SwaRon OS- Zara zara behekta hai..( Replies from Page 5)

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Rajeshwari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Good job!!
Tks for the pm.

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d00dle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

A beautiful piece of writing! ❤️

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bhavika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

it was ossam mihika...kash asa D3 me b hota...

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Tooba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Amazingly written... Each n every step which dey did in show u xplained it very beautifully...👍🏼

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sky_fighter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

when was this zara zara sequence 😕
other then that awesome os thoroughly enjoyed it

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Nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Love the os :-) the confession was so sweet

Loved how they were battling their inner feelings

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Nivriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Mihika, wonderful OS! The confession was really beautiful!

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Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

I wish the creatives of the show would have read this OS before shooting Zara Zara🤔You penned it down so well. Right from beginning to the end. The way you described the dance as well as their feelings was just perfect. Poor Swayam, he was torn between wanting Sharon and keeping his promise. Thank God Sharon made it easy for him.😆The ending was heavenly. Unlike the no-ending sequence we were shown on tv, you described a very beautiful confession between the two. The last few lines were very nice. All in all, amazing OS.😳

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago