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Phosphenes

@Phosphenes

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Poorvi di ye kya kar diya! Now the wait for Monday has become more tough!! This OS is amazing and I'm sure when the original sequences (ohh how much I'm loving this thought of so much awesomeness all in one go!! Eee) will be aired, we all will be analysing the heck outta them, each expression, each movement, those teary eyes that are gonna make us all teary..god. This week is gonna be epic! ^_^

And you put it all down into words very nicely! Big jhappi to youu! :D :D

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Dhanya bhaag hai mere pooh ne PEHLI baar One-Shot ko One-Shot rakha😆

coming to the OS...

pehle toh i'll say...m sure the first classroom showdown mein woh reason nahi hone wala...n second swayam rey ke ghar nahi apne ghar hota hai😛

i LOVED the after revelation ke reaction part 😃 i SO think waisa hoga woh...but haan dance toh swayam-sharon ke bich kuch challenge hoga i think :/

PS: kal tu humari baatein padh nahi sakti thi??? kitne ache predictions the wahan...woh use kar leti be thode toh

PPS: your OS has started back my prediction sphere n i'll KILL u, if i cant concentrate on my studies ab😡

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv
Yes, aaj main itni khush hoon..itni khush hoon ke mat poch kitni khush hun.. main bata nahi paungi! I am proud of you Purvi lazy.. =)
hhahahaha yayyy finally u r happy n i proved dat i m NOT LAZY
Finally ek shot mein one shot.. 😆
yes ek shot me one shot 😎
Well, i liked the OS alot.. but yeah that chatting style wali typing irritates a lot but i know cell pe yeh hi likh lain bohat bari baat hai! 😳
yaa re n ab aadat ho gai waise likhne ki bt still nxt tym se i will try to take care of it...
I really like how Swayam decided to be with her from now and love her even more.. ending was so beautiful that he goes to her place again and stayed while admiring her.. I hope hummai D3 main kuch aisa dekhne miley next week..

Nice OS yaar..😃

thank u soo much..n @bold r my reply

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Hey Purvi...

Lovely OS re..i am so glad u wrote it at one go..i loved the flow in the whole piece ...
the dance sequence..the conversation..the hug...ahaaa...
The part where swayam realized the truth was epic...well-written...
lovely ending where he decided to stand by her .awww

I love the flow in her writing ...amazing 😳

ps:Loved the name of the OS ..a song of ice n fire..so apt..so swaron

Luv
Deep

thank u sooo much di...ur comment means alot to me 😳

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
Sweet os :-)

glad u like it 😃

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sweetdivya
nyc 😊

thanks 😃

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sanstina
Beautiful

thank u 😃

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: yogini64
perfect...😊
sharon was dancing her heart out..
ofcourse she's missing dance badly...😛
she did'nt even noticed swayam's presence 😳
used inhaler in front of him.. 😲
well thanks to cvs... thats gonna happen finally
good to see her hugging him... like a lover... who's been caught
he too need to shed alot of tears... n pain...
need his bestie's shoulder...
stand like a man for his love... always..🤗

ahh i just love ur comments...d wy u comment..i love it..u comment on every small thing n it feels gr8...thank u soo much 😳😃

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: cscs
awesome👏👏...i really dnt hv words to express my feelings..while reading i could imagine each n every scene...i really wish d same happens in d3..thank u fr dis wonderful os...nw i can wait n survive fr 3 more days fr d actual scene..😊

haha same here while writing i have imagined every damm scene...i dont knw where dis gonna happen or nt bt i just loved writing it 😃

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ABCDesiGirl93
Really good OS on the pre cap! :)

But I think that instead of hugging him, she's gonna run away from there...idk I just have this feeling :/

if she will run away naa dat will be sooo Sharonish bt i want something different dis tym soo yaa wat else cn be better den a hugs..swaron hug is pure bliss to watch 😳

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