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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Hey Himani - it was beautiful ...these thoughts ke Sharon really needs to know the value of Swayam's luv for her thru the eyes of a girl who falls for him ...had been going on in my mind for sumtime and hence I culd fully relate to ur finale...it made wonderful reading and I really felt gud in my heart after reading it ...thanx for that 😊

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Himani ok now i am just awstruck after reading this...i am feeling short of words to explain exectly how much i liked this part...

sharon was just perfect in everything she did...what you wanted to convey each and every emotion of sharon got to me...perfectly...

swayam was outstandingly described...take all the applause for describing swayam...because really being a girl it is very difficult to display a boy's perfect emotion at that stage specially of person like swayam who is just not expressive at all...you did a fab job there...

everything here was just too much perfect...story very well crafter both parts...swayam and sharon bang on...rest of the gang playing their part perfectly...what left ya the confession moment out of the world...so pure and so true was the confession full of love...

so this sums up one the best os i read on this forum...hats-off...keep writing many more...

thanks for pm...

regards

pratik...

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

hayeee em in dreamland after reading it...just awesum...a beautiful piece of writing😊

i can read it again nd again nd again

superb!!!!!😉

sorry for late commenting yeh slow net ufff

regardx

sweetcherry

Edited by sweetcherry95 - 13 years ago

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

RES RES RES RES!!!!

IM SUPER SORRY FOR BEING THE LATE READER OF THIS OS!!
but i will Unres VERY SOON!
not now..
BUT SOON..
my Promise!
an Agent will never Break its promise! :D
Especially, once made to a close friend!

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Himani never got the PM for the first update 😡

Anyhow..coming to the update loved the entire OS, starting from the regular Sharon not understanding Swayam and this time he taking a stronger stand, loved how you moved the plot further with a twist with Sneha. Glad that finally Sharon realizes his love for her and the same feelings she has for him.

P.S - next time Pm nahi kiya tho dekhna 😡

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paro1311

@paro1311

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

heyy nice update 😊

i've always thought sharon would realise swayam's value wen someone else points it out tis way.

"uska yahan mera haath thaam k khade hone se jyada jaruri hai, uska yahan mere dil mai hona, meri dhadkan ki tarah...aur wo yahan hai"... just loved that part so much.

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: -Jum-RulzZ-
RES RES RES RES!!!!

IM SUPER SORRY FOR BEING THE LATE READER OF THIS OS!!
but i will Unres VERY SOON!
not now..
BUT SOON..
my Promise!
an Agent will never Break its promise! :D
Especially, once made to a close friend!

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its ok dear...
i knw u r busy...coz exams...
love you dear!!!

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
Himani never got the PM for the first update😡
Anyhow..coming to the update loved the entire OS, starting from the regular Sharon not understanding Swayam and this time he taking a stronger stand, loved how you moved the plot further with a twist with Sneha. Glad that finally Sharon realizes his love for her and the same feelings she has for him.
P.S - next time Pm nahi kiya tho dekhna😡

i did pmed you dear...
sorry if you hvnt received!!!
next time se aisa nahi hoga!!!

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Seriously this was one of the best OS I ever read and especially the one with some of the best dialogues ever. I seriously loved - 'love is not just a word...for me its a commitment...' &'Sneha uska yahan mera haath thaam k khade hone se jyada jaruri hai, uska yahan mere dil mai hona, meri dhadkan ki tarah...aur wo yahan hai'. These were some of the best lines I ever read in any SwaRon OS. Nicely done scenes. Whether it was Swayam's outburst infront of the girls or the final scene in which he says he only loved Sharon. Just perfect. Swayam's pain and hurt side was awesomely done but so was his love for Sharon. Loved this OS.