I'm not gonna let you go (swaron) Video added - Page 2

Originally posted by: blithe

One more beautiful piece of work on SwaRon. I loved it. For now, I will reserve it.Sorry megha, you have to wait little more time to read my comment. I know, you must be impatient to read the feedback of your work but I hope you will be satisfied after reading it.

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Okay now, I apologise, it took me time to unreserve this comment , I hope you understand the reason. Anyways, I liked your work megha. I don't know, what you really thought while writing this but I am here to share my thoughts after reading this. the whole thing is written from Swayam's point of view and you penned it beautifully.

yes, this was a swayam pov! 😊 and i can very well understand your state...😉

and thank you so much for your appreciation 😊

well these are the words by which i described swayams each action...how i could interpret his doings with his current state of mind and the current phase of life he is in...this is how i could see his small little actions, speaking volumes!

though as it is a poem, i give full leverage to my reader to interpret it in their understanding and i am blessed to read at least one of you interpret my lines 😊

a few more of my understanding i will add at the bottom of the post...

These lines actually say the present state of SwaRon.

I'm not letting you go,

I'm not gonna let you go is what Swayam's actions spoke today.

yes! they indeed do...i could see swayam speak these words every god time he pulled sharon towards himself and he did not, just did not let her go...

Look into my eyes baby

I'm here...

So true that once sharon looks into swayam's eyes, she knew the next moment he will catch her with her lie. and she doesn't want to look into his eyes. But, Swayam never backs out, he wants give her assurance that he is there for her all the time.

i like the way you've pointed out sharons pov here 😊

for me, this is what i saw swayam tell sharon when the eyelock scene was going on...

I'm here...

I'll let nothing, nothing at all come between us

Why you scared?

Swayam, now is thinking that Sharon is still sacred of this relationship but little he know is she is suffering from a BIG problem. and individually, she is fighting with it .

again, i really liked how you interpreted this!

for me, this is what i saw as a metaphor when swayam removed the hair from sharons side, the hair which was coming between them...

when sharon stops him by putting her hand on swayams tummy, for me, swayams pov was sharon is scared and is stopping me, and so, why you scared?

we'll dance together

Into our life

Yes baby,

M right behind you, holding you tight

Come with me...

He wants to dance with her for life time but little he know is this dance is what that is stopping sharon to confront about her disease to Swayam. Beautifully written.

again, i love how you connected the current situation of sharon, where she cant dance, and she thinks that as she cant dance she and swayam cant be together, as dance binds them...but little does she know that swayam loves 'her' and doesnt love her because she dances..

for me, when swayam picked her up in his arms and danced and turned holding her up, up in his arms, he told her that 'I' will carry you with me, through our life...

when he holds her from behind while sharon is trapped between the mirror and swayam, swayam says "m right behind you, holding you tight"