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hey m sorry for not replying to your comment as yet, i thought i'll reply tomorrow since i had long day today...but here i go!my comments in green, bold and underlined!@oops I made your day more tiring!. Do have some rest. we can discuss it later on.yes, this was a swayam pov! 😊 and i can very well understand your state...😉and thank you so much for your appreciation 😊my pleasure. The way you wrote it i could connect the present storyline with this. So yes! i liked it.well these are the words by which i described swayams each action...how i could interpret his doings with his current state of mind and the current phase of life he is in...this is how i could see his small little actions, speaking volumes!though as it is a poem, i give full leverage to my reader to interpret it in their understanding and i am blessed to read at least one of you interpret my lines 😊I told you right, I don't know whether you have really thought while writing this but I am here, to share my thoughts. I am glad we are on same boat.a few more of my understanding i will add at the bottom of the post...I will be waiting for that.Look into my eyes babyI'm here...
So true that once sharon looks into swayam's eyes, she knew the next moment he will catch her with her lie. and she doesn't want to look into his eyes. But, Swayam never backs out, he wants give her assurance that he is there for her all the time.i like the way you've pointed out sharons pov here 😊
for me, this is what i saw swayam tell sharon when the eyelock scene was going on...
Yes! the one knows about SwaRon can easily understand this one.
I'm here...
I'll let nothing, nothing at all come between us
Why you scared?
Swayam, now is thinking that Sharon is still sacred of this relationship but little he know is she is suffering from a BIG problem. and individually, she is fighting with it .
again, i really liked how you interpreted this!for me, this is what i saw as a metaphor when swayam removed the hair from sharons side, the hair which was coming between them...Exactly, this was the same scene I was thinking about.when sharon stops him by putting her hand on swayams tummy, for me, swayams pov was sharon is scared and is stopping me, and so, why you scared?This shot for me, gave a different meaning. jitna dor sharon swayam ko dor karna chahti hai usse kahi zyaada swayam ko aapne paas payegi. Swayam thinks iss baar nahi " I will not let you go"we'll dance together
Into our life
Yes baby,
M right behind you, holding you tight
Come with me...
He wants to dance with her for life time but little he know is this dance is what that is stopping sharon to confront about her disease to Swayam. Beautifully written.again, i love how you connected the current situation of sharon, where she cant dance, and she thinks that as she cant dance she and swayam cant be together, as dance binds them...but little does she know that swayam loves 'her' and doesnt love her because she dances..for me, when swayam picked her up in his arms and danced and turned holding her up, up in his arms, he told her that 'I' will carry you with me, through our life...when he holds her from behind while sharon is trapped between the mirror and swayam, swayam says "m right behind you, holding you tight"Beautifully said.i want to now give a scene by scene connect to the poetry i wrote...will add that after the poem in the 1st comment box...will await your comment again after i do that...Jaldi karo. I will be waiting for that.
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