M sorry kritz...:'(...Kriyam os..UPDATED PG 5

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

This seems quite Interesting..Do pm on futurte updates.All the best..

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..Nancy..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

amazing😃

jldi nxt part update kro hume confuse krke bhaag gyi

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swa-ron

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

nice start

all e best 4 e examz

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ananya randhawa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

KriYam the most wonderful friends ever...and reading about KriYam always makes me impatient to read more..this OS is really intriguing as Kriya throwing all of the swayam's gifts to her and also,weaklings loosing footloose cause of swayam makes it really intriguing..

looking forward to the next update..

thanks for the PM.

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enrique305

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awesome OS

loved it

plz update

next part soon

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Nikki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

please pm me when you update and nice start :D

Nikki <3

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Ishana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

~~PART 2~~

Taani-Lekin usse pehle please lets go...

They reach the terrace and saw the door was broken and swayam had gone in...they look in and saw kria was hitting him on his chest...so that he would leave her but no...he dint leave her...he was firm...swayam then slapped her...

The louians noticed another group standing...

Sharon-Guys the best dancing crew of india...rockstars!!!...

Rey-What are they doing here!!!...

Taani-Can you all please wait for awhile!!!...

They stop...

Swayam-Are you mad!!!...

Kria-I hate you...just go to hell...

Swayam-Ohkay!!!...fine!!!..m going to hell bye!!!...

He moved back...he reached the edge of the terrace...kria rolls her eyes but then she saw he was serious...she knew he would fulfill all her wishes...but she dint want this wish to be ful filled..and ran to him...

Kria-Ruko please!!!...

Swayam-I have to fulfill your wish kritz!!!...

Kria saw a knife..she took it...

Kria-Agar ek aur kadam peeche...you'll never ever see me alive...

A girl from the rockstars hits her head...

Swayam stops...

Swayam-Kria they deserve to loose...unhe toh parwa bhi nahi hain tumhaari...so why the hell do you care!!!...anyways i thought ki shayad kuch hojaaye...

Kria-Nahi hua na!!!...they got disqualified...

Swayam-Kritz they won the dance camp...

Kria-Aise nahi jeete na??????...agar tum nahi hote toh jeet jaate??????...sharon and reyaansh ki bhi popularity ya reputation unko jita nahi paati...abhi jeete hain...jab bahar niklenge...tabh dekhna...log unhe kya kuch nahi bolenge...unki jeet unki haar bankar reh jaayegi!!!...

Swayam-I'll make sure it dosent happen...

Kria-Make sure???...you could have made sure ki weaklings na haare!!...

Swayam-M sorry kritz!!!...i dint noe ki things would turn out this way!!1...i know your hurt...i know how badly you wanted to rectify your mistake and make them win...but leaving them alone at that time and giving them two totally diffrent dancers would have created a problem for them!!!...voh log haare nahi hain kria...they won the audience and the heart of the judges..i know i dint call you neither did i tell you anything about the fooloose and whats going in the college...m sorry dear i had some problems which i wanted to sort out as soon as possible...m really sorry...you dont wanna forgive me...so dont forgive...you hate me...so hate...you wanna return the gifts...return them...but please dont hurt yourself...i cant live without my bestfriend...

Kria looks down...

Kria-M sorry sam...i over reacted!!!...i am a control freak!!!...you know na..agar mein tumse baat nahi karti toh i dont know what i do!!!...and you werent picking the calls...neither answering my messages...i thought ki your busy with your new friends!!!...and i got angry...and uss baat ka gussa...meine tumpar footloose reason se nikal dia!!!...

Swayam-Gosh...kitna bolti ho tum!!!...and stop crying please...

Kria was crying...he knew the reason...it was thr group...he knew how hurt she was...and decided to make her smile..he starts dancing on...

Kabhi kabhi aditi zindagi mein yuhi koi apna lagta hai,

Kabhi kabhi aditi wo bichad jaaye to ek sapna lagta hai,

Aise mein koi kaise apne aasuon ko behne se roke?

Aur kaise koi soch le everything's gonna be ok?

Kabhi kabhi to lage zindagi mein rahi naa khushi aur naa mazaa,

Kabhi kabhi to lage har din mushkil aur har pal ek sazaa,

Aise mein koi kaise muskuraye, kaise hass de khush hoke?

Aur kaise koi soch le everything gonna be ok?

Soch zara jaane jaa tujhko hum kitna chahte hai,

Rote hai hum bhi agar teri aankhon mein aasu aate hai,

Gaana to aata nahi hai magar phir bhi hum gaate hai,

Ki aditi maan kabhi , kabhi saare jahan mein andhera hota hai,

Lekin raat ke baad hi to savera hota hai..

Kabhi kabhi aditi zindagi mein yuhi koi apna lagta hai,

Kabhi kabhi aditi wo bichad jaaye to ek sapna lagta hai,

Hey aditi hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,

Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..

Tu khush hai to lage ki jahan mein chayee hai khushi,

Sooraj nikle badlon se,aur baaten zindagi,

Sun to zara madhosh hawa tujhse kehne lagi,

Ki aditi wo jo bichadte hai ek naa ek din phir mil jaate,

Aditi, jaane tu ya jaane naa phool phir khil jaate hai..