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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Hey Himani...i was waiting for this update...& i just loved it ...Swayam's pain was evident ...he loves her ...still he is ignoring her as he is hurt becoz of her behavior ...sneha's entry was nice touch...i loved the way she described Swayam...and sharon's reaction...
"why always this happens to her...why he made him so damn perfact...why...why.."

Swayam loosing temper in front of the girls was nicely described...loved the pain and intensity u showed in their relationship...loved the way he confessed...

"i love someone...and will always love her...she is the sole coz for my life..."

"Love u and like u "part was a nice touch in the end...lovely OS...keep writing 😊😊😊

Edited by dips098 - 13 years ago

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

I loved how Swayam lost his cool for a moment in front of the girls !! Bringing in Sneha was a fun touch !! It was nice to see Sharon going up to Swayam to try and comfort him during the dance camp but he was hurt badly !! The end was really sweet with Swayam confessing that he'll always love only her and AWWHH at end bit where he teases her with the AND I LIKE YOU !!

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Awesome update himani !!

beautifully written.

swayams dialogues were fantastic.

perfect ending to a perfect os :D

totally loved the whole os .

keep them coming ...

thanks for the PM.

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Himani 🤗 fab update.. for a moment i was like what the hell sneha is doing...but then swayam's diag 👏 aww end main swaron hug superb😃

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Nehal92
Himani🤗fab update.. for a moment i was like what the hell sneha is doing...but then swayam's diag👏aww end main swaron hug superb😃

mam...apna res...unres kab kar rahi ho...