Revival (Swaron OS) :) - Page 2

Originally posted by: D3fication

Okay so firstly, welcome back! 😊

You have a beautiful way of writing. It creates imagery in mind, and the images you made our minds paint were very beautiful ones, to say the least. I absolutely love the narrative of this story. And i dont think anyone has ever written out Sharon's emotions as amazingly, sensitively and accurately as you do. And that is a really commendable feat in itself! So hats off! 😳

I have a feeling that this story was inspired by the recent Delhi incident..maybe not completely and consciously, but yes, i guess that horrible incident has made an impact on all our minds. :(

I love how Sharon tries SO hard to recollect all those familiar memories, his touch, his love. She has had a memory loss but she still subconsciously knows that he is there. She doesn't know who he is, but still cares for him so much. She's in pain, but she WANTS to remember herself, him. Not for herself, but for him. I dont know what to say! I'm just really in love with this story. Please update soon. Which reminds me that you still haven't updated The Gift. Nup, we dont forget awesome pieces like that.

I reallly request you- Please update both of them soon!! And dont leave either incomplete pls. Cant have such amazing stories being left untold.

Originally posted by: Neeti96

Wow this OS was lovely. I really enjoyed reading it.
I love your writing style ..please do continue😊

Originally posted by: marauder

// R E S E R V E D //

Abhi padha nahi hoon but padh kar ke jald hi unreserve karoonga :)

// E D I T E D //

Shalini, I am again left wondering why you don't write often 😳. That would be because i am lazy and you know it. :P jokes apart, i write on impulse and i just didn't feel like writing till now. But i should be writing a great deal more if i seriously wish to improve on it so i really appreciate that stern smile.

I can't tell you how awesomely described , masterly written work is this. Its much more than a simple awesome. As someone said before me the way you write our brain automatically conjure images in our brain. And it starts to feel like we are not just reading but viewing the incidents unfolding before us. And I had told you this before and I would say again no one writes from Sharon's prespective better than you. It is as if you sit in her mind and sees how the proceeding is going there and write exactly like that. And the best bit is your writing takes us too along with you inside in Sharons' mind. For example in this part I am sure every reader would have been the same emotions of anxiety, desperation , basically all those emotions which were running in Sharon's mind along with her. Magnificiently done. Will be waiting for the update when you come back from the holidays after the christmas. Merr Christmas till then.

I am glad you liked this. This was very rushed and i didn't even proof read it before posting but luckily there weren't any major goof ups!! :P Merry christmas and yes pls don't expect any updates before i return. Have fun! :D
P.S - I am still waiting for the alst part of the Gift. Hopefully you will update it too.