SwaRon OS- a song of ice and fire

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys...
i m back one more OS..hahaha..after long tym precap inspired me to write something soo here i m...ppl r predicting many situation...d sequence of scene dat gonna happen nxt week..bt i want d sequence just like it was in precap...coz if it will b i cn relate d dat particular SwaRon track wid a part f the movie "a walk to remember" wen landon came to knw about jamie's illness...one f d most emotional i ever saw...i wil love to see dat particular sequence in SwaRon style..soo here it is...

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organizers f birthday party called swayam as sharon's cell was out f reach...n dey confirmed d tyming f d birthday event..swayam was shocked coz as per his information sharon has turned off d offer as team dont want to except d offer...d call made him think y sharon has did dat..how cn she take all decision regarding team..she cnt...yes she is d manager f d team bt she take all d decision...he was soo pissed n he just walked straight to d canteen...sharon was der..he walked furiously towards her n questioned her..how cn u take every decision sharon..u cnt..u just cnt...u cnt neglect d decision taken by everyone just coz u r d manager of d team...he was extremely angry on her...bt anger is nt just coz f dat..he was trusted coz of many more reasns also...
wat r u talking about swayam...wat i did..i dont knw wat r u even talking...n she walked out f d canteen...swayam follows her...

he run fast n pulled sharon in d classroom...he locked d gate...he pulled her der nt to talk about d team thing...der is many other questions which r eating up his mind..he want answers f those questions...

sharon i want my answer...u cnt runaway nw coz i wont let u do dat...u have to answer my question..u have to tell me the reasn y u r nt dancing...n wats up wid ur health..have u done wid all d tests??
sharon was struggling to get rid f swayam's grip bt he hold her tight against d wall...swayam leave me just leave me..u have noo right to treat me like dis..just leave me..n started coughing...
swayam loosen his grip n make sharon sit...n he sat on his knees...sharon wat happened..r u f9??i m scared n worried about u...
i m nt a kid swayam..i cn take care f myself...just let me go frm nw..i m feeling suffocated..she said in full attitude..giving glared look to swayam...
just once sharon look into my eyes n say dat u dont miss dance...n by hearing dis sharon lower her eyes coz d truth is still dance is her life...she miss dance like hell..n she knw more one thing dat swayam cn read her eyes...bt still she tried looked straight into swayam's eyes n said..she dont miss dance...dance mean nuthing to her...she tired her level bst to lie bt she cnt lie to swayam...n swayam started laughing...dont lie sharon...coz u cn lie to ny1 bt u cnt lie to me...n sharon knw dat it was d truth...she cnt lie to swayam..swayam started to walk away..bt before opening d door he turns back n said i knw u will nt answer my question bt dat doesnt mean i m nt gonna find dem..n walked out f d class leaving sharon alone...

day passed..clg ends...
swayam was about to leave wen he hears music...he was shocked..who is dancing nw..after clg...everyone left no1 is here as far as he knw...he start walking frm wer d sound if coming...n was he saw after reaching gave him shock f his life...sharon was dancing furiously der..after few mins he walked towards sharon n started dancing...sharon was unaware f dis fact...she is was soo lost in her own thoughts..at places it hard fr swayam to match sharon...he was dancing...on off on off...sharon is still unaware of d fact dat someone is der other den her...she danced around swayam...he holds her..lifts her...bt she is nt sense to think nything...she was dancing n dancing n dancing...n suddenly stated coughing...swayam got scared...he holds her bt she was continuously coughing...she was trying to get rid f swayam's grip he let her gooo...he is still shocked n scared n worried..he follows her...sharon just sat on d stairs n she was trying to find something...swayam was asking her..wat happened sharon..bt sharon was coughing n was just trying to find something in her bag...n finally she find out n took out her hand out f her bag...n something was der in her hands...swayam was sooo shocked to see dat...INHALER...he was nt in state to think nything...he was sooo damm shocked..after few mins sharon felt better n her breathing came back to normal...n she started crying seeing swayam der..in frnt of her..shocked completely clueless...n widout thinking nything she just hugged him..hugged really tightly...n swayam hugged him back...he was still nt sure..bt nw everything started clearing...sharon's cold behaviour towards him..her decision f quitting dancing...swayam dont want to bother sharon nw..soo he just cup her face n start wiping her tears...n sharon was about to said something..swayam...bt he put fingers on her lips...n said noo need to say nything sharon...just remember one thing I WAS..I M...I WILL B THERE FOR YOU..24*7 n he hugged her back...
swayam drop sharon home..gave her d medicines..make her sleep..he was der till d tym sharon fell asleep...n den he left...he left coz he need tym to think...he didnt cried in front of sharon..bt d moment he left sharon's place...tears start falling...he was driving his car..n every picture getting clear...clearer n more clearer nw...sharon's every action frm dance camp...she fainted on stage...n den she went to delhi...she started avoiding him n everyone..her cold behaviour after coming back...her decision f quiiting dance...her coughing at goa...irritation frm dust n dirt...n he was frustrated wid himself...ki how cn he b soo stupid ki he didnt got dis things earlier...he banged his hand on car's staring..n stopped d car...he didn't knw wer he drove his car bt wen he looked around he was standing in frnt of rey's house...he went out of d car...n starting ringing d door bell...rey opened d door...he is shocked by seeing all messi n crying...he closed d door as swayam walked inside...swayam was blabbering something...how cn she hide such a huge thing frm me..how cn she even thibk dat i will stop loving her coz of dis...how cn thought of pushing me away just coz dis lame reasn...y she didnt trusted on my love fr her...my love for her is much more stronger den all dis Stuff...her ILLNESS...n d moment rey hewer d word ILLNESS he shake swayam...swayam...wat happened...wat r u blabbering...who is ill??sha...sha...sharon..n swayam hugged rey tightly...tears start forming in his eyes also as he heard sharon's name...rey make him sat n swayam tell him everything that happened jjust nw...rey was equally shocked...bt swayam himself re gained his senses n said...I WILL NOT LET HER LEAVE ME DIS TYM..I WILL STAND BY HER LIKE A MANN...I WILL BECOME HER SUPPORT SYSTEM...I LOVE HER...N MY LOVE FOR HER IS SUFFICIENT FOR US... rey walked upto swayam n hug him...n said i m proud of yaar...i m soo proud f u...shaton is soo lucky to have u...bt swayam cut him off in middle m said I M LUCKY TO HAVE IN MY LIFE...NOOO BASICALLY SHE IS MY LIFE...both smiled...

swayam take leave frm rey n went staright to sharon's place coz he cnt leave her nw...n he has to make him believe dat he is wid her...soo before she wake up swayam reached her place...her room n saw she is sleeping...he pulled d couch in frnt of her n n sat der admiring her...


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n rosh,tanya,deeps di u guys must be proud of me today..hahaha i have completed an OS in one gooo...šŸ˜†

P.S. hope guys will like dis...do drop your comments..i M waiting...haha n dont kill me after reading dis...

P.S.S. n who dont understand how dis scene relates to "a. walk to remember" i wanna tell u dat..after he came to knw dat jamie is ill...he broke down into piece..he just drive his car to his dad's place as he was a doc to ask of help...n den decided dat he will stand by her like a man...
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SwaRonpankhuri thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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after so long i read an os. Poorvi agar aisa hua den pta nai how u gonna react bt i'l b clapping for u :D
Yeah i too relatd it wid jamie n landon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...but m upset mujhe pm q nahi??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tejukor

Awesome...but m upset mujhe pm q nahi??

i didnt sent pmed abhi tk..will send tomorrow..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaRonpankhuri

after so long i read an os. Poorvi agar aisa hua den pta nai how u gonna react bt i'l b clapping for u :D
Yeah i too relatd it wid jamie n landon

i will die if v Get even 50% f it toh :D
Edited by purvi_91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yes, aaj main itni khush hoon..itni khush hoon ke mat poch kitni khush hun.. main bata nahi paungi! I am proud of you Purvi lazy.. =)

Finally ek shot mein one shot.. šŸ˜†

Well, i liked the OS alot.. but yeah that chatting style wali typing irritates a lot but i know cell pe yeh hi likh lain bohat bari baat hai! 😳

I really like how Swayam decided to be with her from now and love her even more.. ending was so beautiful that he goes to her place again and stayed while admiring her.. I hope hummai D3 main kuch aisa dekhne miley next week..

Nice OS yaar..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Purvi...

Lovely OS re..i am so glad u wrote it at one go..i loved the flow in the whole piece ...
the dance sequence..the conversation..the hug...ahaaa...

The part where swayam realized the truth was epic...well-written...
lovely ending where he decided to stand by her .awww


I love the flow in her writing ...amazing 😳

ps:Loved the name of the OS ..a song of ice n fire..so apt..so swaron

Luv
Deep
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Posted: 12 years ago
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perfect...😊

sharon was dancing her heart out..

ofcourse she's missing dance badly...šŸ˜›

she did'nt even noticed swayam's presence 😳

used inhaler in front of him.. 😲

well thanks to cvs... thats gonna happen finally

good to see her hugging him... like a lover... who's been caught

he too need to shed alot of tears... n pain...

need his bestie's shoulder...

stand like a man for his love... always..šŸ¤—

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomešŸ‘šŸ‘...i really dnt hv words to express my feelings..while reading i could imagine each n every scene...i really wish d same happens in d3..thank u fr dis wonderful os...nw i can wait n survive fr 3 more days fr d actual scene..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really good OS on the pre cap! :)

But I think that instead of hugging him, she's gonna run away from there...idk I just have this feeling :/

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