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718075

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Suni1986
it was amazing os
swayam knows her more than herself
he want stand with her, in each nd every problem

Thank you so much!!

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Good to see a os from you after soo long...:)
Amazing os
Simple n cute n it is the speciality of ur works they r always simple but still it have the essence of real swaron whom I fell in love with
Loved it

Thanks a lot this means a lot..

Originally posted by: sanstina
Awesome Os 😊

Thank you!!!

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
Amazing OS! :D

Thanks a lot

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice to see you back Sree 😊 nicely penned down..i am not following D3 that much but yes i do have an idea that this is pretty much based on the current track since the new sharon has asthma. Well for me Sharon, SwaRon and D3 is over but i do read SS, OS and FF and can only picture Sneha and Shantanu as SwaRon. Thnx for the PM..it was really good to read stuff written by you.

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718075

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shaani2209
Holding on...sorry for being late
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Tinky pehle toh jhappi lele🤗🤗🤗🤗
Thankkk Youuu Sooo much for writing and dedicating it to me :)
It feels nice to read a write-up from you :))
coming to the OS
it was really a nicely penned one tinky ..
liked how Sharon dances coz she missed dancing n then Swayam comes to know about her asthma...
i loved Swayam saying ""Its not that you can't dance anymore, its just now. Can I dance for you till you can dance once again?"
giving her hope and being there for her, yet not offending her in anyway...
ones again thanks for writing tinky...hope to read more of your write-ups soon :)
blessed be :)

You were not late..

Shaani Di.. Badi Jhappi 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
You are welcome Di..
Thank you so much for liking it.. I'll try my best to write a few more..

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718075

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha
it was awesome os .i enjoyed it .ya its really a second chance to swayam .thanx for writing os on swaron

Thank you so much

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718075

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: meevee
Its very special to read this OS from u Sree - a welcum one too...nothing to soothe the nerves with sumthing so hopeful - touchwood 😊

Meera 🤗
Thank you sooo much..

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718075

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: AmRiTa_S
Nice to see you back Sree 😊 nicely penned down..i am not following D3 that much but yes i do have an idea that this is pretty much based on the current track since the new sharon has asthma. Well for me Sharon, SwaRon and D3 is over but i do read SS, OS and FF and can only picture Sneha and Shantanu as SwaRon. Thnx for the PM..it was really good to read stuff written by you.

Amu Di🤗
i'm not following D3 too much either.. I'm glad you liked it.. Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my work.. :)

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Phosphenes

@Phosphenes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Oh my, you're real good. Really really good. This is exactly Swayam and Sharon and how they would behave and what they would say. And there's a certain amount of tehzeeb and romance in the way Swayam asks Sharon, "Can I dance for you till you can dance again?" Thats exactly how polite Swayam is and how he would say that to Sharon. And he doesn't even need an answer from her because he already knows. He knows she loves him and finally the dam broke and she let it out, or should i say she let him in. :)

This is a really beautiful piece on SwaRon, something which does not come by often these days. Extremely beautiful and lyrical ending, I say.

You please write more. I am waiting to read more of your work. :)

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

WOW...i wish..i just wish CVs will go through this beautiful piece once...they will get a clear idea ..how to handle the SWARON essence ...why Swaronians love them like mad ...becoz they are dreamy...they are heavenly..they can challenge destiny ...they have the power to change fate...only i wish they were handled well...

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Wow now that was such a graceful os...😊
how i wish they showed in d3 also like this...if d3 need to really back up, then palki needs to atleast have a glance over all these wonderful works here...
trust me...i loved this piece of work...and glad that i did see this...😊
sharon's pain was so visible throughout the story...and loved the way u started the update from sharon's pov...it was just beautifully penned down...
and yeah my favorite was when swayam happened to know about her asthma problem and he helping her to face dance...
"can i dance for u till u dance once again??" oh man this dialogue was the catchy one in ur update...u carried the essence of swaron in the whole story...and i really loved it...awesome...👏

Love,
binju

Edited by binuja_ - 12 years ago

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Tooba

@maliha_khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Awsome sreee.. It was soo heart touchng i wish i soo wish k D3 mei b aisa hi ho... Waise m hopng k durng indiafest swayam ko sach pata chal hi jayega...