Swaron OS: Shawty's Like a Melody in My Head...

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

i actually love it...incidentally does ur name have a meaning? it sounds so nice.

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

short and sweet.. 😊

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

such a sweet OS keep writing more and longer ones please loved how you described sharon's anger and then swayam didnt speak much as he was all scared.just a hug brought everything sorted that is what swaRon are all about beautifully described!!

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey Lubna!!(I also hav a sis wit d sme name).. Dat was a rly sweet os.. A vry light nd pleasant read.. Luvd d whole concept.. Nd d songs prt ws rly nyc.. Nd it had d signature SwaRon mode.. Sharon upset nd Swayam manofying.. U carried off d whole thng rly well.. Dat portion wen Swayam came out of d car nd hugged ws jst soo swt... Luvd evry bit of dis OS.. Keep writing more...

Edited by tannu_swayam - 12 years ago

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

This is very cute and beautiful OS. Sharon was feeling alone and the best thing was that how Swayam told her that even he is missing her a lot. I really liked it. :D

PM me when you write something again on Swaron.

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

hey why i didnt get any pms for this OS...😕

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Ria

@Ria_SwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hey, that was super cute OS.

You expressed very beautifully the longingness in SwaRon for each other. Loved it to the core. And Justin's "As long As u love me" is my favo.. so it was a bonus to the OS.

Keep writing more and pm me next time :) :)

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Thanks Too EVERYONE that read my OS and loved it!!!I'm coming up with another one soon so ill sen d pm to everyone this time promise! I really apprecite your comments and likes they really encouraged me...thats why im writing another OS!!!!!!!so watch for it!!!

Edited by 8JSmileyFace8J - 12 years ago