Revival (Swaron OS) :) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Savage

Loveliest Shalini,

I might be worn out and outta practice for commenting on write-ups but here's a little information, I haven't read such a smooth piece of writing in a while now. I wasn't halted once and did not object anything I was reading. Furthermore, I see how you've woven your select simple words into someone's very intricately strong willpower. That someone will and can only be Sharon to us, as far as fiction goes. Therefore this story does not have anything to do with the original characters but as their admirer, you've kept the essence intact. And not everybody can do that. I cannot either, because the essence for now is lost to me. So, I dun write. So, you writing is all the more a reason to be inspired and subject you to my rather scratchy appreciation.

Forgive me but I thought the opening of the OS was like Bella regaining consciousness after being turned into a vampire. 😆 Eventually the prose became much more substance, though. And I will cherish it as the first thing I read this year. 😳

And I won't say more because I'd get more chances as you'll be continuing this one. I insist. (:

Thanks for the PM, Nikita. (:

Kanks

Originally posted by: lyfisbeautiful

@ Beula.. Thank you so much for such detailed feedback.. Its one tremendous feeling to see that a reader went through the same experience that i did while writing. Not surprised though cos i wrote sharon and ur one of the biggest sharon fan this forum has seen!😳 your comment here has made me the happiest.. Thank you so much!!! n as far as ur reserved post is concernd i hv no idea whr it disappeared!!😆 May be u reserved at some other post n thot it ws fr this one all this while!!😛 haha new year wishes!!🤗