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Posted: 12 years ago
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To all D3 members,


D3 was such a beautiful story.. A story of a girl having a dream to become one of the fines dancer' and revolving it you created a beautiful story for 11 more characters.. And yes each and every character was involved' cause of their love and passion towards DANCE... There love stories were there cause of DANCE, their friendship was made cause of DANCE..

the story was really nice.. it had all that was required for a perfect story, DANCE DOSTI AN DIL.. all were balanced and even all the characters were balanced..

You agree it or but after kriya's character got ended.. the show was crippled cause she was really the central character holding the strings of ALL CHARACTERS.. yes even of the other main character (rey swayam and sharon).. cause their individual identity was related and maintained cause of her.. and even the relationships of friendship and love were maintained..


I'm not here to say how good kriya's character was.. NO ' I'm saying all this cause I want to tell you how beautifully the story was created. And now the whole story of D3 has become confusing.. no individual identity of the character nor any relationship is being justified..


In short D3 is now a total MESS'


I can write a whole book on what and where things went wrong in D3.. But I won't cause you all would have read the posts that were made telling you what went wrong.. 😛 and I'll not repeat it again..


But still you are not completely to be blamed for this mess, 2 leading ladies left, distorting the story of D3.. they have their reasons I know but still the story is to be changs according to the present situations.. and after kriya's character ended the story of D3 has lost his foundation..


I was going to give you some suggestions to improve the show' But the story is messed so much cause of no strong foundation that I can only suggest to take a season break or to end college life and start a new story revolving their life outside college..


I know you all are working really hard to save the grace of D3.. but who said to continue with the same old story?.. End the college life after dance league.. On a happy note, then start a new life of their revolving society and parents.. By this you can again restore the unique qualities of the characters..


By this you can show


  1. Hardships as individual to make dance as there career:- how hard it is to make one's name in a field like dancing.. pressure for society, parent , money shortage, competition with other amazing dancers..
  2. change in the friendship when people move out of there college life :- they sometimes get jealous, feels like a failure seeing their friends succeed, sometimes friends don't get time to meet each other.. there fun life of college getting end.
  3. Relationship with their parents :- like you can show amar's parent want him to become a chef at there hotel and can't afford to give fees for dance class, same with bharat being a mechanic.. cause he has no money' neha forced to get married cause her parents orthodox behavior.. rinni simmi lost cause they don't understand what they want to be in future.. etc
  4. Reality shows:- people participating in reality shows.. and their life there.. you can ask from kuwart amar for these details he was participant of DID then alsiha was of JDJ.. you have brought some new dancers in the show in dance camp.. use their dancing talent also..

You have dancers all around you need to take inspiration from their story only.. Cause it not easy to become dancer and they all know it cause they all have lived being a dancer.. take kuwars story of teaching and then entering DID, story of shancedon's SSDC, priyanka and vintis group, samentha' group and then amar's group.. alisha's DID and JDJ experience..

common you have so many dancer.. Don't copy but atleast you can get and idea about the society and parents reaction..


The show needs a new foundation.. cause really the story of D3 is now confusing and hotch potch.. and it can only be rectified by building a new foundation.. I know it's hard.. but atleast it's worth giving a try..

Hope you come up with some plans ASAP.. I love this show who used to inspire people , showed a new meaning of love and friendship with such amazing character's.. And now I can't see this show getting ruined..


Please work on the story..


I wish if people have more suggestion for the show please write it down..


Regards,

-Shruti'

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked ur topic though I don't agree totally with it...
Kriya's exit was a big loss no doubt but still D3 could move on steady steps without her charcter... in other shows like Madhubala, the story is completely about her and her journy, even the show's name is her name... she is the theme of this show so ending her character means ending the whole show...
Whereas D3's theme was dance not Kriya... K was only the center character to connect all lines and stories... but her exit won't end D3 coz she wasn't the main theme of the show, the theme was the dance which is still there and cvs could build a lot of stories from each dancer/character in the show that keeps D3 still running and likable for it's unique theme "dance"... also, all characters r connected now and her absence won't cut those connections...
Now why D3 is a miss, as per me,... both K & S exits did affect the show but not to that level of making D3 a miss... what made D3 a miss is cv's failure to adjust to both exits... specially K's exit...
There were a potential to utilize her exit in a better way and make the story of KRT sounds realistic and more acceptable... but by cvs mistakes R's character was spoiled... T's character is hard to be connected with...
On the other hand, the aftermath of S exit is still to be seen so I can't say much about this...
I don't think there is a need to shift the story from college... coz it's costly and still there r a lot of aspects to be explored in college dancers' life...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yasri

I liked ur topic though I don't agree totally with it...

Kriya's exit was a big loss no doubt but still D3 could move on steady steps without her charcter... in other shows like Madhubala, the story is completely about her and her journy, even the show's name is her name... she is the theme of this show so ending her character means ending the whole show...
Whereas D3's theme was dance not Kriya... K was only the center character to connect all lines and stories... but her exit won't end D3 coz she wasn't the main theme of the show, the theme was the dance which is still there and cvs could build a lot of stories from each dancer/character in the show that keeps D3 still running and likable for it's unique theme "dance"... also, all characters r connected now and her absence won't cut those connections...
Now why D3 is a miss, as per me,... both K & S exits did affect the show but not to that level of making D3 a miss... what made D3 a miss is cv's failure to adjust to both exits... specially K's exit...
There were a potential to utilize her exit in a better way and make the story of KRT sounds realistic and more acceptable... but by cvs mistakes R's character was spoiled... T's character is hard to be connected with...
On the other hand, the aftermath of S exit is still to be seen so I can't say much about this...
I don't think there is a need to shift the story from college... coz it's costly and still there r a lot of aspects to be explored in college dancers' life...


I get your point also... and also know the thing I mentioned is quiet costly.. and hard to implement .. But then what is the other way out... (and the kriya thing I included are solely my P.O.V. I feel the story of D3 got ruined from the day she left..) and I too know dance was and is the main element of the show that's why said all the things about dance only..

The question is now how can they make a appropriate story? We know what went wrong.. and still what thing are going wrong.. cut then how to make a good story out of it?

And I sugested the end of college life cause this idea was given by palki mam only in shakti leaving video..If they had this plan then why not start working on it now...

and story of D3 according to me is still a huge mess.. I wish them to stabilize the flow of the story..
Edited by swaron19 - 12 years ago

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