'ArSha- a love tale'(OS)~HBD asma~ pg7 *pls see*

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Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

wow it was awsm..
luvd it...
it looks so so so real...
hope k next part me arsha will be together..
i so wanna see them together again..
once again i would say it was AHmazin..

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Hetal

@hetu29

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wonderfull OS...
I always love reading your works...
They are amazing...
Loved this one a lot...

Awww.. ArSha... 👏
They are always.. amazing...
Everything seemed so real..
Gosh !! Shakti confessed... !!
He dint hugged him back...
She must have misunderstood.. 😭

Hope they become one...
Update 2nd part soon...

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Tanishtha

@JugHo786

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

nams...
really lreally luved ur OS...
their feelings, their confusions, their frustrations... every friggin thing was depicted sooo beautifully!
pm me next part pls..

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

It was just Mind Blowing 😃...

You explained each n every thing perfectly 👏...

Amar ka ek galat step aur Charlie se seedhi 'Engagement' ...

The way Shakti was saying all those things , it seemed really True 👍🏼...

Amar ne ek baar bhi usse rokne ki koshish nahi ki 😒...

Your was Wonderful...

Loved it ❤️...

Waiting to know what happens next 😊.

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Awesome os...
As i had already readed this os, but love to read it again...
Beautifully written...
Ur imagination power is superb...
NO WORDS... Simply outstanding
loved it
thnx for pm

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Madhurya

@maddieee

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

lovely OS... eagerly waiting for the 2nd part...

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Di its was really mind blowing
i just loved it
the way you described everything it was as if I'm watching some movie
plzz next part jaldi update karna..I'm very excited to read further..

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

update sooon

PLZZZ

it was AwesOMe...

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Honestly sayin..
I giv lik vry long comments but after readin dis update.. M actually lacking words..
No doubt u write proficiently..!
D way u addressed kunwar sir's emotions.. I just loved it..
I was lik.. Omg how can someone write such amazingly..

It was mesmerising.. Evry thot was crystal clear.. D way u noted evrythng.. Gosh.. I fell in love wid it..
D way u portrayed shakti di is unbelievable..
Here in forum.. I hav seen best of d writers n u really r one among dem..!
I really dun know wht elz to say..
Loved it:)
U hav surely gained a big fan of ur's !!
Waitin fr d nxt part :)