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User123

@UserM123

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: lassipriya
it was cute n rpmantic os.. 👏
swayam teasg sharon..n sharon blushg.. ☺️
d letter was beautifully written..

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Gald Youu Liked it. Thank Youu for liking d poem :)

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User123

@UserM123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: kool kanz
dat was so cute n romantic...loved it😊😊😊i loved d words wat swayam wrote for sharon...it was so romantic😊

Thank Youu For liking the Os. And Gald U Liked D Poem :D

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Very beautiful...you showed all the acuteness that SWARON possess in one OS. it was just wonderful and pleasant read...you should try your hand writing you will really do good in it...

Pratik

p.s. hey I am nobody to judge anything it was just an honest opinion that I had while reading this OS.

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Nice first try i must say. The emotions you wanted to convey were easy to reach us readers.

You should keep writing and am sure you will grow as a writer.

Have send you a PM for how to add link to the PM.

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awwee...it was so cute...as some one said k married swaron story is always a treat to read n m completely agree with that person..overall m happy to read it n the same time m angry that u didn't pm me toh plz dont u dare to do such mistake...n seriously it didn't seem that this is ur first stuff...very nice.n do pm me next time.

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Are one more thing I forgot to praise ur poem wala talent seriously it was very short n sweet poem which I have ever like. basically m not that much poemfreak person...but still I like ur poem n trust me I really loved it.

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khandelwalsonal

@khandelwalsonal

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

firstly..claps 4 ur poem.. 👏

it ws really a cute os..married swaron r so cutteee...
grat work..
write mre.. 👏 😳

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

The title kept me hooked! :)

Beautiful OS I must say .. :D

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Yaar it is one of the sweetest OS i have ever read. I love to see swaron married always, coz no human power can part them. It is delighful read them as a married couple. Beautiful work done, loved it and plz continue writing such work.

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User123

@UserM123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: tejukor
Awwee...it was so cute...as some one said k married swaron story is always a treat to read n m completely agree with that person..overall m happy to read it n the same time m angry that u didn't pm me toh plz dont u dare to do such mistake...n seriously it didn't seem that this is ur first stuff...very nice.n do pm me next time.

Thank Youu soo much fore liking it. I Fell so godd when u ppl praise me. Thank Youu loads <3
and next time will surely pm u when i write someething new! Pakka promise <3