Revival (Swaron OS) :) - Page 3

Originally posted by: lyfisbeautiful

She tried to think. She could not remember if she had told the doctor her name when he asked her. Worse, she could not remember her name.

Rey's voice spoke again, " It will kill him."

Swayam is there all along ...i can feel him as well

Her palms clenched into fists on the bed-sheet beneath them. She forced her eyelids against her eyes as if threatening them to show her a vision, a glimpse from her past. Threat didn't work. She tried to calm her mind. A few heavy and deep breathes later she tried again. This time it was a gentle persuasion. She patiently waited for her mind to create a picture and provide her a key to her own life or whoever's she was about to shatter. But no vision came.

The hustle bustle around her bed increased, the floor screeched as furniture was being shifted to make room for the visitor. She realized that she had no time. Every moment that passed was precious. Any moment now she could be asked to open her eyes. Will her eyes be able to provide a hint of recognition to the hopeful ones that will meet them? She could hear the clock in the hospital ward clicking. Angst, confusion and disappointment clouded her mind. No.. no she could not give up. Her friend had played his part. The doctors had done their's. Now it was her turn to work at her own revival. She felt as if she owed this to someone.

Sharon more than her vision is trying to get her past back into mind and her efforts that she can only do it now or never is really painful...once she opens her eyes she knows she cannot get back that environment to connect to her past...right naa???? i have taken it in this way as well...her every emotion was adding to her spirit to get back into the past...beautifully put shalini

"It will kill him". Rey's voice boomed inside her. It pierced her heart daring the vision to play out in her mind's eye. Until now she was begging her mind to allow her a glimpse of the past but now she knew what she could not bear to see in future. She could not bear to see this person dying. Perhaps this was the incentive she needed.

at red one...sharon's range of feelings ...👏

She felt a pair of hands close on her waist.

She lay still, fearing that any movement might hinder the recollection. Her clenched fists did not let go of the bedsheet. The desire to learn about the past had been outdriven by the desperation to dodge the painful future.

The moon hung high silhouetting the edges of the platform they stood on.

She realised that she was wrong from the beginning. Her heart had a mind of its own and it was this mind that needed persuasion. She tried to sooth it by not hurrying herself but waiting for the memory to flow in from whichever part of her traumatic mind it was held hostage to.

His broad shoulders framed in the moonlight while his hands still held on to her waist, as delicately as possible, as if she were a precious piece of fragile crystal.

She knew that this was not a figment of imagination. She felt certain that she had lived this moment. It was still too early to expect her mind to conjure the entire picture but she was not scared anymore. She had unlocked a door to her past.

He pulled her close. She felt his cool breath rush past her face as it leveled with his.

her glimpse of past and Sharon's belief...goosebumps...its beautifully shown

One part of her wanted the embrace to happen. The other feared what would happen when their silhouettes merged into one. The picture stood still. The tables had turned now. The vision was now at her command. It would unfold if she allowed it to. This was her shot. And something told her that this was the only shot she would get. If this failed she would have to lead a life disconnected from her past but if this succeeded she would save two worlds from crumbling down.

the RED one...Shalini i just loved this part...the way you mentioned this part ...SILHOUETTES merging into one and Sharon fearing where it might lead or end👏👏👏...beautiful thought Shalini...i mean if i have to write this abt the picture formation ...dont wanna compare with you as you write immensely beautifully ...but i wud hv taken silhouttes merging as a positive sign but you have gave it as cliffhanger with possiblity of both positive and negative outcome...very deep

She let go of the restraint. The decision seemed to come from a place within her heart where melancholy meets happiness. It could be either way from here.

She crushed into his chest. He tightened his arms around her and whispered in her ear. 'I love you Sharon'.

Her eyes opened in an instant. The door of the hospital ward clicked and she turned towards it as it flung open to reveal the visitor.

Beautifully ended😊 Shalu you shud write more...your thought process is really deep ....

you have shown Sharon the fighter...fighting for her love more than her life...and both swayam and Sharon need each other for each other survival...makes me feel good...Thank you...

And yess You shud continue this part...Please...wud love to read...wanna know swayam and sharon reactions...

hey i did reservd it...