SwaRon OS- Zara zara behekta hai..( Replies from Page 5) - Page 4

Originally posted by: sanstina

Beautifully penned 😊

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey Mihi🤗
Hey di 😛
U are such a versatile writer...I LOVE ur writing style...the way handle concepts and moods...lovelyyy...this particular sequence to be frank I didn't like...i guess none of us..due to obvious reasons...we were craving from something like this...it was such a promising track...and it was ruined...
I ? NOBODY liked this 😳 Yup..A promising track was completely shattered thanks to the CVs 😡
U gave ZARA ZARA the way we wanted it to be...it was sweet..passionate...intense...emotional...Sharon...who just realized her LOVE for Swayam...how it would affect her to come close to him after the realization...sparks r bound to fly...Loved sharon's monologues...loved the fact that it was from Sharon's POV...her love for him..her wish to be with him...was BEAUTIFULLY described..
Really? I thought I did not do justice to it 😆 I am not sarcastic! Seriously saying 😆

Sharon didn't care... Her heart was beating at an abnormal speed, chanting his name. .To be with him at that hour of night was not less than a dream for her..

U said u are not good at writing confessions...I would LOVE to see this confession..it was beautifully ...LOVED IT...

I still think I suck at writing confessions 😆

"It's me right?"

"What?" He asked her narrowing his lids, but not facing her.

"The person closest to you... It's me...You can't lie Swayam.. At least not to me... You'll be caught..And I hate liars."

He turned to face her...

She skated towards him and without him realizing it, gave a small peck on his cheek. Swayam was dumbstruck. He didn't know how and what to react...

"I hope this gives you your answer Swayam.. How much special you are' to me.."

He didn't understand. Too many shocks in a single day.. He was too shocked to reply.

"Don't look so confused." She let out a smile. "I love you.. It only means that I love you."

These my officially my fav lines of this OS😆😳

I too loved them 😛

"I love you...honestly...intensely.. Deeply.. Passionately..Unduly.. Completely...and most importantly..Eternally." That smile was still there.(AWWW😳😳😳)

Hehe 😆

"I'm going to make the most of this opportunity madam.. You are officially a part of me now."(dreaming😳..majnu boy is back)

Loved the OS swtrhrt..ur versatility makes me spellbound every time..

Awwh thanks a tonnn di 😃

Love

Deep

Originally posted by: cscs

mihika..its lovely😊..i really liked hw u describe sharon emotions wid d lyrics of d song...which v didnt get in real sequence... sharon was wearing white..hayye majnu n laila both in white😳..

sharon realizing swayam's importance in her lyf and her importance in swayam's lyf too..dis is d essence of dere luv story..dey both complete each other..

n ending..it was ekdum mast😉..

thank u fr writing such a cutey os...v all badly need to read such os n ffs..

Originally posted by: epiphany.

You write well. It's plain, needs honing but you're good. 👍🏼 This was borderline cheesy, that much I can handle. It did not bore me, dun you worry. Thanks for the PM and keep writing if that makes you happy, because I know it's well, surreal to eventually discover the writer that lives within you. (:

Kankshita

Originally posted by: nayanit

really nice...wishd cvs showd this sequence rather than the current track...

Originally posted by: -shenz-

honestly speaking I dont get the time to watch TV these days.. niether I feel like watching D3 anymore.. since i dont find any sense.. especially about Swaron track.. absolutely and solely my perception..
in short I have no idea about the track.. but after reading this I guess I shouldnt watch it as well.. It definitely lead to disappointment..
well coming to this update.. Swaron os.. it was completely blissful.. emotions n feelings excuted really well.. the way you expressed their POVs was apt..
you definitely are good writing and portraying what we viewers expect from the CVs.. keep it up.. doing a great job..

Originally posted by: SwaRon_rocks

Hey Mihika why dont u give a thought to my wish after reading ur os's..i mean u should seriously join palki mam...gosh u r such an amazing writer...lovely os...u say u suck at writing confessions but this line was my fav-

"I love you...honestly...intensely.. Deeply.. Passionately..Unduly.. Completely...and most importantly..Eternally."

Beautiful os...thanks for the pm