pull back..
He realized they were still in open and quickly pulled back from her.


After giving a peck again on her lips, Rey gently held Kriya's hand in his and both made their way out of the hotel.


Kriya rested her head on his chest..still holding hands,both walked out.
'I love you Rey...' Kriya whispered, as they neared his car.
'And I Love You...' Rey replied pecking her on the forehead.

Even after facing so much in just one day, what mattred most was.. that now they were together... and will continue being so in this lifetime.
They took off from the hotel.. Welcoming their new relation and the new phase of Life, filled with Love that awaits them ahead.
*** The end ***
Hope it was okk...and not that weird😆😆
dont forget to like and post your reviews...
looking forward to them!😊
Love you All ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is amazing.
Love the concept and the story.
Rey's protective nature is so cute !
Hate that shivam !!!!


Edited by sanjana_D3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res !

unres!

it was super duper awesome

i really dnt have wrds to express
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW Awesome OS 👏
Loved It 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow di'
awesome work
hr8 job
awesome concept
luvd it
u described it well
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Superb os
shivam is really at physco n rey gave him a very good punishment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Absolutely amazing os 😃
Loved the concept a lot...especially the part about the cuckoo clock
And of course it's not at all weird...in fact it's too damn good!!
Loved it a lot 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os...
concept was superb...
written so well...
loved it...
thnx for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...

sabse best tha filmy style...

loved it...

was cute and sweet... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome... .😊

wow.. 👏

amazing..!!!! 👍🏼

luved it.. ❤️

keep writing more...

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