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Snowey

@Snowey

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Amy 🤗

This was awesome. The first para was like looking in to mirror for me as i tend to do the same but my thoughts are all on SwaRon 😆 and i wonder why do i get the craziest and best of idea in between my class or when i am breaking my head to figure out some functionality. Coming to the rest, i like how Swayam turns on everything to Sharon and gets his way..and how she takes control. The deal sounded so tempting..Nicely done.

Edited by Sudha-SK - 12 years ago

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Hey Rasmalai...

"Exam Fever" I guess you had taken you exams very seriously and which resulted into Insanse Rasmalai. But I guess exams have such effect on one's mind. You really came up with a mind blowing idea of Showing SwaRon preparing for exams.

One thing really took me by surprise and I really don't believe that sharon would do that. I mean Sharon and love poetry ahahahahha only you could have thought that Amy... Anyways I don't know this love shit makes you do things which you never thought of doing.

But the way you showed Swayam entering in Sharon's place and Sharon wishing swayam to be there was really nicely thought out portion and i really enjoyed that. And than naughtyness took away the kiss mixed with Sharon's anger cute expressions and first time I saw sharon took the initiative and brought swayam close and started the kiss first so it was fun to read.

Then the Idea to study was also very nicely thought out. But I guess ye idea jinke pass sharon jaisi girlfriend ho unke liye hi helpful hai yar. And besides mere jaisa insan to itni beautiful girl ke sath padai to bilkul hi nahi karna chaega ahhahah...Agar ye aise Idea's work karne lage to trust me lovers will top the university charts ahahahah because unse zyada book ki knowledge kisiko nahin hogi...

Well all in all a very nice cute and sweet OS loved reading it...Thanks for PM...Do write more...

Pratik

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Amrita, it turned out to be an awesome OS dear. You managed to keep the SwaRon flavour intact throughout the plot. I loved how Sharon switches on her diva mode and takes charge of the situation. The closing lines were nicely done and it was truly a fun-filled read.

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muskan

@LoveShantannu

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Super cute os with a sweet concept 'exam fever'. I liked the os alot there sweet cute romance sessions in between. The way swayam irritated sharon i loved it. Nice attemt girl.

And sharon writting poetry for swayam that was a surprise. And sharon kissed swayam OMG for the first time she took some initiative aur sidha kiss kardi

Do write more..

Edited by LoveShantannu - 12 years ago

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Aww...that was a cute OS! 😊

Ooo..Swayam is always there for his diva. 😃

Nice deal Sharon. I'm sure Swayam willl answer everything correctly. 😛

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Superrr Sweet os😃

Thanks for the dedication😉😆

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

amazing one...loved it...typical swayam and sharon...

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Amy tu ek aur OS likk dal plzzz, missing swaron so much.

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..gone..

@..gone..

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Hey amrita..You really are a very gud writer.👏👏...It was totally swaronilicious.😳😳...Nysh..😛😉.!! Yeh padke mujhe laga ki aapko bhi swayam jaisi koi cutesi bf he.😳😳...Sach batao..sharmao mat😳😆😆...you hav one na ???😆😆😆...M also havin ma' exams diz week...Hete exams..🤢🤢!! Pray for me ppl!!😛

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

wow..!! lovely Os if this will be the result of exams m 2 into it..😉
😛 juzz joking..!!
Fabulous Os yaar..!! i loved it...!!
2 gud..!!😳👏

Wid love...❤️
Anandita

Edited by anandita - 12 years ago