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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Heyaa guys..!!!
So im back with another OS
umm this OS is dedicated to
Shenz - meri pyaari si shonu. luv yaa. terese baat kiye bina toh mera din nahi beet ta
Kinjal - i neva noe we will be such close friends 🤗
Maggie di - The bestest di eva 🤗
Sweets - meri partner. missing u like hell..!!!! finally u will b back tomorrow..!!! im damn happy re
Tammy - my bestest bro..!!! luv yaa..!!!!
Misha - my partner, my jaan my bestest friend, my everything...!!!! sowwie re maaf kar de...!!!! 😭
Himani - cutie missing u like hell...!!!! 🤗
Neeti di - Kahan ho..??? dis cute lil sis missing u 😭

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Chalo ab OS padho 😳

Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

A SURPRISE

"hey where are u..???"
"tum kahan ho..??"
"kiddo theek se bol na where are u..?"
"exit"
"kk im coming"
"come soon sammy. luv yaa"
"luv yaa too. chal abhi rakh main aata hun"
"okies"
The boy finally reached at the exit n the very first thing he did was he just hugged her very tightly.
"kaisi hai meri kiddo..?"
"mast hun. aap bataaiye jija ji"
the girl replied naughtily.
"bahut bura haal hai mera toh"
"why..??? shona troubling u kya..??? ise toh main nahi chodne waali huh"
"are.. arey chup baith. rale gaadi."
"haaw"
"what haaw.??? chal avi. teri shona ghar pe nahi hogi is waqt."
"ahaa already planned haan...??"
"tere liye kuch bhi. chal ab..."
"aww u r the sweetest bro eva"
"abe oe main tera bhai nahi hun"
"ya ya tum mere bestie ho"
with this she lightly kissed his cheek
"now dats better"
"wo kaisa hai...??"
"ab aayi na line pe"
"sammy"
"bas aaj raat couple party mein teri behen ke saath jaa raha hai"
"what..!!! aur tera kya...??"
"main nahi jaa raha"
"why...??"
"dont have a partner yet"
"ab hai"
"kaun...???"
"main"
"teri tabeyat toh theek hai na..???"
"haan kyun..??"
"nahi mujhe nahi lagta. leave it. lets go.."
with this the boy carried her luggage and both went to the girls home and from their they went to mall for getting a dress for the girl.
*EVENING*
A group of people were sitting together in a party hall. it was a ball dance party organised by one their common friend
"where's swayam...???"
"nil uske paas date nahi hai..!!!"
"haan toh he could have come with taani"
"lekin taani toh shivam ke saath aayi hai"
"rinni leave it na wo ladki paagal hai. god knows wo swayam aur rey ki behen kaise ho sakti hai..!!"
all laughed at this except 2 people. yes they were lousians but they have already finished their college and were busy in their own work.
Finally after some time a boy entered with a girl.
P.s. - all had their masks on.
All were just looking at them as if they had seen a ghost or something.
The boy dressed up in a perfect formal suit and the girl dressed up in a short dress looking damn hawt n sexy.

after entering the girl moved to a place n the boy moved towards lousians.
"hey guys"
"abe oye saale kis ke saath aaya hai tu..??"
"huh apni dost ke saath. kyun???"
"lagta toh kuch aur hai"
"abe dekh na kitni hawt hai"
"shut up nil"
"tu kyun possesive hoing..???"
"meri dost hai"
"haan toh...??"
"toh what she is mah bestest fried"
sharon n rey's jaw dropped listening to this
itni jaldi replace kar diya
both thought at the same tym.
"ok guys now its the time for dance. hit the stage guys"
The hostt said on the mike and all the couples left.
Sharon glared at poor swayam n left.
Swayam too went to the same girl and forward his hand
"wanna have a dance with me kiddo..??"
"how can i let this big opportunity go. mere rey ke saath aayi. aaj ise main bataati hun"
"woops"
"tereko kuch nahi karungi sammy. chill kar"
"phew"
"hehe shall we...??"
"sure"
both of them went and all started to dance
Swayam n dat girl was continuosly talking in b/w
"so we have to make them jealous. no kiddo...??"
"yes we have to."
"ye hui na rai prakaash waali baat"
"arey kriya rai prakaash hun. aise nahi jaane dene waali main shona ko. how dare she."
"meri siren marne waali hai rite...??"
"rite" 😡
he suddenly pushed him and again brought her close. his hands never leaving the contact with her body. sharon was all fuming seeing both of them dancing and that too this close.
"btw track kuch aage bada ya phir abhi bhi wahin ke wahin...??"
"bada naa lekin aaj jhagda ho gaya"
"uffo"
"btw did u did that..??"
"what...?"
"he told me that he is gonna propose u. so did he...??"
kriya blushed and looked down. thid made sharon's blood boil more. she thought swayam complimented her n she blushed coz of that
"i guess its a yes"
"hmm"
"abe oye meri treat kahan hai...??"
"kal dungi pakka..!!!"
n she kissed him on his cheeek. no one noticed it except SHARON...!!!
"plan succesfull"
"huh?"
"dekh sharon not knowing that its me n i kissed on ua cheek. so now she is damn jealous"
"you are too much kiddo"
"thanku thanku"
Both of them were having their gala time
"ok guys lets do 1 thing"
the host announced. all stopped and listened to the host carefully
"so when u all entered u all were given a no. so all look for ua respective partners of the same no."
the host announced and all started to look for their partners
Kriya - Rey
Swayam - Neha
Vicky - Sharon
n other lousians just d same
rey moved towards her and forward his hand
kriya gladly kept her hand hand on his. as soon as she did so he felt as if he knew her.
na he felt its his angel his baatcutter
he smiled n slowly uttered
"Angel...!!!"
"pehchaan bhi liya... not bad mr. singhania"
"ab apni fiance ko pehechaanne mein itna time thodi na lagaaunga"
kriya blushed and both swayed on the music
"btw i luved this surprise"
"but mujhe accha nahi laga"
"what why...??"
"tum shona ke saath kyun aaye"
"umm woh"
"woh kya...??" 😡
"arey mujh par kyun gussa ho rahi ho. wo actually shar aur swayam ki fight hui so she dont wanna go wid him so she asked me to come" 😭
"toh theek hai"
She said smiling. soon the lights went off and rey pulled her out.
"rey kahan le jaa rahe ho..??"
"kyun koi problem hai...??"
"nahi but.."
"chalo bhi..!!!"
he took her out n the whole place was just vacant. she stood leaning to the wall n he trapped her in b/w.
"rey ye aap.."
he kissed on her nape n she moaned. she arched her neck giving him more space enjoying his touch. her hands automatically reached on his back and grabbed a hanful of his hairs. he was just kissing her to the fullest not letting her to stop him. seeing her after a year charged him n he was just doing his work.
after sometime he looked at her as if asking for her permission to which she closed her eyes he kissed her to the infinity. finally both of them back off due to the lack of oxygen. rey rested his forehead on her's.
"I love You"
Both said at the same time n again rey pulled her into a deep and passionate kiss 😳

*Finish*

Phew finally...!!!! so do tell hows it..!!! 😳

Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

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unres

SOLLY!!!!!!!!!!sachi mai maine nahi dekha wo tags... devil rockers mei post dekhi toh mujhe laga ki devils ko karna hai ...

really solly😭

*kaan pakadke*

--------UPDATE-------

what is it???

yahi tha first qsn mera

kuch samaj mei nahi aaya...

the slowly aane laga ki wo kria hai aur

banda swayam hai...

then wo party...

must say i loved the dress...

and hmmm unka jealousy making sequence...

awesome tha...

itna hi jalti hai toh seedha jaake swaym se dance kyun nahi karti...

use bhi chance milega romance karne ka

haha me aur mera gandha dimaag...

and coming to last...

kya bolu...

KRIYAANSH !!!!!!!! KRIYAANSH !!!!!!! KRIYAANSH!!!!!!!!

LOVE IN THE AIR!!!!!! (swayam style)

hawa mei pyaar ki jaadoo...

apne pyaar se ek saal door rakha rey ko???😡

aww my poor baby!!!!

finally apna tym aachuka hai...

fiance?????

eeepppss!!!!!!!!☺️

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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can call me Mrs Enrique Iglesias

@enrique

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

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unes

it was mindblowing k darling

i loved it to core

it was some thing similar to my ss i felt sorry i dnt ment to compare

but this is just perfect for an os 😳

i am in loved with they both more after reading this 😉

and they wat sharon gets jealous is superb😡

finally i loved it to core ⭐️

hats of to ur writing again

Edited by enrique - 13 years ago

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Beautiful_King

@Beautiful_King

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

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unres

nice concept

liked it much...

Edited by sachiarsha - 13 years ago

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Hetal

@hetu29

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Wonderful Os !!
Luved it ! 😳

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Malvaika

@Malvaika

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved the surprise. the kiddo thing. thnx fr pm. awesum OS.

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome os..
Loved it
kha se start karu... 😕
Mujhe start me samaj gaya ki ye kriyam hai.. There convo was superb...
Kria was jealous just bcoz rey went to the party with sharon.. Loved it
sharon ko itni jealous ho rahi hai toh siddha jaake swayam ke saath dance kyu nahi karti..
Kriyaansh are best couple...
Bechara rey apne pyar se ek saal dur tha.. Aww
but now they are finally together...
Keep writing
Thnx for pm